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Far too rushed. We go from Sherbert meeting Stardance, to them having sex, to him accepting his coming fatherhood with literally no reservations in less than an hour's worth of story-time and about 2,000 words. The writing is decent, but the pacing makes this unworthy of Steve's shelf. I shall give you a like for effort, no favorite.
7238111 even though I want to, I cant really disagree with you that I rushed it a tad. but thank you for the like, it helps a lot!