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Doctor Perseus


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This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves Episode 17: Angie the Great


Upon returning to Ponyville, the Doctor learns that there's a new mare in town by the name of Colgate and that she desperately needs his help. When a chance encounter leads to Twilight and Pinkie Pie getting trapped in the past, the Doctor will have to solve the mystery behind Colgate's curse as well as learn her connection to an ancient and lonely creature.

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Yay! Doctor Whooves is back! Perfect timing as I have now re-caught up with the stories. Waiting for this for so long. Now it's back and I can't wait for more. But now, what is the mystery of Colgate?

"...wait a minute...Colgate?!"
"What's wrong with Colgate?" asked Twilight.
Donna rubbed her temple and sighed. "If this pony doesn't turn out to be a dentist, I'm going to seriously question the fact as to why a pony has the same name as a toothpaste brand."

Donna made a fandom joke! :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy: Donna's walking around Ponyville. Warning! Human in Equestria! But since that human is Donna Noble, that is more than forgivable. Lyra better show up.

Lyra: What are... those?
Donna: You mean my hands?
Lyra: HANDS!

And of course, cue the Doctor Whooves theme

Creepy voice... Apparently too quick to be seen... And it can send any living thing back in time... I hear something weeping...

Oh buck! The weeping angels!!!!

2986331 is it angelic weeping or demonic weeping?

2986331 But Weeping Angels can't talk... Can they? Did I miss that episode? Most likely.

"Ah. I've missed that old Pinkie Pie randomness," sighed the Doctor happily.

Me too. :pinkiehappy: I just realized how much I've missed Pinkie Pie in these stories. And she sang Donna the Welcome Song from A Friend in Deed! Only this time the cake and confetti were where they were supposed to be! And the rest of Ponyville reacted to Donna as expected... from almost any other Human in Equestria story. Donna is the best human though. Most important one in the whole universe.
Colgate seems to have the powers of a Weeping Angel. Is that because she has a Weeping Angel inside of her? That is possible right. It was in an episode I didn't see yet. And now Pinkie Pie and Twilight are trapped in the past with a young Granny Smith. Can't wait to see where this is going.

2986941I think this might be a new breed of Angels.
:twilightoops:Which makes them all the more terrifiying.

2986941
Actually, Weeping Angels can talk but only if they steal vocal cords from someone else.

2987070 Oh. That is also incredibly terrifying! :fluttershbad:

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Yeah. That particular trait for the Weeping Angels was introduced in the episodes The Time of Angels and Flesh and Stone.

2987132 I'm going to have to watch those now.

why do i imagine this thing after colgate talking " LiKe SleNDeRmAn? It KinD oF MakEs SEnsE wItH hOW iT Is ActINg...

2987070 oh that's what happened in time of angels? i thought they just killed bob and turned his brain into a weeping angel so they can talk to the doc through angel bob's walkie talkie.

:pinkiegasp:
We may have a slight situation.

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They can also imprint themselves in your brain if you stare at them long enough (the reflection in you're eyes) this makes their only weakness into a dangerous weapon truly they have the greatest defense ever evolved

Angels. Buckin' Weeping Angels. Now the rest of my reaction:
:twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops:
ohbuckohbuckohbuckohbuck!

2987132 Don't spoil it! I'm on that episode!

Donna rubbed her temple and sighed. "If this pony doesn't turn out to be a dentist, I'm going to seriously question the fact as to why a pony has the same name as a toothpaste brand."

I was hoping she'd say that! :D

"Oh gosh, where do we start?" Twilight asked in response.
"BronyCon of course!" Derpy exclaimed.
"What the hay is BronyCon?" Spike asked as the Doctor and Donna exited the library.

