I just discovered this story this morning, and you already have me hooked! The concept of this is very interesting, and it's very well written. You've earned a new follower, and I'm watching this story, too. Great job!
7467783 7467826 Yeah... For a second there I thought it was stolen from the other story. Plot is different though so, okay. Probably not gonna read it cause of the same name thing(Gonna mess up my tracking shelf.)
A very interesting creation. I'm used to the 'normal' protagonist view of your characters, but this is incredibly well described. Keep up the good work!
I see. Is this little community located on the outskirts of the present-day Crystal Empire, hard by the Frozen Waste? It's obvious that Malcanus is there to be the backbone of their protection.
It's a little more than that. He has troubles living around... other ponies. He battled monsters a little too long and became something else. He's not there because he wants to be there, he's there because he was ordered to be there.
I have a severe addiction to this story. I'm going to need more doses of these chapters to cure myself. Seriously, I adore how you pulled off describing the 'everything is new' viewpoint.
wow, this is certainly a departure from the usual stuff. I can't wait to find out more about Blank's background and how Cadence is going to handle her.
Even with great effort to try and mimic Malcanus’ speech, she was able to form words.
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“The gate to Elysium is down there as well. I’ve looked upon it. It is a thing of exquisite beauty. I work hard to maintain the sanctity of my soul as one day, I hope to pass through it. It is why I choose ? be a shepherd.”
While I like it, I'm a bit sad that she understand far faster than I thought it would happen.
I mean I always hope for a few chapters, where the main Char is acting more like an animal or at least not understanding normal stuff for a few chapters, before they start to get better.
She seems to be able to understand the words without really seeing something that could make her understand it. (However that is not really a problem to me right now).
BLANK never loses.
I just discovered this story this morning, and you already have me hooked! The concept of this is very interesting, and it's very well written. You've earned a new follower, and I'm watching this story, too. Great job!
I love that anime!!!!
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I would tell you that you're an arse and that I want this mystery solved as quickly as possible, damn it!
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Yeah... For a second there I thought it was stolen from the other story. Plot is different though so, okay. Probably not gonna read it cause of the same name thing(Gonna mess up my tracking shelf.)
A very interesting creation. I'm used to the 'normal' protagonist view of your characters, but this is incredibly well described. Keep up the good work!
7468903 Oh hai!
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That profile picture all the while shows your predicament.
Very interested in seeing what comes next.
Excellent chapter, her development towards sentience is really interesting, great work.
7469830 Kinda looks like Spike is "feeling empathy" with our tiufel spawn.
I am loving every chapter of this
I like this new creature you've created and the general setting.
Thank you for writing and sharing
Freckle Speckle is obviously special to Malcanus. The protagonist is very lucky that she didn't kill her.
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All ponies are special to Malcanus. Even the ones he doesn't like. He's a Shepherd.
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I see. Is this little community located on the outskirts of the present-day Crystal Empire, hard by the Frozen Waste? It's obvious that Malcanus is there to be the backbone of their protection.
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It's a little more than that. He has troubles living around... other ponies. He battled monsters a little too long and became something else. He's not there because he wants to be there, he's there because he was ordered to be there.
That was weirdly fascinating and fascinatingly weird.
I'm so following it!
I have a severe addiction to this story. I'm going to need more doses of these chapters to cure myself.
Seriously, I adore how you pulled off describing the 'everything is new' viewpoint.
Is mature for language..?
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Oh gosh, yep. This creature is by all means one of the most adorable things in this world. Yep. No doubt about it. Now come give me a snuggle sweetie.
That's some good shit right there.
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I'll allow it.
7471660 ... KILL IT WITH FIRE!
wow, this is certainly a departure from the usual stuff. I can't wait to find out more about Blank's background and how Cadence is going to handle her.
...this story is surprisingly immersive. Have a
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While I like it, I'm a bit sad that she understand far faster than I thought it would happen.
I mean I always hope for a few chapters, where the main Char is acting more like an animal or at least not understanding normal stuff for a few chapters, before they start to get better.
She seems to be able to understand the words without really seeing something that could make her understand it. (However that is not really a problem to me right now).
"if you repay my kindness with agression"