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After the events of the Friendship Games, Twilight Sparkle decided to leave Crystal Prep to attend Canterlot High School. As she finishes packing up her things, she runs into five Shadowbolts that competed in the games with her. They decided to give her a few words before she leaves.
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Fluffy.
I know the song that Lemon was listening.
Nice little story here. That song that Lemon was listening to totally fits her, and ironic considering I found this awhile ago too.
Heh. This is just nice. Sugarcoat showing some form of regret was certainly unexpected.
Wait a minute, Sour hasn't seen her sister since she transferred to CHS?!? That must have been a heck of a bust-up if their parents haven't let them near each other since then!
Nice and cute.
So the reason for the complete wasteland at the end of the season finale was that no one was there to stop Twilight? Could work.
In case people are wondering who Sour Sweet's sister is, this is her:
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Mostly due to how the designs are so similar.
6699145 Perfect
I like this headcanon.
Sometimes I wonder if Lemon Zest thinks that she and Twilight are already besties; she was never mean to Twilight, she just didn't consider the possibility that Twilight likes quiet music.
This is sweet, very nice work. I love Lemon's outburst.
This was really sweet to read. I love how you portrayed them all, though I think they'd have been a bit more hesitant with the Wondercolt/Shadowbolt friendship bridge. I love this story, definite favorite of mine.
Much love,
Pandora
I enjoyed reading this story I hop the Shadowbolts return in the next EG movie
6877750 You and me both Mr. Terumi.
Well lets prey if they reappear in the next EG move.
And while I'm at it feel free to join me and give Principle Cinch a spanking or stomping cause she is on my MLP villains kill list. I would love to see her suffer heheheheheheheh...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!
i loved this. Maybe Sweeten Sour was that girl in the marching band with Rainbow Dash in the opening of the movie.
6880523 Torture method for Cinch #1:
Two sharpened pistons jabbing at the sides of her stomach, tied down so that she can't move.
Torture method for Cinch #2:
Lego shoes.
Torture method for Cinch #3:
Forced to listen to Jacob Sartorius for the rest of her life.
If you don't?t know who that is, just imagine a younger Justin Bieber who is even more of a douche.
Lit
Now don't quote me on this, but I've been thinking about writing a one-shot about the Shadowbolts apologizing to Sci-Twi just like this one, but with greater emphasis on exactly why they treated her the way they did and how Cinch is a toxic influence on her own school. It ends with Sci-Twi convincing them to try and reform Crystal Prep using the lessons on friendship she hopes to pass on to them in the future.
Does that sound like something you would read, or is it too much of a rip-off from your story?
7617605 I actually wouldn't mind seeing that story. I would in fact love to read a story that was inspired off mine.
Just as long as it isn't a complete copy of my own story you're good to go.
7620518 Awesome, thank.
I haven't read the story yet, but... 151 likes with no dislikes?! What sorcery is this?!
AND THEY--- sorry
thanks for that reference