This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves Episode 21: The Cybermen Invasion of Equestria
Twilight's clone, Thalia, has been born. A converted, human Celestia has been ordered to obtain the Elements of Harmony and destroy anything in her way. An army of wretched creatures has appeared within the Everfree Forest. The Doctor seeks to unravel the mysteries of Discord Whooves's past. Secrets will be revealed, breaking points will be tested, and the impossible will begin.
ooooh.....things about to get a bit CHAOTIC
Wow, already onto part three of the epic season finale.
I had a feeling it was Discord that they were going to run into in the caves here.
Black Sun. Kind of reminds me of Avatar: The Last Airbender.
As always, cue the Doctor Whooves theme.
I hope for much more soon. Keep up the good work.
this will be needed for this I asoom.
DISCORD?!?!? How in the name of all things holy did he get into Discord Whooves' TARDIS?!?!?
WARNING! INCOMING BARRAGE OF RANDOM MUSIC AHEAD! THOU HATH BEEN WARNED!
Discord Whooves' secret lair is in Rainbow Falls.
This is Thalia. Two episodes ago, she was teamed up with Jeff the Killer. Well, even the evilest of villains doesn't always start evil. I do see though the beginnings of Thalia's apparent infatuation with Discord Whooves.
Tee hee. Turn left.
He doesn't like to be called the Doctor like the War Doctor. I always suspected though that Human Cupcakes Pinkie called him Mr. Whooves because it's kind of like how Harley Quinn from Batman: The Animated Series called The Joker "Mr. J." Although in this case, Thalia would probably be a more apt counterpart to Harley Quinn.
Amy Pond!? I do know a little bit about the Discord Whooves Tumblr and am aware of why Amy would strike a nerve with Discord Whooves.
Well, that was an exciting installment. I can't wait for the rest. Keep up the good work.
* le sigh * Cpt Jack? Mickey the idiot? CLARA?
4940881 I don't think this doctor met Clara. well, at least not yet.
How does Amy tie into this? Wait, is Discord Whooves shortly after 11?
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If this Discord Whooves has a similar backstory to the one from tumblr, then I believe that for Discord Whooves, the storyline diverged right after they left Mercy... That backstory comic was a bit... Disturbing.
So...
Yea, he wouldn't have met Clara.
No Doctor at least take someone with you.
What the heck is that thing? Is that from something or did you cook it up in your delightfully twisted mind?
Discord Whooves has Opal!
Oh my gosh! I remember G.I. Joe. I had a few episodes on tape or something when I was a kid. Knowing is half the battle.
The Master! I am aware the Master pony was featured in the Discord Whooves tumblr that this Discord Whooves is based on. But perhaps this means we will see our Doctor face off with his own Master pony.
This Discord is so pop culture savvy. It's called a pensieve, Discord.
I don't know if this going into darkness thing is a good idea. Despite his confidence, I doubt the Doctor will come out of this unchanged. I do hope as well we won't have to wait as long for the next update with "Season 1" winding down as we speak. I anxiously await the next installment. Keep up the good work.
Fuckin' finally, I've caught up!
IT'S BACK!
*fangirls and jumps at Doctor Persus, hugging him insanely... Trying not to suffocate him with my hair*
So... Is this this the version of Discord Whooves I think it is... Or one with a similar story?... Cause he seemed pretty sensitive about Amy in either the last chapter or the one before...
*gets popcorn ready*
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Krillitane.
5504236 Good gosh, you're right. It is a Krillitane!
A very dark chapter, maybe it will need the Dark tag.
But a good story.
YOU JINXED IT! TWICE!
After waiting so long of the next exciting installment of Doctor Whooves, this is what I'm treated to.
You're sick, you know that. I tease of course. But that was like... I don't know.
He totally Bones McCoy-ed her. You know like on Star Trek.
Bad Wolf!
I'm sure Achilles hell is a terrible thing, but I'm pretty sure you mean "Achilles heel".
Well, I certainly do hope that the wait for "The Life and Lies of Discord Whooves" isn't as long as for chapter. Things continue to bet progressively more interesting in this "season finale". I await it with baited breath. Keep up the good work.
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Yep!
Thanks again for pointing out yet another one of my idiotic typos.
OMG I'm finaly caught up . This chapter was something else . Is it only me or do I want more derpy
I can hardly wait for the next chapter!! I am so excited!!!
