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What happens to a human when they die? Do you ascend to Heaven where you will live without worry? Or are you sent to Hell where you must suffer for the sins you committed while alive. Or maybe your reincarnated into an animal. Well no one really knows, if we did their would be no need for so many ideas of what happens.

For the mercenary Angelus Sombra, he also wondered what would happen to him. He sure as hell wasn't a good man, but he did some good deeds in his years. But like most things in life, things didnt go as planned. Instead of letting him find out what happens to those who pass on, He is instead sent to a world that is unknown to him. A world who's problems are going to be his own. Now he must try to find a way home while trying to blend in with the locals who can somehow use magic and fly. But with the sudden "changes" that he got to his body, that might not be a hard as he thought. But at least he won't be doing it alone, as the biggest problem that this world has is stuck in his head and is constantly trying to take over his body to "claim what's rightfully his".

"All you have to do is submit shadow. Once you do, we can rule a kingdom of our own."

"For the last time. FUCK OFF!"

(Warning: Humanized ponies)

(Cover art from Mr Tech.)

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February 25, 2021: thank you all so much for enjoying my story.
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Chapters (13)
Comments ( 57 )

this is good so far, and I can't wait to read more of it. :pinkiehappy:

can't wait for the update.:twilightsmile:

Please continue

I really enjoy this, please continue.

Before I read this, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

8164351 the only only thing that I'm can say without spoiling to much is his first kill and flash back

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And how bad does it get ?

8164484 some people dying in very unnecessary ways

Dragon-Dragonborn 

And His Name Was Dovahkiin, Dragonborn.
Fus Ro Dah!

This chapter needs some editing

Some grammar and spelling errors.

Thanks for the chapter, this is pretty cool.

I usually try to avoid stories where they have the evil voice / spirit living inside the main character, but this seems to be done fairly well I am curious if it's actually sombra the shadow mage or rather just the negative side of himself.

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Comment posted by Radnie deleted Oct 21st, 2019

Can't wait for the next chapter

Absolute Badass MC because of prior experience detected.

I will enjoy the story. 😁😈

Can't wait for next chapter i need to know what happens next🤯🤯🤯

༎ຶ‿༎ຶ••• my life has a meaning now

'Who in the world is the Shadow Mage?' I thought, before shutting my eyes and letting sleep take over.

Hmm...you?

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You and me both(༎ຶ ෴ ༎ຶ)

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Thanks for the support

hope this updates soon

Hey. I can tell this doesn't get updated often, but I cannot wait until the next chapter is released. This has grasped my interest and I really want to see where it goes. Keep up the good work!

Yay, we have cover art! Please update this soon. I'm excited to see what happens. I must admit, it would be pretty funny if the Mane 6, the CMC and Spike all just started bombarding Sombra with questions or something like that. Now, the only problem is, what does King Sombra think of all this?

Is this going anywhere? I know you may be working on other things in life along with the chaos of covid but I've come to enjoy this story so much that I've contemplated digging up my old art practices I had to drop do too toxic friends trying to get free art.

Yesssss, my plannn isssssss workinnnnnnggg...
Oh please. Every time you try and take over the world, it fails.

Good chapter, Lupus. I'm interested to see where this goes.

Intriguing, Imma track this and see where it goes

Wait, so the real Sombra take over Cristal Empire at the age of 15?

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No, he was a grown man when he attacked.

I can see the next chapter will cover the conversation with twilight doing her never ending survey with her friends will shooting questions left and right

Hoo boy, what did she just do? This could make things interesting.

"Well, I wanted to make sure that we could track him incase he actually didnt show up. You know, so we could see if he's the real Sombra or just a teen with a similar name." The others nodded along, so I continued. "So when when we decided a time, I decided, just to be safe, i would make sure there would be a way to find him if he didnt show."

"Twilight," Spike said, warily. "You didn't."

"So i gave him a parchment that would mark the next person it touches with a tracker spell."

"Oh my goodness." Spike groaned when I finished, and I my face flushed pink again.

"I just wanted to be sure, besides, I can remove whenever I want." I explained once again, I looked to the girls. "Come on, you can berate me later, let's just figure out what we're going to say."

I just thought how Twilight's trial would look with Spike or Celestia trying to save her XD

I hate how equestrian do things like invading privacy and don't think it's wrong

Hoo boy. Here come the Sisters.

yes! you got featured again! 3/31/21 :yay:

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It would be funny if they will get their asses kicked by someone new like him.

"Hey Twilight who are these two amateurs laying over there that tried to attack me without saying a word?" :trollestia:

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Oh, her face! I can imagine that! :rainbowlaugh:
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Nice. This story needs more attention.

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Thanks for letting me know, I'll have to update my description.

I looked ahead and saw four children; one boy, and two girls.

I think he has F- on math on school.

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Man, I never even noticed, I'll have to fix it.

Hey this was pretty good I hope to see more chapters soon

Secret's out. Now I wonder what Sombra's going to end up doing with his powers...

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Celestria and Luna bullshits with a reason why he can't teach himself

“That is what can happen if Angelus loses control of his magic, or tries to teach himself.

These are 2 different scenarios,not the same thing .
There is a result of self-defense .

2.

“I suppose that I did speak like that about him. I apologise for that, I didn’t mean to make it seem like I was only interested in his magic.

But you are

3.

“I just think that the irony in this situation is funny.” he smirked at her, snickering at Luna's questioning gaze. “Well I was thinking that had that been me in the same situation, magic going out of control and injuring people, I wouldn’t even get a word out before I was locked up. But when someone is important enough, they get off scot free.”

Three names Starlight Glimmer, Luna, Stygian and they got the same treatment.
But if someone can't be used or manipulated by them they lock them up

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I just hope Angelus will just say fuck this to these rules and manipulation and do things on his own.
Create a copy of the book with magic,etc

Will there be a explanation on the difference between Umbral, Shadow and Dark magic? What I understand so far is:

Umbral: special illusion like magic that only the umbrum race can use.

Shadow: like Umbral but normal people (ponys?) can use it, identical to Umbral???
Less powerful version of Umbral???

Dark: evil, corrupting magic that can be used to enhance Umbral and shadow magic. Can it only be used to enhance? Can it be used on its own?

Is the dark magic effect (black/purple bubble horn, eye smoke) actually what Umbral/shadow magic looks like? Or is that what their corrupted versions look like? What dose dark magic look like? Or do all three (four) just look identical?

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There will be a better explanation later, but this chapter is saying that Umbral mages have control of the shadows and have power to make people see their greatest fears in their head. Everyone has both, but one can be stronger than the other depending on the person.

Sombra's magic is the same amd was very stong, but it was tainted by dark magic. It's not what his people wanted their magic to become.

Again, there will be better explanations soon.

About ten minutes of walking, and a few late walkers and some gaurds giving me questioning looks. I had found a bridge that had been a top a small river.

I don't kow how you are about spelling but gaurds should be guards.

Can't wait for more
If sticks with main six I don't see Sombra taking over

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And gor you get a F- in spelling

I shivered, remembering the time when Sombra the Shadow Mage nearly took over the Crystal Empire. It was terrifying to think just how strong one mage could be if given enough power. And that door door we had opened the door that had revealed to me my greatest fear. If Twilight hadn't snapped me out of that trance, I probably would have got down on my knees and begged the fake to let me stay.
Double words

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