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This story is a sequel to A Tale of Two Dusks


Dusk Shine has never been particularly interested in making friends. Most of his time has been spent investigating the strange conspiracy theories surrounding Canterlot High, with occasional snark fights with his sister.

However, after meeting Sonata Dusk, he promised to help her out, and he plans to follow through with that promise. But between Dusk's inexperience with the whole "friendship" thing, the mysterious events that tend to occur around Canterlot High School, a pair of sirens who are still on the loose, Sunset's well-meaning but unhelpful friends, a mother who seems intent on welcoming a new member of the family, a bunch of students who are still not quite willing to forgive Sonata, and a girl who sees her as a threat for a very different reason, he feels as if he may have bitten off more than he can chew.

Hopefully he'll figure it out. And maybe even discover something greater than friendship.


Reading A Tale Of Two Dusks is not strictly necessary, but it will be helpful!

Also, a big thanks to Tennis Match Fan for the cover pic, as well as for proofreading!

Chapters (9)
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Comments ( 42 )

I can't wait for the new chapter... This was really fun to read...

only an E rating eh i'll still read it for now

YES ALL OF THE *cough* *cough*

I'm happy with this

Let the ship set sail

I love this! But that cover picture is bothering me nonstop. If you want I could redraw that with some color for you.

Crap and Hell? Are you sure this is rated E?

By the way, would you like a review of this story and the prequel? Comment? Private message?

Finally sat down and read this. Very pleased thus far. How long until Dusk Shine figures things out, I wonder?

Almighty? Hasbro? Hmm...

This is brill. Nothing more can be said. Except more. Plz.

everything should turn out just right

no

Not bad story for now, plz add more though, I really like this ship,

Good DuskDusk...
[insert appropriate M. Bison quote]

I like this story :pinkiesmile:

I would have liked it to be a little bit longer, but hey quality over quantity. I really like this story and can't wait to see more

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I see a humorous outcome to what Velvet says.

"Honey, I need to talk to you about a new addition to this household."
"Whaat?! I thought you were on the pill!"
"I'm not pregnant, darn it. Dusk brought a girl over!"

bep

Taco Spell

I think you mean Taco Hell.

“Don’t you worry, Mr. Dusk’s dad! I’m totally gonna be a responsitive and productible member of your house!”

She will be in a state of being responsive and being able to be produced! I'm not sure how, but by god I'm certain Sonata will find a way.
(Props on the wording there, btw. You not only got her saying nonsense that is actually made of real English words, but switching their endings turns them into what she probably meant. I like that.)

Dusk Shine did not know about the Battle of the Bands. At least, not yet. But sooner or later, she would have to tell him. How would he react to the knowledge that the girl who he had let into his house out of the goodness of his heart was a siren? Would he still be willing to accept her? Or would he be shocked and angry? Would he kick her out and tell her never to return?

That's not the issue, Sonata. What you have to fear is the questions and the terrible power of obsessive research.
What will you do when he starts bringing up mythology stating that she couldn't possibly be a siren because the sirens of mythology were bird-women? Or tries to weasel the secrets of history out of you?

“Oh sure, and next you’re going to say that horses can predict the future with their tails.”

Technically, they are called ponies. And those ponies are Alicorns and Unicorns.

With the conspiracy theory angle, does anyone else imagine Dusk talking in Dipper's voice?

Please continue. This is great.

I'm just happy this fabric is still alive.

Oh, the suspense...

The suspense is killing me, metaphorical speaking.

dusk shine x moon dancer ship name Moon Shine :rainbowlaugh:

6736478 Aw, dammit! Now it's in my mind forever lol!

6736658 the power of the ship is to strong no one should have this power

6736658 You (almost) say that like it's a bad thing.

Oh dear...love triangle ahoy!

No it was bout to get juicy.

6162034 oh yoh mean Pinkie Pie. Yeah, she's an Earth Pony

I would be happy if Bolero met Sonata.

It would be weird if Sonata Dusk treated Dusk Shine like a brother.

That last thought...alright, that was unexpected!:pinkiecrazy:

Hasbro is God now? . . . it was only a matter of time :pinkiecrazy: that or Disney.

When will this be updated?

Hope there’s an update one day, this is pretty good.

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