Pinkie: You really need to get out more! :pinkiegasp:

ERMAHGERD COLGATE'S A WEEPING PEGASUS KILL IT KILL IT WITH FIRE, KILL IT WITH FIRE NOW!!! :pinkiecrazy:

Yes, the Doctor is always right. :pinkiehappy: And the gangs all back together. :yay::raritystarry::ajsmug::rainbowdetermined2: For the most part. :pinkiesmile::twilightsheepish:

DUN DUN DUUUNNN!! The plot thinkens! Excellent chapter!!

weeping angels. we all should've guessed. :twilightoops:but why colgate?!:fluttershbad:

Looks like it' almost time for the Doctor to be in.

pinkie, twilight, at least your in the past, the doc can get you. I however, am stuck in Tartarus until i can modify my transporter beacon to teleport myself back into your dimension. i have had to fight nonstop against demons. it will have me fit and strong by the time i get out of here. and just so you know, i am in here because i had to help fend off the demons while others closed the gate, which appeared on the opposite side of the planet from where you are.

Additional thought.

"What's going on? You've got that something's going down look on your face, Doc," said Rainbow Dash.

Rainbow Dash called the Doctor "Doc"! :rainbowlaugh: If young Granny Smith ends up saying, "Nopony calls me chicken!", I'm going to squee all over the place for all the Back to the Future references!

"Well the TARDIS is here, Spike. It's not like she's gone off to another time or something."

YEAH, THAT CAN'T POSSIBLY BE IT, COULD IT?!? :pinkiecrazy::trollestia:

"Well the TARDIS is here, Spike. It's not like she's gone off to another time or something."

Oh how wrong Derpy is. :derpytongue2:
A ponified Weeping Angel! Does that mean they foothold in this universe! They're turning pony statues into Weeping Angels now!
How is it that Donna never faced the Weeping Angels alongside the Doctor? Weird.
I imagine that box is part of Twilight's plan of getting a message to the Doctor. :twilightsmile:

The Pegasi Take Ponyville...

Also, am I the only one who caught this:

The Master?

Foreshadowing...

There are Weeping Pegasi now. They are now officially of the Equestrian universe.
:twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops:
ohbuckohbuckohbuckohbuck!

Angels...Oh dear, We are in a bit of a pickle arn't we? Welp... Anyone got a sledgehammer?

Dun dun DUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNN!!!!! oh... I betting, Colgate to be a Time Lady... Not enough of those, Colgate being a Time lady I mean..

Swwet celestia, whats going on?!? This is the first time I've ever been this confused about these stories. But I do have a bit of speculation about Colgate. My guess is that shes part weeping angep somehow. I know it sounds crazy, but its all I can come up with, since shes not only able to send ponies back in time, but is also being stalked by one of them. Thats my theory, and I'm sticking by it.

3002711
I'll violate you with a rusted spork if you even get near her
And that's a promise :yay:

Have granny Smith give the doctor a message in the future like he did when he was sent back

3023737
Nope i saw it too man and I'm more scared then before now lol

"No! You can't touch me!" she cried. "Why not?!" the Doctor asked.

Didn't the doctor grab her hooves last chapter?

3023737
Nope i saw it too man and I'm more scared then before now lol

"No! You can't touch me!" she cried. "Why not?!" the Doctor asked.

Didn't the doctor grab her hooves last chapter?

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He did but she quickly yanked it away from him in response.

so, it seems colgate has the ability of a weeping angel, or in this case, a weeping pegasus.

A weeping angel/pony hybrid? This is - *adopts 9th Doctor voice* FANTASTIC! :derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy::rainbowderp::trollestia::moustache:

Sweet Celestia! Colgate is a Weeping Angel! :twilightoops: I hope we find out how that's possible.

Yes, throwing a book at someone's face out of nowhere is totally a 10th Doctor move. And Rainbow Dash being all suspicious of Colgate like she was of Twilight in part 2 of "Friendship is Magic". High marks for in character-ness!

:twilightoops::derpyderp1::applejackconfused::pinkiegasp::derpyderp2::fluttercry::pinkiesick::raritycry:
My basic reaction to the Weeping Angel/Pegasus.

I KNEW IT!!!!!! I totally saw this coming as soon as the first Weeping Angel made an appearance. You sir are absolutely BRILLIANT! :pinkiehappy:

So I'm guessing one of Colgate's parent's are weeping angels... ( HOW THE BUCK DOSE IT WORK!!!! :applejackconfused::derpyderp2::rainbowderp: )

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