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Yuri Petrovitch


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One night something crashes into the Apple family orchard, and Applejack ain't gonna let some freaky space alien ruin her family's hard work and get away with it!

Star Citizen/MLP crossover

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 35 )

Ah Star Citizen it will be the best space sim game or it willl be the biggest scam in Game Industry.

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My heart says it's the former, yet my brain tells me it might be the latter.
However, since Squadron 42 got some big names involved like Gary Oldman and Mark Hamill I think they've earned quite a few points of credibility.

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It might be. Hell game might have a great story and lore but game mechanics might sucks a lot.

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Oh, by all means the game WILL have a massive amount of faults. My hope is that they'll dampen them enough so when they do the official "Launch" of the full game, Squadron 42 and the open world, they'll have something fun and enjoyable with only a bearable amount of glitches.

Pacing is terrible. Slow it down a notch.

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Yeah, the pacing is a bit speedy for this chapter; it was kind of intentional because I wanted to throw down a crashing ship as an intro. The next chapter will be much slower and more fleshed out.

Well this is an interesting start. Nothing like in medias res to drop kick a reader right into the middle of things. I knew it was only a matter of time till I stumbled onto a crossover of these two worlds. Looking forward to reading more and seeing what you in store for us. :pinkiehappy: (really need a saluting Dash emote)

Star Citizen

Ah, I was wondering when somebody would make one.

Shoulda gotten a Vanguard. Saw one flying missing both wings and one main thruster. :pinkiehappy:

all im asking is for one thing: please dont make applejack fight with the humans..

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Nah she won't. She may be pissed but she'll help them out. Besides, its not like those guys are in any shape to do anything atm.

6882196 then why is there a gore and dark tag? later on?

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My guess can be summed up in one word: Vanduul.

Yeah, I had a feeling this wouldnt be updated....

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Perhaps the author is busy with life, or other shenanigans happened. Give it time...

7263037 its the 31st of may and this story was published in JANUARY

You get a +1 just for Star Citizen.

Oh, good. A new chapter. I'd love to see where this is going...

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Yeah I bet you would...
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Next chapter will probably be the goriest one since anyone would be extremely lucky to be anything more than chunky stew after crashing into a planet

Way too much intrigue and cliff-hanging for me not to get hooked. I'm shelving this.

And i thought it was dead, good to see it isn't!

Damn it, cliffhanger, I hope the next chapter comes out soon.

Half dead?! Get the D-Fib lets keep it going!!!

MEDIC!!! This story is still alive!

Alright, a star citizen story, now all im waiting for is an Elite Dangerous story....

yay your not dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

woohoo an update!

Will have to re-read the previous chapters again but this sure seems to add a lot to the overall situation based on what I remember. Looking forward to more. :pinkiehappy:

When next AWESOME chapter!? :pinkiehappy:

Elite Dangerous is better



Sorry it was my duty, also nice story

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