Esmeralda Mi Amora was found on the steps of the Crystal Palace by one of the crystal guard. Queen chrysalis left her there to make up for her failed invasion of Equestria. Cadence and Shining armor decides to adopt her.
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I'm not sure if I like this story yet, the into seems kinda lacking, to be honest.
Shining and Cadance seems WAY to accepting to the fact that Chrysalis just dropped her(excuse me here) bastard child on their doors step and just left, without any thing, and they just take her in like its completely normal... especially after she tried to take Cadance's place.
But i'm going to see just where this story is heading.
how does one adopt if one is the birth dad?
5690528 correction one of her bastard children, not sure how many she has but the note makes it seem there's a good deal.
where is the freak out of candence?
i mean, you just saw that your husband has the child of the same person who kidnap you, and replaceyou in order to marry him.
What's this a crossover of?
Wasn't this already done?
5693334 sorry, i was working on another story before i trashed it. i might have forgot to change those
OH come on I was enjoying reading this chapter. Please tell me you are still writing this story
6449826 don't worry, i am. i'm just experiencing writers block and can't figure out how to continue the story. but i am working on it, even if it is at a rate of a sentence every 3-4 hours
6450339 Well I hope that you will find your hidden potential, I will eagerly await for the next chapter
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I will keep that in mind on the next chapter.
Incase no one says it; SHINNING ARMOUR, the test came back... positive, you ARE the father!
7081408 lol. you, my good sir, have just made my day
don't do those kind of jokes there the worst.
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7085671 I realized that the joke wasn't a good idea about 5 minuets after I posted it. but by then it was too late.
Yes I was hopping I find a story were The queen pulls the lawyer card
7392436 lol, im glad u like it.
Sorry it took me a while to reply. Nearest wifi here is a 3 mile walk.
Just my opinion, but for this type of story, the first person thing feels.. off. It's a great and adorable idea, though.