Sunset Shimmer Eats Twilight Sparkle

MSunset Shimmer Shits Out Twilight Sparkle
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Sunset Shimmer Shits Out Twilight Sparkle
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Zman537

Zman537 #1 · Sep 17th, 2015 · · ·

I'm upvoting for the sheer absurdity of this story alone.
That, and I enjoyed reading it. Good job.

Architect Ironturtle

Architect Ironturtle #2 · Sep 17th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I have a special shelf for stories like this.

Amethyst Blade

Amethyst Blade #3 · Sep 17th, 2015 · 4 · ·

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ScarletRibbon

ScarletRibbon #4 · Sep 17th, 2015 · · ·

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As do I.

Sir Crabington

Sir Crabington #5 · Oct 17th, 2015 · · ·

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Well, I knew exactly what I was getting into, I just expected... well, something else I guess. I came here knowing this was vore (the poor description, and low quality picture point that out.), I just expected something better I guess. It just seems to be made to lead up to this picture, and just kinda stops at the end.

I maybe should have actually explained that in my comment, but I was feeling bored that day, and couldn't deliver.

Commander Jenna Cipher

Commander Jenna Cipher #6 · Oct 28th, 2015 · · ·

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Welcome to the internet, you must be new here.

Commander Jenna Cipher

Commander Jenna Cipher #7 · Oct 28th, 2015 · · ·

I enjoyed it, however, it's incredibly short and feels like it's over almost as soon as it begins, you could have drawn out the actual vore scene and showed Sunset enjoying her victory afterward as she digests her prey. As well as at least addressing the consequences of this event, as when Twilight never returns home, someone will likely come looking for her sooner or later.

Don't get me wrong, it's still a great vore story, it just could've been done a tiny bit differently, that's all.

Gale Singer

Gale Singer #8 · Nov 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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I'm pretty sure you were given fair warning. This is a story about Sunset Shimmer eating Twilight Sparkle. No, not eating her out, just eating her. Past the lips and over the gums, and I forgot the rest of the rhyme. If you're wondering why this exists, I would have to refer you to rule 34: If it exists, there is porn for it.

Comment posted by Sir Crabington deleted Nov 3rd, 2015

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