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Mister Phoenix

Since the show over, I'm gone, no more stories from me


This is a Sequel to Mistletoe Kiss with my co-writer Jade Crossroads

Edited by TwilightSparkleBestPony

Spike and Sweetie Belle on Hearth's Warming Eve share a kiss under the mistletoe on the cheek but two don't talk to each other or even look eye to eye. After something happen with the couple over the passed week.

Apple Bloom and Scootaloo set out to try get the young unicorn and drake back together.

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Comments ( 14 )

Maybe Sweetie Belle should invite Spike over for a family dinner.

You haven't even begun taking over my page, so... Good luck with that!:rainbowlaugh: Nice joke though.

6834311 Or have I. :trixieshiftleft: Good luck Jade you need it

This is really cute and sweet, but I couldn't fully appreciate it because of all the grammar errors. Please get a editor or proofreader. This story is too good to not fix the grammar.:duck:

6885595 I know this reply is late but it has been edited if you want to take another look at it :twilightsmile:

6958003 i still noted a few errors...and whatever happened between Twilight and Fluttershy? That was never resolved

7016183 Well the thing with Fluttershy and Twilight is that I was thinking on having Fluttershy have a crush on Twilight, explaining why she didn't mind not getting a present and well Jade and I just wanted to finish the story.

When I first heard Pinkie say Mister Phoenix, I thought she meant Phoenix Wright.

7142162 That was in the first story, Mistletoe Kiss. :derpytongue2:

Sweetie Belle bowed her head and trotted off away with Spike watching her from the window. Wishing that he could just move on, but something always pulling him back to Rarity but what?

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Button mash be heart broken

Looks at what you did to him

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