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Not much to say. Go with shy....that works best....
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... That was hot.
10692886
Compared to my previous story I like this one much better. Took the inspiration from a “choose your own adventure” site that had her AV AJ. Didn’t want to rip off that sites work so mixed it up with my own twist. Worked out well I think for the set up. Maybe to long intro? Not sure.
Plan maybe a whale pone now....soon as I can work up maybe 5 OC altogether. Not sure really...
10692933
The opening was fine, building a reasonable explanation for her being there.
By whale-pone, do you mean an actual whale-pony hybrid, or are you using whale as a euphemism for a large pony?
Either way, there is a woefully short supply of significantly smaller ( but not micro) pred fics on here. Also, too few Luna pred fics.
Could you please pm me a link the the CYOA site.
10692945
A whale pony hybrid like the OC Marina is her name I think. Or Tidel Reef being another
The site isn’t all that great using I’ll be honest. But I will say it has about a dozen good story in it. If you find the paths that people created. A lot of them are incomplete or just don’t anywhere. Problem using the site as well having to make an account and still not able to explore the option with it saying to many people online using it.
Go to the outline and some decent ones can be found though. Recommend is some of the Rainbow dash, Zecora, Big Mac, and Pinkie. Those are the ones I recall but some others are decent in there as well. Just don’t expect much from the site really.
Edit: made a space since don’t think having this link is within the rules to open
https://www. writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1860344-My-little-Pony-Friendship-is-Magic-vore
Nice work.
Needs a few edits and commas, but over all it's a really good fic
10692933
I thought I recognized that, if it's from where I'm thinking...not bad at all
10693171
Nothing to bad then at least. Edit of typos or wording though? Plan looking it over later but appreciate the heads up.
Glad it was enjoyable
10693431
If the site is ‘writing’ in the name I’m sure re it is. Lots of good set up if only they been completed.
Glad you like my take on it though
10693495
Yep. I'm actually working up a long story based on one particular thread of its development, believe it or not.
10693550
From that site your own twist on it? Good luck with it. I’ll keep an eye out if I see it
Beside editing this one, Got the first layout in the mass Vore I mention in the A/N at the bottom from this story. 10 OC with 1 pred I’m fleshing out now. Think it’s going end up about 8k~10k words once it’s all written...if all goes well plan releasing in 2 days if work didn’t hold me up.
10693569
Well, good luck!
10692960
I just added to the Luna voring Celestia arc.
This was an interesting read.
Aside from Auto-Correct bullying you and a few grammar mistakes here and there, it's very well-structured. You explain why Derpy is working for Mayor Mare in a satisfying and succinct way, and it does make sense. The set-up is great, and as someone who loves Accidental Vore as much as I do Purposeful Vore, this being accidental makes it 20 times better than it already is. I enjoyed how both Derpy and Mayor were bent on reversing the issue, but Derpy, overcome by the pleasure of it all, finishes what she already started. The rest of the story's really great and I'm excited to see what other Vore works you produce.