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RenaissanceBrony


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As the only Cutie Mark Crusader in Ponyville who hasn't had Princess Luna visit her in her dreams, Apple Bloom decides its time to try her own hoof at it to see if she can't do a better job.

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Liked what I read so far. A bit busy at the moment but will finish other half tomorrow. Have a like in the meantime. Hopefully a fav tomorrow. <3

This was downright enjoyable, have a :pinkiesmile:

4146151 Wow, you really think so? :twilightblush: Thank you so much!

Here, you can have this :pinkiehappy:!

4146019 Yay! Thank you for even starting it! I'm glad you think it's interesting enough to finish. :twilightsheepish:

I'd love to know what you think of it once your finished! :twilightsmile:

That was pretty good. Thanks!

That was rather nice. The ending was nice but didn't seem fully complete, and missed a good opportunity for a nice gag with Spike at the end. It was as good an Apple Bloom episode all things considered really. I'll doubt the show could of done better.

Really did feel like I found an entertaining gem here. Well written for being an EQD prompt. Still rather annoyed there was no Twilight Time prompt. But they are what they are. You certainly got the characters done, and Spike...poor guy never gets a break.

Have my fav. This story deserves that and more.

4147464 I absolutely agree with you about the ending. I finally got to it at like 3 in the morning and I really didn't know what to do. I just sorta wimped out and wrote whatever came to mind. :applejackunsure:

I'm actually sort of surprised that most people seem to be liking it. The whole time I was writing I just felt like the story was boring. Nice comments like yours help me feel a lot better about it, though! Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for the fave, and thanks for reading! :twilightsmile:

What would Scootaloo's dream have been?? :derpyderp2:

Anyway, this is an interesting concept, and I like it! :pinkiesmile:

4912695 That's a secret only Scootaloo ( and and probably Princess Luna ) will ever know. :raritywink:

I'm glad you liked this story! Thanks for commenting! :pinkiehappy:

4914674 Dang...XD :P

You're welcome! :)

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