Okey, I realy start to fear what you planing in this arc and I'm sure now you needed the Dark tag for the episode.
But it's a very epic story. You are a Briliant writer.
I like it I can hardly wait for more
before reading this:
THANK THE KING THAT YOU DID THIS SO QUICKLY!
after reading this:
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTT.
This is amazing I was a little lost at first because I forgot what was happening but sooner or later I got it. The whole Jack,Sheriff guy,Master,Top hat guy,part was confusing but you feel what the character feels The Caverns of Truth, Badlands, Equestria, Gaia, Autumn, 66 P.C.E
I immediately face palmed and said"Whyyyyyy...this again...the pain all over again" implying that I know what your talking about.Good job dude keep it up.
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Sorry for confusing you in some areas but I'm glad that you were still able to enjoy the chapter.
This first "season" of my series is littered with plot points and tidbits that are setups for future arcs and events in the series. If you think things are interesting now, just wait and see what I have in store for "Season" 2.
6105514 no problem your a great writer
Awsome chapter! Can't wait for more. You are Awsome writer
Yes! I finally got to reading this chapter!
I think you mean "piece."
I think you mean "That didn't sound good..."
I think you mean “...as he saw…” The Doctor isn’t a woman… yet.
A quick search that led me to the Tumblrpony wiki tells me that Warden actually has a six-pointed star cutie mark.
I think you mean “... had jumped…”
But enough of the word crimes!
Just like in “Day of the Doctor” because Doctor Whooves is so much like Ten, he doesn’t like Eleven’s TARDIS control room. But he seems to like it when it becomes Eleven’s second TARDIS control room.
Ah yes. Eleven’s chin.
Is that a ponified Rumpelstiltskin with the Mad Hatter’s hat? I’m pleasantly surprised how much Rumpelstiltskin has shown up in what is supposed to be a MLP and Doctor Who crossover. I especially enjoyed his talking about Discord Whooves’ names. That’s some vintage OUAT Season 1 Rumple.
Reunited. Yeah, I know how that’s going to work out.
You and me both, Doctor. At least, I was like two years ago.
So, Discord was never reformed in Discord Whooves’ Equestria. But then how did Twilight still become a princess? Was he reimprisoned after his betrayal in “Twilight’s Kingdom”? But then how did Twilight still get the key to unleash the Rainbow Power that also gave way to her castle? Am I thinking too hard about this?
Wait a minute! That’s a frickin’ horcrux!
Because it’s a frickin’ horcrux!
So, Discord Whooves turned the camera with Amy’s final message to the Doctor into a horcrux in all but name. Not only that, but human Cupcakes Pinkie and Black Sun are Discord Whooves' horcruxes as well.
So, Discord Whooves originally comes from an alternate Doctor Who universe where Amy and Rory weren’t sent back in time by the Weeping Angel at the end of “The Angels Take Manhattan” only to die when the TARDIS mysterious got pulled into Equestria. And then this alternate Equestria also seems to ponify every humanoid that crosses over into it, unlike the primary Equestria of these stories. Interesting how alternate universes seem to have different rules in this regard.
I see that the Doctor who would become Discord Whooves’ first adventure with Derpy is quite reminiscent to Twelve’s first adventure with Clara.
Ah, finally we go the Master and Jack Harkness in one of these stories! Although, that probably has more to do with their role in the Discord Whooves Tumblr. I wonder if we’ll ever see them again in a future story, especially since Jack ended up falling into a rift.
I've never actually read this Discord Whooves Tumblr. I'm going to assume this is a fair adaptation of it into a part of your story. I admit, as a fan of Dinky as Derpy's kid, I got a little excited seeing her and Sparkler become Derpy's kids here. But apparently that's because of the Discord Whooves Tumblr. This Warden seems pretty interesting. He's kind of a pony parallel of Captain Jack the same way Matilda is pony parallel of River Song. I wonder if we'll see him again in a future story.
Even though you've forsaken having your primary Derpy fall in love with your primary Doctor Whooves, that seems to have been the case with Discord Whooves, but I imagine that has a lot to do with the Discord Whooves Tumblr.
So, Discord Whooves got the name “Discord Whooves” because that’s what the people of the human Equestria called him. But I think they only called him that because that’s what Colgate called him. And Colgate got that name from Edgar Stevens in “Episode 19: The Rifts.” He basically has that name because of the Discord Whooves Tumblr itself. It's kind of meta.
