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Not much to say. Go with shy....that works best....

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Is it supposed to be marked as Incomplete?

10679436
Yes I plan on multi chapters of different points in her life. Instead making 3 different story's. I just have all of them posted in one.
I just finished another part now going over any editing mistakes and kinda happy with it. 1.8k words almost but debating on adding a sex scene with this or make a separated part of what goes on

10679446
Keep it separated.
That wy it can maintain its appeal to the ones that only read it for the vore, as well as those that still want the dedicated clop in the story.

10679595
Its post vore mostly...since its right after her meal. may just write a scene that's more wholesome weight gain since that's what I plan for him mostly.

She is only luck he is oblivious brick when being hit on, as she knows from experience.

Umm... this started out sounding like it was written as a meme for Doge.

10679892
.....what was I even trying to say? Well redoing that scentence now. Thanks for pointing that out

so that's what happened to them in this timeline I don't think apple bloom will approve

Congratulations, Mrs Cake. You just doomed the world.

10782172
They got rainbow 2.0 that lives with Twilight I’m sure it will be fine

10782173
Sounds cheap.
I prefer the reformation approach.
The one where the body is left with a sort of instinctive fear, but the memories are wiped, but with each following vore it becomes less and less likely to happen.

10782301
True I do like those as well. Actually more then the permanent version. I just didn’t feel like it for this one. But maybe I’ll edit some characters or leave it up for readers to imagine a fatal or reformation ending.

Like Mulberry artwork or stories of that OC are great. Why have the prey once when you can enjoy them multiple times

10782674
Glad to see you're familiar with where I first came across the concept.
Both Mulberry and Withania are excellent for it.

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