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Horizon Spark


Writing My Little Pony stories for you so I can one day become an amazing author! Please comment and tell me what you think.

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After hearing from Sunset about the Anon-A-Miss scandal at Canterlot High, Twilight decides to set things straight. Right after she gives her friends an earful on how stupid they are.

A parody of everyone's favorite Equestria Girls comic story, because it seems to be the only one we like.

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O.O She's pissed

“Those Monster High-looking motherfuckers…”

Well I'm glad someone mentioned it.

I forgive you girls and we’re still friends, but I expect apology cupcakes delivered to my apartment later.”

Fuck yeah! Power of Friendship and Cupcakes.

“Seriously,” Fluttershy thought aloud, “we’re in an established business. How are we not kicked out for disturbing the peace yet?”

There's a spelling mistake here. You called her Fluttershy when this is clearly Flutter-Sassy.

“I’m just happy you came to help me before things got worse. If you didn’t step in, I probably would’ve done something drastic, like leave the city and never return, commit suicide, or go on a revenge-fueled rampage where I destroy this school and never look back. Whichever is more interesting to do.”

... ... ... Ya know, in hindsight, those are a bit overdramatic.

Yeah, Anon-A-Miss is one of the few comic arcs I've completely avoided reading precisely because of all of the problems pointed out

Happy holidays to you, too, Horizon.

And this story did get a few chuckles out of me. Have an upvote.

You know, i thnk this is the first really original take on that stupid mess i remember reading . .

Yeah Anon-A-Miss is dumb and that's coming from a guy who likes seeing all the different stories its spawned.
Happy holidays.

The only thing dumber than that comic is seeing people beat the same dead horse in the same exaggerated way as if it's original.

:twilightsmile::twilightoops::twilightsmile::rainbowlaugh:nice work

hey leave the fourth wall breaking to Pinkie Pie, thank you

To make a reference to another show, twi's dial has been turned up from half-'a' to quadurple 'a'. she just went devastatingly roasted them all that they just got left as cinders.

just rip 'em a new one why don'tcha, twi. jesus.

Lesson learnt.

This story is hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

To be fair, the writing MLP fandom is full of damaged individuals.
That's why you have a fuckton of suicide fics centered around Wallflower, Sunset and everyone else.
Also tons of Pinkie slasher/torture stories.

Well, if writing this kind of shit helps them cope with life instead of ending it, so be it. Doesn't mean you have to like that.

Oh, and perfect choice of title image. :derpytongue2:

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I feel "MLP" is an unnecessary descriptor.

Fanfiction community will do. :rainbowlaugh:

I honestly don’t recall seeing any comments that hold that comic on a pedestal. Most people love to write it because it is so obvious it could have been better, and most of the detractors of the various stories mostly just want to express their distaste about how many Anonamiss fics there are. Again, this is just my general observation, I’m sure there are many that have entirely different reasons for either writing, reading, or hating those stories.

Great work on this, very funny.

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Really, the same thing goes for those Dark Porn 'fics, like Fall of Equestria and CMC's New Lives and whatnot. Some people like to write possessive and cruel stuff like that to get their darker urges out; some people like to read them for the same reason.
It's much better to write and read enslavement stories than it is to actually enslave someone; the former hurts absolutely no-one. As a result, stories like that have a reason to exist, even if the majority of visitors don't like 'em.

“Those Monster High-looking motherfuckers…”

I won’t laugh...
I won’t laugh...
I won’t laugh...
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BWAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHHHAHHAHAHAHAH🤣

“I’m just happy you came to help me before things got worse. If you didn’t step in, I probably would’ve done something drastic, like leave the city and never return, commit suicide, or go on a revenge-fueled rampage where I destroy this school and never look back. Whichever is more interesting to do.”

yeah baby there it is

I'm either scared or I like it, but I don't know about Twilight's forewarning. I've seen a story where Twilight ended up destroying the Earth and taking back Sunset to her world, or Twilight took the humans back and enslaved them as ponies and Celestia didn't mind. I don't blame her for being pissed, not sure about going Chef Ramsey. I know at times the EGs around Sunset make very bad choices and decisions and jump on the first rumor they hear, but my theory on that is the school is in Japan in the old Mugen region where they had the nutso Professor Tomoe, the Witches 5, and in Ptilol's spell before they went zombie like, the students already had a zombie like closed up attitude where I'm sure before being freed by Sailor Moon, the EGs were quiet and reserved and gone separate after Sunset started rumors. Just being an Andy Rooney.

