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Journeyman
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Final chapter will be added later today.
I'm just wondering if you're quoting The Wolfman or the Iced Earth song Wolf...
7615098 I'd say the Wolfman
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It's "Howl," by Florence and the Machine.
Additionally, that cover art seems to be rather risque.
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I'm making a five part series based on western movie monsters. I'm staging a contest where if a viewer can correctly guess which movie each story is based on, they get a free monster commission from me as a prize. Click the link for more details if you wish.
7615124 So I was right?
7615121 yep. It is. I have seen a GIF of this particular one somewhere. I think on derpibooru....
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I've edited it. I was on the fence whether it was SFW or not. It doesn't actually show anything explicit, but it is still highly suggestive, and the fimfic rules are so vague and inconsistent at times it's hard to tell what is legal and what's not. I decided to rely more on comment responses than rules, and it has given me a more reliable answer.
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I do have a couple of rules surrounding surrounding that in the link. I won't be saying which guesses are correct and which are not. That is the price of playing a game; you have to play your bet with utter assurity. If i did outright say which guesses are right and which ones are not, then everyone is going to dogpile the comments with the one I've proven to be correct.
For instance, are you talking about The Wolfman(2010), The Wolf Man(1941), or one of The Wolf Man's legion of sequels and spinoffs?
I don't mean offense, but I'm rewarding like-minded individuals who love the movies. The contest is set up with knowledge and research in mind, and random guessing is the antithesis of that. I love these monster movies and I want to encourage people to see them.
I cannot and will not say which guesses are or are not correct until my deadline (November 7th) passes. You are free to play my game, but you have to abide by my rules.
7615160 ah, it's fine. I myself have no clue about all the rules. I myself only know the general things like not being an asshole to people or post/link NSFW pics or vids here.
7615160 I was referring to The Wolfman (1941). I recognize the phrase.
Before I even begin reading ... did that one 'Flutterbat vs Timberjack' fic inspire this, or is the idea of 'Timberjack' wider spread than that and I didn't know?
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I made this all on my own. I hadn't even heard of that fic until after I posted the original draft in my Journal collection.
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I wont say whether you're right or wrong, but I will say that the same quote is given in The Wolfman (2010) version along with the Van Hellsing movie in 2004 starring Hugh Jackman.
I knew it
Yes please do remaster it.
7615407 Wow. So two people, completely independent of each other, both imagined 'Timberjack'. That happened.
...either you're missing the "anthro" or "human" tag, or you slipped away from ponies temporarily.
While it is useful as setting the tone that something might be wrong with Noteworthy, it does not makes sense if they are regular ponies, as it would mean that Applejack wouldn't have any breasts that could be easily stared. Especially if she was facing the pony she was talking to.
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Not quite.
For humans, breast and breasts are synonymous. That's not true for many mammals who have their breast bone facing forward, while having one of more sets of breasts on their stomach or abdomen. Wolves, for instance, have a forward-facing breast bone, vertical instead of horizontal ribs, and have somewhere between eight to ten teats(breasts) depending on the breed. Horses have the same, except two teats(breasts) between their hindlegs.
I wasn't speaking about breasts in this context, only the breastbone. The breast. That is why I left off the 's' and had it remain singular. If I was speaking about breasts/teats, it doesn't make sense to use the singular because having only one be seen is such a horribly pedantic detail that it might as well be excluded in editing.
Is that it it that all?
From the cover art and the "breeding" tag I expected Timberjack to pump Fluttershy full of little puppies
But that didn't happen for some reason 
Your story was well written, with only a few minor typos, but it left me a bit unsatisfied there at the end... I will be looking forward to that 'remastered' version
Yes remastered, if you would be so kind. Loving the story too!
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It might be for the best to change that to "chest" then, since the use of "breast", especially in the context of a clopfic, can be rather confusing.
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Well, well, so far, opinion is swinging towards a remaster of the knotting scene. Bring your friends and bring your wives to browbeat me into submission after the other four stories are up so I'll get around to writing it.