This whole chapter could be a whole story onto itself! Just so much going on here. It was a great installment. I eagerly await the next one. Keep up the good work.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. And, as always, thank you for pointing out my word crimes.
Yeah. I just had a sudden burst of writing inspiration when I started that chapter. I had a ton of fun writing it because of how dark and tragic I could make Discord Whooves's backstory while following along with some main points from the original Tumblr. But, of course, my Discord Whooves is different from the original in many areas (especially following that particular event on the hill).
I have returned to working on the next chapter and I plan to have it out soon.
Man...I just realized that I've been working on this one episode for over a year.
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Good things do take time.
It didn't take that long to update as soon as I finally got around to reading the last chapter. That's cool. That battle between Celestia and Black Sun was certainly an awesome climax for this chapter! Now the Doctor is on his way to saving the Mane 6. Though now I'm wondering what was up with that spaceship only Twilight and Derpy could see. And Luna and Celestia can't really be dead right. They're alive in Episode 2 and that takes place a thousand years in the future. Though I imagine they're being possibly dead has a lot to do with Discord Whooves' paradox machine. I look forward to the next installment as always. Keep up the good work.
Jenny? JENNY?! JENNY!!!!!!!!
You awesome bastard. That was one of the most epic clifhanger I ever seen.
Can't for the next chapter!
Another update so soon. Yay! But it's the last chapter of this story. Uh!
I know, right!
I’m with Donna on this. What?! Is this further confirmation that Matilda spent time in the Wizarding World of Harry Potter?
Don’t tell me Flash is actually an evil robot?
Indeed, it is the spaceship. Can Twilight and Derpy suddenly anticipate the rifts and what’s in them or something?
I admit I suspected it would be Bright Eyes. Eventually, she’d have to show up again. Might as well do so by flying a spaceship through a rift.
My thoughts exactly, Doctor and Donna.
Jenny! Well, this explains why we’ve never seen her again.
Well, that ending was certainly unexpected. It may have taken a good long while, but this was a story worth the wait. We found out all about Discord Whooves. Bright Eyes came back. And now there's Jenny completely out of no where. Anyway, I very much look forward to the next story, the long awaited final installment of the first "season" of these stories. It's going to be so epic! As always, keep up the splendid work!
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I shall explain...in the next episode.
Thank you for being so patient with my terribly slow updates and I'm glad my chapters ended up being worth the wait for you and the rest of my followers. I can't really excuse the month-long breaks aside from just a mixture of school, work, and terrible procrastination. But, fear not. After writing through these past couple chapters, I have a new fire within me to keep on writing. Expect the prologue of the next episode to be up very soon. I'm also really excited about finally writing the final episode of this "season" and then moving on to the exciting plans I have for "Season 2".
I'll admit that there are some elements in this finale that weren't originally planned when I first started writing this series all the way back in 2012. But this scene is one of those that I really had planned from the start. Jenny was always slated to make her appearance at the cliffhanger ending of this episode. What's going to happen now that she's back? You're just gonna have to wait and see.
You have no idea! I've definitely saved the best for last. One of my favorite moments that I eagerly look forward to writing involves Donna and...that's as far as I'm getting into it. I'll just say that Donna and several other characters get their badass moment of awesomeness.
Discord Whooves x Thalia
I blame you.
The TARDIS gets interplanetary Wi-Fi? Whaaaaaaaaaaaaat!
Horcruxes!
You were just talking about Harry Potter with Discord. It's not hard to think about Horcruxes.
Oh fuck.
There you go!
You know, I was fully expecting you to say it was the voice of Discord Whooves' TARDiS. I did NOT expect Discord himself. Well played.
... Okay, things are starting to make sense now. The Amy the Doctor keeps seeing, it's the one from Discord Whooves' timeline, isn't it? And I have a wild guess that the ones that tried to contact Opal and Monty through the radio was Bright Eyes. Thalia has been created, and Discord Whooves' TARDiS has been turned into a paradox machine. And finally, Discord Whooves needs the Elements of Harmony for something. I suppose now the burning question is... how does this all tie together?
Let's find out.
Why is it that every time I come across a story with war in it (on this site) Luna either dies or loses all her magical abilities?
JENNY!!!! I flipping love this series, please keep up this fantastic ark