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I like that slight reference to alternate worlds where a Sunset Shimmer probably done them things and even WORSE. It's good to see a Sunset realizing that she'd hurt herself, the people that cared in Ponyville like I'm sure Celestia along with Twilight. I just wish in a world like that that they could see their actions to Sunset are horrible and wrong and it hurts her.

“Those Monster High-looking motherfuckers…”

After spending a whole movie feeling sorry and saving you girls

I forgive you girls and we’re still friends, but I expect apology cupcakes delivered to my apartment later.

And you're only relevant for three pages.

Twilight rolled her eyes. “Oh come on Spike, there’s no need to be such a downer. Here, why don’t we go ahead and read what Sunset has to say? I’m sure it’ll be quite the experience!” Twilight flipped the pages straight to what she was looking for, and as quickly as she found it, her smile turned into a furious frown. “Those Monster High-looking motherfuckers…”

I had my doubts about this until that last line. This is all sorts of advanced level awesomeness.

Great story! And yes that was the worst comic.

sex-crazed fish demons

:rainbowlaugh:

Best!Anon-A-Miss!Fic!EVER!

Twilight Sparkle Wins…
FRIENDSHIP!!!

“YES!” Twilight angrily answered. “So to end this dumb little trial case, Sunset IS NOT Anon-A-Miss. After spending a whole movie feeling sorry and saving you girls, you should know that she’d never betrayed you five, and if she did, SHE WOULDN’T BE A DUMBASS ABOUT IT!”

Yeah. Is not just morally against the character, but is downright stupid and could only happen if Sunset suddenly loses half of her neurons in the process.

“Are you girls pranking me? Are you girls taking the piss out of everything I’ve done at this point. Is angrily cyberlynching my friend like this some kind of dumb human ritual of yours?!”

“Don’t you ‘Princess’ me, cowgirl. I didn’t bust my flank to redeem Sunset only to see you girls muck everything up with this whole ‘Anon-A-Miss’ nonsense. Nuh uh, I’m fixing this right now!”

Since when does Twilight Sparkle talk like that?

“Thank Celestia social media isn’t a thing in Equestria.”

It will be in Gen 5 of MLP, Twilight.

“Thank Celestia social media isn’t a thing in Equestria.”

Yeah I think we can all agree on that I don't even want to know what chrysalis's Facebook account would look like and I don't know about the rest of you but I really don't want to know what cozy glow would do on the internet

“And you're only relevant for three pages. More importantly for Celestia’s sake, if Sunset or anyone does something you don’t agree with, talk to your sisters and STOP STARTING LYNCH MOBS!” Twilight, wanting to keep whatever was left of her sanity, took a deep breath. “With that said, I have a Hearth’s Warming party to attend. Please fix this, and don’t make me come back here for something like this again. Twilight out!”

You know
Now i kinda prefer the original comic

Why do i think the original was good?
Because
Even in the bestest of friends
Anger and revenge happens
The windegos were there to tell us that hate comes from anywhere
We all are naturally Selfish or Spiteful
But it doesnt mean we are evil
That's why this comic exists
Because its not to curbstomp sunset
Its to remind us that We all make mistakes and/or hurt people
But even then we can still stay together

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Never
She'd probably understand why people would blame sunset
I mean she literally was friends for less than a year
Even with reformation some people hold grudges

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It could be better
But for me? I dont see too many problems
One: she was there for less than a year
Why wouldn't she be blamed for it? Sometimes trust is easy to break!

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I think the main problem is there are so many holes in the concept. Phones can be hacked. And Sunset was vicious before that but she was also very careful until her back was against the wall or it became a matter of pride. I wouldn’t mind them being turned against her but it should have taken more effort, or at least varying degrees of effort for the girls to each reach the conclusion that she had betrayed them. Then again maybe I’m just not in the right headspace. I approach everything extremely logically, such that more emotional reactions tend to blindside me.

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