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Not much to say. Go with shy....that works best....
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I chose A
The writing here is really good, I feel like you've levelled up!
The character stuff at the start is fun.
My vote is for ending C, personally ^^
10788493
Well thanks for liking it. I honestly don’t think I improved much personally here. Mostly since it’s more “action” then “talking” happening.
But figure this one needs the stone faced captain disciplining his guards. Just finished this tonight and the did quick edit with small tweaks to make sure it flows right. Sure my grammar with punctuation is the main problem still besides storytelling.
I'm not sure which one this would fall under, but maybe a mix of B and C. Cum digestion of Flash, unbirth the other two (one in Cadance and the other in Twilight) then impregnation of one of the two mares wich then reforms Flash with the other two getting released after some time (or age regression).
10788520
Your grammar and punctuation are definitely good here, though!
I choose B
C
I say C
i vote option C
I do really like the idea of more punishment, so A sounds good. But B and C also sound fun.
I'll vote A but really there are no wrong options.
A
C
Definitely C
Voting for B! The other guards are punished enough by being terrified
D
B.
Maybe he tells her to drink, and after tasting the cum she immediately identifies it as former male pegasus. She is exited, since this is one of her favorite drinks.
This will scare the guards (they are pegasi, too), while Shining is simply proud of her.
C
I will say C, only because continuity about Shining caring about his sister too much for some reason we don't know. (Plus, don't think he's married to Cadence yet, as because as soon as he is, he is sent immediately towards the Crystal Empire, so B doesn't seem right to me.)
B or c
All of the above
B
B
all of them in alphabetical order
B
Honestly hoping for an alternative ending where a liquified Pony gets shot from Shiny in to Twi’s womb and makes a rebirthed foal~
10843674
Ditto
10843778
10843674
Well hopefully this ending was still good even if it didn’t have a reborn ending. But think maybe I can try including that for ending D then.
Food for thought on that ending at least.
10843784
Yes