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ShadowblazeCR


As a writer you ask yourself to dream while you're awake. As an editor you ask yourself how to change a story while leaving it the same.

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Octavia is losing her classical mojo, causing her producer to try somewhat of a last ditch effort and pair her with a composer of a different kind of music. She later finds out that they too are losing their motivation, but also something a little more important.


Featured 7/10/21

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 41 )

Just saw this posted. Will read later.

I'm hype for this , definetly going to check back soon.

So far I'm thinking this would be about 4/5 spikes honestly 4.5/5 but half spikes sprites don't exist

waitin on more man!! love it so far! also, the cover pic you used is great!! i feel like there's actual emotion in the cover picture...

Whoever edited this sucks more than a vacuum cleaner! :flutterrage:

This is the first octovia and vinyl ship I have read. I enjoyed it greatly. As for why it would be the interactions between the characters. It felt real and simple, not over the top.

hhhmmmm I guess it is more or less important to me how Vinyl's behavior is in this story. I have nothing against her part behavior, but sometimes it feels overdone to me.

Anyway it looks good enough so far.

I always really enjoy stories that make use of Trixie this way. I've always seen her as making all her gadgets,fireworks, ect myself. So to see her as the technician for their company makes me very happy ^_^

OMG Loving the story!! Keep up the great writing!!:pinkiehappy:

lol loving it. looking forward to more :D

Lmao awesome, I look forward to the shananagins those two will pull during such a festive event

Another good chapter shadow :D. Keep it up.

short but sweet. i like it.

Good so far, interested with what's coming next:twilightsmile:

“It's the boobs isn't it? I personally think they're the best things that were ever made, like, how can you not want to feel boobs? It's just a bonus to have them, really.” Vinyl moved around said breasts with her hands.

This line.

Story doing good so far, keep it up!

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The idea of a slumber party, or sleepover, exited Octavia.

Probably should be "excited".

How can ANYONE not know what pancakes are??? They're not a regional thing, like grits! ... are they?

There are some parts of this story that seem nonsensical. Honestly, how hard is it to read over what you write before posting it on the internet for the whole world to see?

Octavia is learning about how to do the one thing she apparently wasn't allowed to do: be a kid.

Ahh, the obligatory blanket fort!

Boobs ARE awesome, but for me, the D is just so... gross.

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Still hasn't been fixed. I think the numerous errors in this story are here to stay.

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Um, what? Vinyl knows what pancakes are, she just couldn't read the menu.

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Might I ask what parts are nonsensical? I'd rather not just be told something of mine is nonsensisical without proper explanation.

I've missed this story , it's so nice to see it again

Awesome can't wait for the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

Lyra drove her over and she left her bag in the car. That was ostensibly the reason for the sleepover.

Hey it's 2018 calling. We want more of this story. I'm invested in this and think you should continue.

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I've got a chapter saved up, I'll try posting some stuff after Finals.

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That's fine I get it was just giving you a hard time. Though I am happy to here there is more to come. Thanks.

I love your writing style, and look forward to any updates

nice, an update

a update? nice!

I love this chapter, its beautiful. Oh I am so happy that this story is still being worked on.

Awww I loved this Chapter and their blooming relationship

Really enjoying this keep up the good work!

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