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She's looking at you. Yes you. And she is judging you with her eyes. There is no escape.

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There is not a fic similar to this?



Based on the downvotes already, I'm guessing that some clueless individuals probably think this is about blank flanks.

7467774 Nope, 'cause it wouldn't have that special "kudzu" flair; unless it was written by kudzu, himself, in which case: don't care, good story= good read.

Phwoooah, more of this please.

I'm drawing a blank.

7467783 I found it... Sorry. I knew that there was another story called "Blank" but the argument is not the same.

And don't worry, Haters are going to hate. Even if they put a downvote without reading.

Well this is interesting. I have absolutely no clue what to think of this though. I noticed it's a part of the Weed world. But then again I really should not worry to much about this. You are an excellent author. One who clearly knows what he is doing. So I will just have to wait and see.


so a female draconequus that came from nowhere and is for some reason vulenrable to iron.\........ huh.


Nope. Not a draconequus.

It is a Fae?
Nice start anyway.

7467904 has the features of one. mismatched libms and all. shrugs


But she isn't a draconequus. She is a tiufel spawn. That's Ye Olden Germanic. It means demon.

7467999 hmm.
also i lookd up that term and all i am getting is images from Spawn XD

7467904 demons and the fae are classically averse to iron.

Once this hits 5 chapters, I'll start reading. Looks like it's gonna be really good though.

i got a few books im reading atm but i'll read this one when i can. :pinkiehappy:

This intrigues me.

Please continue.

Very interesting, but I think it is the author's note made me even more interested. :derpytongue2:

This was...interesting? I don't know what to think about it. It was good to say the least. I don't think I've ever read anything like this before... :unsuresweetie:

The first chapter made me dubious, but this one really picked my interest.
Good work. :twilightsmile:

A good chapter.:pinkiehappy:
You sir/madam have peaked my interest.
I hope to see more.:pinkiesmile:

Tiufel spawn.

"Devil spawn," from German. Sounds about right with her previous visions of being among Lovecraftian horrors in another dimension.

... and she's some sort of chimeric thing like Discord.

Harmed by iron. Interesting. Is she the equivalent of some sort of Unseelie Sidhe?

But, it is the reason you are still alive… the reason why I didn’t carve the still beating heart out of your chest and crush it between two iron plates

I guess that would be a good way to make something that could regenerate but was averse to iron die the True Death ... When I first read this I thought Cool and Unusual Punishment, but it makes sense as a way of dealing with what she seems to be.

Malcanus strikes me as a way cool character.

7467986 wild fairy. Almost all supernatural creatures have some fer of iron because it is a "Pure" material. Just pulled from the earth. Same with salt.

My interest is piqued, but you might want to consider a name change to the story. There's another story by the same name.

7468224 and ghosts. The unholy cannot deal with pure materials. All three of those are also weak to Salt. A handful of thrown salt disrupts a ghost and salting and burning is how to get rid of an infestation. They are not allowed to cross salt lined placed across openings like windows and doors.

First you had my curiosity now you have my attention.

Ooooooh interesting...

7468919 Salt isn't pure. It's a compound. Even if you consider a block of nothing but sodium chloride to be pure, such a crystal would be impossible due to thermodynamic limitations. Additionally table salt is often a mix of sodium chloride and potassium chloride (so the manufacturer can list the sodium content as lower) so a line of salt would be totally ineffective against an entity that has issues with pure materials.

Better equine erotica than equine necro-sadism.

I think I'll continue watching this. It doesn't seem like your usual weed world fare, but I'm interested in seeing where it goes.


Wrong definition of purity. Don't think chemistry, think superstition.


Aw, come on, who doesn't love beating a dead horse?

Interesting, interesting indeed. I like it.

I’m one of the few ponies that know what those are. “I’ve battled

There's either a sentence missing or an exclamation mark too much.

7469335 it is a pure material in the way as it is pulled directly from the ground and not really manufactured in any major war. Hence why rock salt is used in most cases.


BLANK never loses.

I just discovered this story this morning, and you already have me hooked! The concept of this is very interesting, and it's very well written. You've earned a new follower, and I'm watching this story, too. Great job! :twilightsmile:

I love that anime!!!! :raritystarry:

What if I told you that not all mysteries can be solved...

I would tell you that you're an arse and that I want this mystery solved as quickly as possible, damn it! :derpytongue2:

Yeah... For a second there I thought it was stolen from the other story. Plot is different though so, okay. Probably not gonna read it cause of the same name thing(Gonna mess up my tracking shelf.)

A very interesting creation. I'm used to the 'normal' protagonist view of your characters, but this is incredibly well described. Keep up the good work!

7468903 Oh hai!


That profile picture all the while shows your predicament. :twilightsmile:

Very interested in seeing what comes next. :twilightsheepish:

Excellent chapter, her development towards sentience is really interesting, great work. :twilightsmile:

7469830 Kinda looks like Spike is "feeling empathy" with our tiufel spawn. :twilightsheepish:

I am loving every chapter of this :pinkiehappy:
I like this new creature you've created and the general setting.
Thank you for writing and sharing :pinkiesmile:

Freckle Speckle is obviously special to Malcanus. The protagonist is very lucky that she didn't kill her.


All ponies are special to Malcanus. Even the ones he doesn't like. He's a Shepherd.


I see. Is this little community located on the outskirts of the present-day Crystal Empire, hard by the Frozen Waste? It's obvious that Malcanus is there to be the backbone of their protection.


It's a little more than that. He has troubles living around... other ponies. He battled monsters a little too long and became something else. He's not there because he wants to be there, he's there because he was ordered to be there.

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