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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

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one thing that's hard to believe, looking at the cover picture, is that Trixie has two reflections in her eyes from the season 6 finale onwards instead of always having one like she had before :/

I love stories like this. You should write a sequel that shows Starlight and Trixie's relationship growing and do include Moonrise, SHE IS INTENSE!

Gonna read this later.

Before I read this, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

I need more... I'm the kinda person that is patient for great stories... I will be patient...

Before I read this, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

8120964 The dark and gore is for the nature of one chapter....and it is for torture and death.

Why is mom so accepting of the fact that Trixie killed somepony!?

8176328 Moonrise is a unique character and she is so accepting because she is glad that her daughter did what it took to secure Starlight's love.

If Flurry Heart breaking the Crystal Heart isn't common knowledge and Trixie had never meet Sunburst before, how did Trixie know Sunburst lived there? I'd think that would come up if Starlight ever brought up her trip to the Crystal Empire, which she probably didn't if Trixie had to be told about the Crystal Heart and Sunburst's involvement here and now.

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She is accepting because Trixie is her favorite and if her killing Sunburst means she can get what she wants, she is happy about it.

This is how you get away with murder.

Sunburst's a bit OOC. I don't think he'd try to force Starlight to kiss her.

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I opted to have him try and get a kiss out of desperation.

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That makes sense but how come you hate Sunburst?

10660654

He is annoying and I will be 100% honest, I always had my concerns that the writers would hook them up....and I despise that ship more than any other. Sunburst is pretty much a fun character for me to kill off, in another story, I had him and Flash Sentry hook up briefly (after both were shot down by the mares they were crushing on) but then Flash feared getting kicked out of the guard so he dumped Sunburst but then Sunburst killed him before dying in a careless accident.

Awesome, crazy, and funny at the same time. In other words good story:twilightsmile:

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Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

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