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Not much to say. Go with shy....that works best....
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8.5K in one day, dang I couldn’t do that.
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More of a 3 days writing really. did about 2.5k~ on each walked away next day reread what I did and picked up where I left off. Going over errors again before sending it off once more.
only about 800 could really be ignored if people don't want much background info on the ponies or yacht I placed them on.
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Your effort shall never go unnoticed my friend, and great schedule indeed.
interesting though you dont need so much exposition a lot of stories don't even have any but rather the story itself is self-standing er (it stand by itself)
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It’s feels wrong without all the details honestly. I know I dragged a lot of the beginning out which isn’t what I wanted, but it happened anyways.
Most story’s of Vore I like alittle setup before it happens even if that’s what the majority prefer when it’s about this. I separated the chapters because it was to long to read in 1 go. Figure that way if you didn’t want the background info of the ponies an yacht, then you could easily skip it.
Honestly my next story won’t be as long with the set up. May just be small ‘before’ setup then Vore on what happens with the actual story itself. And not as many OC in it like this one had. This was a pain to write mostly on creating a section on each pony that I rewrote a few times to get it to flow better and end faster. Limit of 4 characters max until I figure out a decent setup.
Still have a multi prey story on a summer vacation I want to do. 6 chapters with each going out doing different Vore set ups. A prologue being introductions maybe and a bonus ending chapter possible. But that’s probably about a month out before I set it up... maybe at least.
Good story. There are definitely parts that could stand to be rephrased as they're a little clunky, but this was a fun read. Probably helps that I've got a weakness for orcapones.
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Need to spend sometime to replace a lot of the repeated words I think. Know that “Both” and “meanwhile” was used a lot. Also change perspective multiple times that’s throws a loop to much when something happens then going back some to see another way as it happened.
But yeah love to see more orca pones...only seen 2 types of these story’s that actually have them as preds that I recall. Least any goods ones I think...1 on here and another site (more shark pone though).
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I understand have a few stories I'm still working on even your welcome to bounce ideas off me or even use some of mine if you like
Honest criticism: the grammar needs work, the writing often does a poor job of explaining/describing things and there were a few typos HOWEVER the story is good enough that it's still worth reading even with the mistakes. I really liked it. I wouldn't mind seeing Coral again.
This needs to be animated. I mean it probably never will be but this is literally a perfect scenario to animate.
Also it would have been cool to have had a scene from Jury's POV when Chef was swallowed first
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Well glad you like it even with the errors I didn’t catch. Trying to work on it but life been.. stressful lately.
Did have an idea with Judy play around some but, was feeling this story was getting to long as it was. Still did wanted to play it out some more so maybe all add an extra chapter later or just leave it as it is.
I really would like to use Coral as another character for future story’s though, got a longer story that may feature an actual story once I’m not stressed as much. For now need to finish another guard story before I play with her again
Need more ocean pony vore out there i think lol. Maybe I’ll get the mane 6 meeting her or something...food for thoughts later on at least
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I look forward to the possibilities.