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this story drills into my mind
Okay, you have me intrested, hopefully we might see more development.
You my good sir has caught my intrest
Thanks to all of you. you're all so nice
4690060 It's suppose to be a pun....
yah I know it's horrible
To people who disliked this: What if I told you it is not a bad story just because it is a Fall of Equestria crossover?
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As awesome it would be to see a big daddy ripout some organs i think would be good idea to add other video game cherecters because as you have shown in the first chapter the big daddy is killable also what would stop him from killing the ponies if they were to come close to the little sister so my suggestion would be to add other video game charecters.
I have a list of charecters for you (this is you story so don't have to listen to me)
1. The Raincoat Killer from deadliy premention
2. Faust from guilty gear
3. Jack and subject delta
4.Jacket from Hotline Miami
5. Jason Brody from Far Cry 3
These are my suggestion (and before ask why don't write these? It's because im more fit for wrighting poems)
Yeah, a Big Daddy is going to kill some caribou ass!!!
4696616 Because Jack and Delta don't have a bonded little girl to look after anymore, I don't even know the other ones
4697367 look them up on youtube but i only suggested them
4698063 I used a normal Big Daddy and Little Sister for obvious reasons
Bubbles smash!
4710517 XD
More killing!!! Please let Mister Bubbles kill more of those fucked up pieces of shit! Also good work on this chapter keep it up.
Please, for the love of all that is decent and right, let that caribou be next.
Also, thank you for writing this. There needs to be more like this.
4713330 Don't worry about it
Wait for the update with in a week
This story looks very promising
Look like the caribou (put glasses on) got his first piercing.
(insert music)
YEEEAAHHH!
Big daddy to the rescue!
A small note to note try to make your next chapter longer. Not saying I don't like this or anything it just to short to enjoy the story. But please keep up the good work!
Also try to use better grammar, because its kinda of hard to read when the grammar is all off the rails. Like putting an upper case letters at the start of a new sentence or when to put a comma. I not saying this bad or anything I like the way you written it. It just needs better grammar is all.
4744967 WTF Word you had one job
4744992 What?
4745227 I was typing this onto word
also some of them are direct quotes
4746820 Oh, still lost.
No one fucks with bubbles and lives
4748347
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At the end, i imagined the drill going: rev. Rev. REVVVVV.
I was hoping the Big Daddy drill his ass or his balls.
4756528 Just wanted a chance to put in that little "Booker's Death" thing
He should be glad it was just a Big Daddy, a Big Sister wouldn't have been as merciful.
4907102 hmmmmm...
IDEA!!!
4909239 Should I start feeling sorry for the Caribou now?
4909517 Hmmmm... Nah
4909517
Eenope...
more
Okay shove it up your ass you goddamn weak protagonist lover.
All i can say is: No one mess with
Another chapter please comrade also well done with the story
Oh shit!
He got the Burial at sea treatment.
4744858
......
Cari-booooo!!!
More? (God I need more Bioshock! I'm writing two MLP/Bioshock crossovers and still need more!)
Is this going to update? I liked it. Except for the grammar mistakes. Otherwise its great.
I hope you continue this story.
Is this story going to be continued or is it dead or canceled?
Daddy was definitely mad and you're about to be sorry.
hay continue it
hay continue this story I want to see more chapters
more please.
Yeahhhh!