Birth

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After months of waiting and anticipation Twilight, her family, and even her friends arrive at the hospital to greet their newest addition.

Part of my 'Elements of Equestria' series.

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Machine

Machine #1 · Aug 5th, 2018 · 1 · ·

💖❤💓💕💖❤💕💓
Lovely!

OmniFox

OmniFox #2 · Aug 5th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Adorableness can give you cavities.

Comickook

Comickook #3 · Aug 5th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations, general wrap-up and future story set-up in all the right places. :-D I particularly liked Night Light's voice of experience concerning when babies are born and the reactions of everybody when they met Flurry for the first time. Hopefully, they'll be able to keep calm when babysitting her after finding out she has the powers of a high-level mage/potential demigod. (though such a thing might lead to some interesting homages to the Incredibles' "Jack-Jack Attacks" short [:-D]).

At any rate, I'll certainly be looking forward to more of your work.

Marebook7

Marebook7 #4 · Aug 6th, 2018 · 1 · ·

How cute!!, and how funny is Pinkie drag her friends from their homes.

maisa

maisa #5 · Apr 24th, 2020 · · ·

"Now I just have to work on killing anything with a y chromosome that comes near her, and I'm good."

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