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Mr-War


I'm a typical brony, which is nothing out of the ordinary. I like to write MLP fanfics as well as chatting and discussing new fanfic ideas with other authors.

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Something strange is happening in Twilight's palace. The magic mirror has started acting strangely during a period of intense solar flares, leaving her worried about what complications might occur. The next thing she knows, through a sequence of events she didn't have the chance to analyze, the mirror inexplicably transports her, her friends, and Spike, to a mysterious, and dangerous world completely unfamiliar to her, where the only way to seemingly get back home is to go with a band of strange beings, on a quest to destroy a powerful ring in a far off land...

MLP:FIM is the property of Lauren Faust
Lord of the Rings is property of J.R.R. Tolkien

Proofread by Charlie_K

Chapters (24)
Comments ( 1118 )

Interesting start. Tracking this just to see where it goes.

Only criticism I have is that the reference to Phillips head screwdrivers and other human tools, not to mention humans themselves,(though I realized you were referring to the CHS humans) right at the beginning was a little jarring.

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Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

Chapter two is on the way! :raritywink:

well I hope this goes well. Love the start of it and looking forward to more.:twilightsmile:

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And more you shall have! :rainbowlaugh:

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I think she got those tools from that human world, but seeing as those tools were designed by humans for humans and Twilight was using her hooves and mouth instead of her magic to use them probably made it harder for her to actually use them

It's about time we got a good crossover.

Fave, like, more of this please.:pinkiehappy:
Something tells me Pinkie is gonna turn the Shire upside down in a more thorough fahion than Bilbos relatives would ever be able to.

This is going to be beyond good. My favorite movies (yet to read the books, but I want too), and my favorite show. Oh the fun to be had that's to come. :raritystarry:

You sir have gotten my interest. :pinkiehappy:

Now that aside...

The story is getting off to a good start and look forward to see what kind of adventures the girls come across in middle earth. I can't really say much about the characters as they look like you have portrayed them right. Looking forward to more updates!

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Thank you! Spread the word about my fic to your group or your friends! :twilightsmile:

Inb4 "Why don't they teleport to mount doom", despite the fact giving the Ring to someone like Twilight is a HILARIOUSLY bad idea unless you like this.

her friends, and Spike,

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After years of waiting and searching... finally, a MLP/LOTR crossover fanfic comes!
And a very promising one at that. The Mane Seven in Middle-Earth? I'm all in.
This gets an instant favourite. I am eager to see how it will go when the travelers enter the Shire. But I'll also get more and more tense as the Equestrians get closer and closer of witnessing it...

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I didn't think it would be possible to find a good MLP/LOTR crossover, but then this happened. Now I wan't more.

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I have seen another with Gandalf coming back in Equestria after everything settles in Middle Earth, but it hasn't been updated for a long time...
Mr War has been writing this well, and I trust he won't make the mistake that can come when crossovering something with a book or movie, like I have seen on fanfiction.net : taking some quotes, thoughs and actions from characters of one universe and transplant them on characters of the other universe.
There was that fic where an author basically replaced Boromir by Twilight, trying to take the One Ring from Frodo near Amon Hen... *cringes.

Well firstly truly amazing story i long waited for someone write something like this :D.
I am truly curios how this will continue. Mainly how will twilight react on ring. Because from whole mane 6 she will be most tempted by ring. She have much magical power and ring will probably fell it.
And about teleportation i truly think it is extremly hard spell mainly if you should teleport for great distances. Evan with all alicorn magic twilight teleported probably just few miles and she dont have it under control.

I love your crossover. One of the best featuring The Lord of the Rings. I love the Mane Six interacting with Gandalf and the hobbits. Still, I need to ask if the story will differ from the movies or the books. Flood meeting Gandalf in front of the Mane Six would have been adorable, as well as them meeting Sam at the party. I think the Mane Six should have watched the argument between Bilbo and Gandalf because of how emotive it is (quite an ocular gusher for me). Still, I think that Pinkie and Spike will make an excellent pair with Merry and Pippin. The Mane Six enjoying themselves at the party was also nice as well as their meeting with Bilbo. Looking forward to your next chapter.

I'm guessing they will get themselves roped into an adventure of a lifetime in the next few chapters. Oh boy, i look forward for them to interacting with the others.

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Keep an eye out for the next chapter. :raritywink:

Love dis! Are they gonna split up like the fellowship does, or do they stay together?