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That would be the same problem. Chest is also synonymous with breast, as well as breasts, in terms of humans. You would have an easier time telling the difference, and perhaps Ink Hoof as well, but law of probability means someone's going to object to me using that word, too. Using breastbone or sternum would solve the issue, but both are far too clinical terms for a scene built on fear and emotion.
Someone is not going to like my terminology no matter what I use. I don't have any trouble distinguishing breast/chest from breasts when speaking about ponies. That's not me saying I think others should just admit I'm right, but it's what I'm comfortable using after my research into pony physiology and bone structure.
It's an issue of conditioned linguistics. Some people of have been carrying over terms, traits, and biology to ponies, and there are cases where creative liberties make this acceptable, i.e., everypony, the phrase "in your hooves", and other idioms. Where it's done wrong was whoever substituted vampire with vampony, and the expletive "fuck" with "buck", both of which send me into fits of spittle and rage (you will certainly not see me using vampony in the inevitable vampire story). Etymological semantic changes are things that are supposed to occur naturally over a period of time; you can't force them. That's why when speaking of asexuals, gender fluids, and transexuals, people cringe away from the pronouns hir and vis. The only gender neutral pronoun to evolve into the english lexicon is the singular they.
People are so accustomed to referring to breast as the place where breasts are because that's all they know. In this case, it's not their fault. Horse biology has been in place for over a thousand years and many people on the site just aren't familiar with it.
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That was something that slipped my notice. The original cut of the questionable bestiality was in the Journal. In that version, Timberjack was extremely aggressive and acted in such a manner that qualified as breeding. Additionally, I wrote another cut of the first draft where there was an additional scene after Fluttershy's first orgasm: she see's Timberjack has some canine "equipment" and puts it to use.
Since I remastered and rewrote most of it to be in line with a certain movie that shall remain nameless (7615560 has to be very careful of Rule 5), I had to change several things. This mostly focused on Fluttershy's actions in response to what would have been a far more aggressive creature than what was seen in the first draft. The only was I could pull it off was for Fluttershy to tame the beast, which as a result negates the breeding tag. Also, I agree that, afterwards, the buildup feels a little... underwhelming.
However, including you, I have received three votes to remaster my original knotting scene, which would count as breeding. I will be focused on developing those four other Monsterverse stories before getting around to that, but I'd say the popular consensus is people want to see Fluttershy filled with some pups.
7617811 Barrel.
I'm inclined to agree with 7615965 . The story doesn't really feel complete. It's more like we reach the clop, and the story abruptly ends without actually reaching a conclusion. While it does build up to the transformation, it doesn't feel like the main plot is resolved.
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If you are referring to the chest debate, the barrel is composed of the abdomen and lower thorax. Both portions, and as a result the barrel, are located on a horse's undercarriage. This does not include the sternum.
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I will contact the gimp to see what may be done.
I love the story it is very interesting to read. I think you should Wright a full story of Timberjack with fluttershy that would be awesome to read great job with the chapter keep up a good work update more soon.
I would enjoy a remaster.
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Give a remaster.
This story has a lot of potential in it. :)
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So mote it be. Opinion is strong enough that I will indeed remaster the knotting scene for this story. In addition to that, I will contact the gimp after Halloween in order to brainstorm some additional material to give the story better closure
7621423 Awesome! Can't wait to see it!
Your a really great writer, Keep it up!
I think it was a great story.
Agreeing with many here, I loved the story, loved the original, and this felt somewhat lacking due to Applejack "lacking" something. And, also as others said... This looks like it builds up greatly, but then it doesn't... End. It feels like we still have 1 or 2 chapters more to go. What happens tomorrow? How will AJ and Fs react to each other after the sex high? Will shy get pregnant? Will AJ stick with her throughout it?(checking one of my most loved lewd series of drawings can easily tell you what's my wish) What will happen in the future of AJ? How will they resolve the murder?
More please
Still following ya. Ya never know when something will come up for great stories like this one
Hope your well!
Don't deny it Dashie, you are addicted to the cider. I think you had better start tapering off.