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This actually looks very interesting and intriguing I shall place this into my favorites and place a 'Like' onto it.
"Harms Way has a new Sunset fic? Woohoo!"
*reads summary and sees warnings*
"Um... I'm good. Hope others like it."
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Thank you, my friend.
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Thank you for being honest. I'm not expecting this story to be well received due to the concept, but the idea behind it has been floating around in my mind for too long.
I hope you enjoy the next story that comes out. Which most likely will be the next story in the "Erotica Girls" series.
Good to see back and going my friend.
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Thank you.
8157404 If you don't mind me asking when will a new Erotic Girl or a new chapter for A New Beginning Be Up?
8157406 Generally too vanilla for me when I'm looking for a clopfic. You've got your fetishes (or not), I've got mine.
Damn. That was hot.
8157382 You are most welcome I look forward to reading this tomorrow after I get another chapter written for my own story.
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I'm thumbing up this comment because, yeah, why are we in the midst of another wave of fetish heavy fics? I'm not going to read this (sorry Harm), cuz vore kinda turns my stomach.
If other people get something positive out of this, more power to you, you enjoy the every living fuck out of this fic!
But this fetishocolypse of clopfics makes me want to write more happy non-fetish erotica just to fight the tide.
Well Twilight, I shall give you an answer by paraphrasing a TV show's theme song. "If you're wondering how she eats and breathes, and other science facts, just repeat to yourself 'It's just a fic, I should really just relax.".
Man, I hope that potion works for things going out as well as it does for things going in. Ouch.
I'm not usually big on vore, but that last line was hilarious!
Not a MLP: Erotica Girls fic.
I am disappoint.
While i'm not into vore myself. I was quite an interesting read. Great job. :)
8157388 Could you possibly give us a few hints as to who's gonna be in this new Erotica series? Wait! let me guess, its gonna be the side characters like: Lyra,Octavia,Minuette,Moondancer, etc. Am i correct?
8157465 I'll vore you so hard you won't know which way is butt
So I read this while eating.
I'm not sure what I can say about it other than it did what it set out to do because vore isn't my thing at all.
Kudos to you for publishing what you wanted despite possible negative feedback.
Now that was interesting to read
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I always know which way is butt. In fact, here's a image of me showing off my mastery of the ol' cornhole.
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8158413 fuzzy
I can't
I just can't anymore
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Here's who'll be in the next "Erotica Girls" story.
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8158492 You have peacked my interest good sir, do go on.
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How is Sunset doing it? Er, how are either one of them breathing? (Don't get your filthy science in my fiction you pleabian!)
I did chuckle at the last line too. But if Sunset's like gum now, when necessary, I don't see why Twilight couldn't get back either direction. She still should take a decent shower or two anyway. That and she'll be as wrinkly as a prune from marinating in whatever she's sitting in.
Oh, and Twilight being the nerdy scientist she is will probably try to take notes next time. Sunset should be wary if Twilight's caught buying waterproofed equipment... Just sayin'...
very nicely done for your first vore story! I would have liked a bit more focus on jsut how bloated sunset's belly is with twi curled up inside, but still very enjoyable!
Hope you make a sequel to where Twilight turns into a tentacle monster to satisfy Sunset's fetish
Twilight's into vore, Sunset's into tentacles... Possible hint at a sequel involving the tatzlwyrm? Or better, a tatzlpony??
That was pretty good. Maybe you can make a sequel where Twilight(s) and Sunset take turns being tatzlwurms and having their way with each other?
Interesting.
I would like it much better if it was fatal, but it’s interesting.
Would it be too much to hope for a fatal alternate ending?
Question, what would happen had she not drinked the anti digestion potion, and not that they have these abilities, are they going to do this on a regular basis, and will Sunset eat someone that didnt drink the ad potion
Very late to this story, but just wanted to say I loved it. There can never be too much Sunset pred. I like how this is actually not far off from potential canon, with the only necessary assumption being a magic potion able to do this.
And like the previous comment said, I love the implication that fatal vore would have been entirely possible. Though I think non fatal works better in this story.
And as a full tour fan, the last line was perfect.
Otherwise, it’s just in general written well.
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Thank you very much!
Please for the Love of FAUST make a sequel to this story, maybe the rest of the Human Mane 6 are also into Vore and want to try it with Sunset.
Hello, I just read your story and I really liked it, I'm not a person who likes vore, but this story has been very good, will there be a sequel?
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I've been considering a sequel for this. But haven't fully decided on it yet. Glad you enjoyed the story though.
Thanks for your answer, I hope you do, because I really liked it
FInally someone who made a good vore story
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.