After Sweetie Belle admits that she has a crush on a specific creature, her friends try to think of a way to get them together.
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FNAFBRONY
With a name like that, you aren't expecting anything groundbreaking from a guy who has some sort of weird obsession with three certain fillies. That came out wrong!
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Give more information in your description. Right now there are many stories that match your description so it's not unique in people's eyes.
+1 for Spikibelle. -10 for FNAF
Sweetie wants to be noticed by her sugar dragon.
It's a bit rough and a bit dry, but it IS your first effort. There are some grammar problems--I'd recommend hanging out in one of the groups for new writers, and possibly the "Looking for Prereaders/Editors" groups. Also, read a lot. You can learn more about writing by reading than you can by people trying to tell you how to write.
6926108 Be nice. It's the dude's first try. For a first attempt, it's not that bad.
6928225 Shoo shoo
Thanks everyone for the support. I may not be the best writer in the fandom (not even close!), but I will try to entertain as best I can. Like I said, I'm open to criticism.
Like this story, hope you'll continue it, favorited and followed it.
Love it... a few minor mistakes but I hope you continue.
This may not end well for him.
Downvote for SpikeBelle. I was expecting something more shipable, like PipBelle or RumBelle.
7116070 Alright that just dumb. Sorry but dowvoting something because it not your ship is well dumb it not a good reason. At less say you gave it a try, before disliking it because there other reasons to not like something besides you don't have my ship, worst story ever!
7116615 In my notifications I saw ''A Simple Crusader Crush Sweetie Belle / Romance''. I clicked it and when I found out it's another SpikeBelle story I just felt disappointed and kinda pissed off. And the reason I posted that comment is because I wanted to express my anger.
That's all. I'm not even going to read this story.
What happen to chapter 3?
A gem? So common gift.
She needs to give him something other than gems.
Hearts will break.
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Will the rest of the Main 6 make an appearance or is it just Twilight and Rarity?
7155083 Just Twilight and Rarity. I can't think of a place to put the rest of the Main 6 in.
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Oh, Ok. This story's good by the way, hope it continues.
The gift thing won't work unless it's goes perfect.
Very sweet, a nice little read :)
I just want to add that Twilight is his guardian, not his owner. He's not really a pet...
nice story
Nice and sweet, but quite honestly it's a little too generic for my tastes. As in I can't really tell from the story how the characters themselves are feeling, as far as I know they're not being very emotional. A little more descriptive writing would improve it.
ok look. I'm a freaking Trump guy, and even i hate that part!
It's a nice, sweet story. I didn't have a problem with any of the characters. My only real problem is that I couldn't pick this one out in a line up of spikebelle stories. There's nothing in it that really sets it aside from so many others.
I figured rarity knew about our little drake’s crush
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I didn’t even notice that :(
Dawwww my heart
Daww
NAHH YOU DIDN'T
U forgot the end "