Oh dear. Guess who will try to get her grabby marshmellow hooves all over the ring throughout the whole story.^^

This chapter comforts me about the author writing his own tale and not just a copy/paste. This will be grand.

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I think they will split up. Besides the Ring's worry, I also fear what might happen if Twilight goes with Gandalf to Orthanc...

6400546 Hopefully they don't split up, but I am really liking the story so far!

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Where would you hope them to go?
- Swamp of the Deads ?
- Fangorn ( temporary hostages) ?
- Helm's Deep ?
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6400831 Helms deep most likely

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Well, whatever the author has planned, I'm pretty sure it will be excellent. :twilightsmile:

The ponies need shut up the Goddamn Gandalf don't need no help.

LOTR + MLP = INSTANT AWESOMENESS :pinkiehappy:

I'm looking forward to the next update as I feel things as starting to heat up.

Very interesting.

I'm confused. Bilbo's still in Bag End?

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Yeah it's a SLIGHT change from canon proposed by Charlie_K my proofreader, I just went along with his idea to see what would happen. :P

Fluttershy was becoming quick friends with Merry, Pippin, and a hobbit by the name of Samwise Gamgee. When the three learned that she had poor cooking skills, especially with complex dishes, they immediately went out of their way to teach her all they knew. Sam especially was proud of his skills, and was glad to show off many of his cooking tricks to a wiling student of the culinary arts.

"Quick friends," not to be confused with FAST friends.

"The sense of "fast" here is almost obsolete; it's the "fast" of "steadfast," as noted by RegDwight above. It means "tight" or "secure," and you'll see it in literature in expressions like "hold fast" meaning to "get a tight grip" (on something). "Hold fast to your dreams" means to keep them close and never let them go"

E.G. Sam and Frodo, in canon are fast friends.
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Oh I get it. Thanks for pointing that out for me! :twilightsmile:

Woa, an update so soon after the previous one! You are going fast!
You and your proofreader are doing it well, Mr-War. I know it's hard to rewrite a scene by adding more characters and still keeping it credible. You are truly writing the characters well. I can't wait to see how the adventurers react when they realise the gravity of their situation and the dangerosity of their quest. They'd better watch out for "Black Snooties".

This is getting better with each chapter. Props to Spike for trying like he did.:raritywink:

You're doing great, but don't burn yourself out too quickly like I did.

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I'll keep that in mind. :raritywink:

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Indeed, no rush, take your time.

Ooohohohoho, oh man... you, I don't know who you are but you made me very happy wen this hit the front page of Fimfiction.
I frigging love those movies, never read the books though Dx And I can tell this is going to be one hell of a ride! :yay:
I laughed when I saw this, but it was a happy I am going to love this laugh.

Good show so far!

This looks promising, even by my picky standards. I was leery at the dark tag, but as long as it's no darker than Lord of the Rings, I can't complain.

Whoa that was intense, it's good that they managed to get away from them.

I am loving this! Its about time someone wrote a LoTR crossover!
I've been waiting for one, and this one is looking to be really good, you wrote this chapter out well and I am just in love with the interactiosn with everyone. Its going so well!
You're doing well so far man, awesome job!

This is great. I love that Spike tried to destroy it. Ne, does anyone think any other power could take it out? I think maybe Itachi's Amaterasu or Usagi with the ginzuisho could. Pretty sure a Wheel of Time channeler with Balefire could.

"We also need to find a secluded place in which to hide for a while. I have an idea, but it's going to take a while to put into effect," Twilight added.

"What sort of idea might that be?" Sam asked.

"Some time ago there was an... incident... back in Ponyville where we came from. The entire area was besieged by unprecedented levels of dark magic," Twilight explained, shooting an annoyed glance at both Twilight and Rarity in remembrance. "There was a lot of cleanup involved, that I was a part of. I'm hoping to apply the same process here as I did there."

"And that process is what?" Frodo asked.

"Dispersing dark magic; a process that only an Alicorn is capable of performing. Only they have the ability to truly destroy such an accursed existence, rather than burying it away behind layer after layer of sealing charms. I'm going to see if I can do the same thing here in Middle Earth; I'm going to try and disperse the dark evil that the ring contains within itself..."

seriously, why did nobody think of that kind of thing before? naturally, it would work better if multiple mages were doing it, but still.

Uhh oh... methinks that ring is going to do some bad things to our friends, specifically Rarity or Twilight.
Seeing how the ring will only fit them. Lordy luuu, this is so awesome! Nice job once more dude, I am lovin this! :yay:
Hehehe

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