• Member Since 7th Feb, 2021
  • offline last seen July 18th

brittanypegasister2008


Hi! My name is Brittany but my nickname is Britt Brat! I'm just a silly 13 year old pegasister with ADHD and Autism! Here's my Yt Channel! https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCqfhBMz6T82JZ90NJv6-BFg

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A young teenage mare falls in love with her rivals neighbor, Bright Mac. But, will their relationship be ruined by their families?
Edit: OMG My Story got featured? Thxs so much!

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Comments ( 11 )

ooh! I like your story
Romeo and Juliet style :pinkiehappy:

Great story and love the ending to

You're welcome

Excellent story keep up the good work and I give this story a 10 out of 100 .
And I'm going to help you make more stores.

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Thank you so much! I really needed some help with my stories!

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Your biggest problem I saw is paragraphs. You have to start a new paragraph anytime a new person is speaking. Also, use a comma after dialogue instead of a period if the speech is followed by a line telling who is speaking.

If I can’t help falling in love with you

Grammar issues aside, it was a cute story with a lot of details taken from the show.

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