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Yoshi89


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At a slumber party hosted by Twilight, Rainbow Dash suggests playing a game she and Fluttershy grew up playing. Twilight thinks it will be fun until Pinkie Pie designates her to be "it" first...

Takes place in Season 1, sometime after "Look Before You Sleep"

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Comments ( 22 )

Wot. He. Buck. I. Might. Have. To. Die. Now.

This was cutesy and fun:twilightsmile:
Here, have a like.

1. good,cute, short story.
2. In my opinion, the comedy tag was used...liberally. Yeah it had some giggles but the story wasn't...or rather...didn't seem to have the purpose of humor. Just a cute , slice of life story. Just my humble opinion.
3. nevertheless, I enjoyed it thoroughly

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Over a story? Ok...

Where'd Spike go after they dressed him up?

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I appreciate it. :twilightsmile: I put in the comedy tag because of the slapstick with Twilight. There are moments but it's indicative.

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He ran to Twilight's room and hid under her bed to stay for the rest of the night. He'll probably do the same on the next sleepover.:raritywink:

The only bone I have to pic with this story is the part with spike; I don't find that funny because I know what it is like. If anything, it is hilariously un-funny. My two older sisters would do that to me at least three times a week, once if I was lucky. Let me tell ya' right now... it sucks...

Other then that, I loved the story! Great job!

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Sorry to hear that. :twilightblush: Having no older sisters, it's too bad I can't relate.

Glad you liked the rest of story, though. :pinkiehappy:

I'm glad to see the mane six have fun, even though Twilight tripped and bumped all over the place. A nice little cute and funny story; now that's the story I like to read.

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I appreciate it. :pinkiehappy: Thanks!

Stories like these are what is best about Fimfiction.

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Thank you so much! :pinkiehappy:

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No problem at all, my new best friend.

Spikey , precious scales are you ok?:raritywink:

I look like a foal:moustache:

Oh you've got the cutest chubby cheeks:duck:

Me cheeks are under my eyes:moustache::raritystarry::twilightoops::pinkiegasp::flutterrage::ajsleepy::rainbowlaugh:

Rarity !:facehoof:

5394997 It was a real good read, Poor ol Spike getting a make over . Spot on funny.

Pretty good. I think it would have been better if it was longer, but good nonetheless.

I did a reading of your story! The cast and I had a lot of fun with it! It’s a cute story! https://youtu.be/q0nfZVMrYLk

This reminded me of a game I used to play called woodchips which is basically blind man buff but with a few extra rules, you have to play on a playground and the person it's starts on the wood chips but other people have to start on the playground equipment and if you on the ground when the person it yells wood chips you become it, sorry if this is Woody I'm dyslexic and using voice to speech so I don't know when to put periods

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