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Leave your headcanons at the door.

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In The Fault in Our Cutie Marks, the Cutie Mark Crusaders make Gabby an honourary Crusader at the end of the episode, and give her a couple of emblems.

What if Scootaloo had come up with one last idea to get Gabby her actual Cutie Mark?

NOT a cop-out solution or Deus ex machina. Credit to R5h for the title.

Day 5 of my Self-Imposed 28 Fics in 28 Days Challenge

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Comments ( 14 )

Great use of canon! It's always great when authors manage to use canon to their advantage. :twilightsheepish:

Great ending, not a copout at all, and - if I may say so - even better than the actual episode! Friendship manages again to do the impossible!

Nicely done. This was a fun read! :twilightsmile:

Sweet story, I loved how she got to keep her cutie mark even after she changed back, I wonder what this one Reviewer called "Silver Quill" over on Youtube would think of a griffin having a cutie mark, sure he's a hippogryph, part griffin and part pony, but still a griffin with a cutie mark would be cool to see in the show.

Very great story, interesting and cute, good job.

This was so adorable!!! I feel all fuzzy inside!!

Gabby is the 2nd cutest thing in MLP, with Flurry Heart being the first. :twilightsmile:

Actually does make sense, more sense than I was giving it credit for at the start. Cute Idea I like it.

I half expected her to become a hippogrpgh upon changing back, but this was nice regardless.

There are a few places where you could stand to have some excess verbiage cleaned up, but overall the editing is really clean for writing a fic a day. Nice work!

You've also managed to strike the same tone of manic enthusiasm and youthful vigor that the episode did. It was a cute read.

Yes very nice idea indeed. Cutie mark sticking after the change is adorable too. Plus Twi enthusiasm was charming

Adorable! You nailed Gabby’s voice in this. A really fun alternate way it could have gone. :pinkiesmile:

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