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Yoshi89


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Spike has put on some weight after a slow week at the library, so much that Rarity refuses to take him gem hunting. Things go from bad to worse when Twilight puts him on a diet and he realizes how much he'll miss eating gems and his favorite fattening foods. The Cutie Mark Crusaders see this as an opportunity to earn their personal trainer cutie marks and put Spike on an exercise program in hopes that they'll get him back in shape.

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Hilarious. :rainbowlaugh: Good job. I hope it becomes popular enough.

That ending !

:twilightoops::raritywink::moustache::pinkiehappy: Too good and fattening !

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Spike was doing Twilight a favor. :moustache: You have to give him credit.

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Thanks again. :rainbowwild:

My fat ass can relate. FAVED :pinkiehappy:


I didn't get the girl, now I'm knock off Allen Poe except with sweets instead of heroin. :raritydespair:

:facehoof: No, just...no.

The lesson: Screw exercise. Be fat and happy.

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Best moral ever. :moustache:

I hope it was made as a comic. :)

Well if we weren't supposed to eat so much, why does it feel so good?

a little funny, but the moral was HORRIBLE. except for the CMC when they said: "we should take care of our bodies before we take care of others." that was good.

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Spike's ending never really was intended to be a moral (with the exception of Rarity tells him to love himself before he pigged out). The CMC's part was meant to be played straight, however.

Haha very amusing read

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