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Doctor Perseus


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This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves Episode 5: Before the Chaos


The Doctor finally manages to return Twilight to 1002, only to discover that he's brought her back a little bit late. As the suspicious citizens of Ponyville turn on the Doctor, a strange army led by an old foe invades the town.

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(Joke) Alt. Title: Doctor Who Cares? Episode 6: Superstitious Minds

Pax

WHEN IS THE FORESEEN NEXT PIECE OF THIS GOING TO BE RELEASED?

The doctor just regenerate?:rainbowderp:

When i read that derpy said she was a background pony i literally got up and started to flail my arms everywhere screaming, " YOU BROKE THE RULES, YOU BROKE THE FUCKING RULES! GOD FUCKING DAMNIT!!!" and thats how equestria was made.:derpytongue2:

Not this again! Doctor! get that Tardis calibrated or what every else you do to it :facehoof:

Doctor, Derpy is a Pegasus! Have her fly you to Twi's library then you'll figure it out from there.

I feel that Thalia is behind this.

Derpy may be a pegasus, but I'm not sure if I'd trust her to fly me so close to "I just don't know what went wrong!"

"Tell me, Derpy. Do you know Twilight Sparkle and her friends well?"
"Not really. I'm just one of those background ponies."

Derpy is genre-savvy


~Dash

I call Thalia! I totally call Thalia!

~Dash

"...How...how long were we gone?" she asked.
"About five minutes," the Doctor replied.

"Oh no! Not again!"

"Twilight...ah don't know how to say this, but you haven't been gone five minutes. You've been missing for five months!" she exclaimed.

Just like in Aliens in London, the Doctor returns his companion home a bit late. I like how he realized he just did that again.
Cue Doctor Whooves theme:

Here we see the beginning of awesome Derpy will be in these stories. :derpyderp1: I like how Fluttershy is the first pony Twilight convinces to help her. She's so awesome. :yay:

Doc Perseus is so good at coming up with creatures that seem plucked out of Steven Moffat's dreams... or nightmares for the rest of us.
Pinkie Pie starts showing how awesome she will be in these stories.:pinkiehappy: Her appearances are definitely high points in these stories. Her feelings and brandishing a kitchen knife at the doll. (And making cupcakes out of it :pinkiecrazy:) :rainbowderp: JK :trixieshiftright:

"Be careful, Big Mac!" she called.
"Eeyup!" he called back.
"Not much of a talker, that one," said the Doctor.

How perceptive of you Doctor. :eeyup:

"I never go anywhere without my party cannon!"
"But how could you carry that? It's as big as you are!"
Twilight patted the Doctor on the shoulder and said, "Doctor, it's best not to try and make sense of what Pinkie does."
"But how did-"
"Please, Doctor. Drop it. Even your head would explode if you tried to find out how Pinkie Pie's mind works."

PARTY CANNON! Pinkie Pie is probably as much of a mystery as the Doctor's name.

Applejack and Rainbow Dash were also making up a good team.

Foreshadowing.

Twilight's horn began to glow and a large blast of energy shot up into the sky. Within seconds, a massive, purple barrier had formed around Ponyville.

Twilight's using Shining Armor's magical bubble spell from A Canterlot Wedding. :twilightsmile:

"I will find you no matter what it takes. Whether our enemy's Thalia or not, they made a big mistake when they decided to attack us. I will find you! I will save you! This town will not fall as long as there is a Doctor to defend it! Do you hear me?!"

The Doctor being badass again, and Pinkie Pie continues to be funny. :pinkiehappy:

Twilight looked to see a cloaked figure approach her. She was beginning to wonder why villains always wore black cloaks when the hood slowly fell down.

Yes, why is that? :twilightoops:

You and that Doctor ruined my chances of a new life. A life together with him."

Does Thalia mean the Dark Doctor we'll first hear about in a couple of episodes? :trixieshiftright:

"...He'll be all mine and I'll be the one with the happy ending!"

Thalia sounds like she's from Once Upon a Time now.

1970749 As this shows, he will regenerate.

Why do I think this other Doctor is this pony?
One of the best things about these stories I've always felt is the interaction between the Doctor and the Mane 6 as well as Derpy and Spike. Once again, that's what crossovers are all about! Pinkie Pie and Derpy though definitely stand out. :pinkiehappy::derpyderp1: And of course, the obligatory cliffhanger ending. Allons-y to the next one!

if it is thalia, i sorely wish i could jump into the story as my character for which i am named, and proceed to tear her head off with the spine attached. and then put it on my trophy wall. (rp is fun)

Im not sure if the doctor is a bad driver or if this is one of those "where you need to be not where you want to be"moments lol

......is this squeaks traveler fic?
Also

The Cakes walked down the stairs and approached the group.

Were the cakes upstairs the whole time??

Twilight patted the Doctor on the shoulder and said, "Doctor, it's best not to try and make sense of what Pinkie does." "But how did-" "Please, Doctor. Drop it. Even your head would explode if you tried to find out how Pinkie Pie's mind works."

One word: HAMMERSPACE In fact pinkie pies mind might be nothing but hammerspace same as her mane

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Oh snap we got Badass up in here.......im serious.....I'm scared for them lol

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You man zerum whooves? Aka discorded doctor?

"No! Well, there was this one time where I think I insulted it and it was being stubborn about the whole thing...or maybe that was because the doors hadn't been greased in over a century at the time." "How can a box be stubborn?" Spike asked. "Oh you'd be surprised. This box has had more stubborn moments than a mule!"

The TARDIS isn't an "it" the TARDIS is a she

Well considering that Rose Tyler late for 12 Months and Amelia Pond waited 14 years 5 Months is quite tolerable:twilightsheepish:

"An invasion,"

Is it something like this?

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thats sort of how i read
i like to pretend im Dakota [my oc] or when its a normal book with humans i picture my self fighting along side
its really confusing

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lol, My account was modeled after a Yautja when I did that comment. Hope that makes sense for what I put.

Anyway, I do the same thing.

dan dan dan :heart::heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry::fluttercry:

dan dan dan hummmm :heart::heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry::fluttercry:

he noticed something taped to the exterior of the door. It was a piece of paper with a picture of Twilight printed on it. As he examined the paper, his eyes grew incredibly wide. "Oh no! Not again!"

DAMMIT DOCTOR ugh a good driver but to slow

Applejack and Rainbow Dash were also making up a good team.

And now us TwiDash shippers cry.

Derpy grunted a bit as the Doctor jumped on top of her and Spike, shielding them from the debris. Rarity produced a small, protective barrier at the last second to protect herself and Fluttershy. Applejack and Pinkie Pie ducked under Twilight's coffee table.

All the ships I ship are in one story! We have TwiDash, Whooves Shipping, RariShy, and ApplePie. :pinkiehappy: I don't even care how bad this could get. This is the ultimate story. Unfortunately, I know none of these are going to happen. :fluttercry: If only there could be the TwiDash...

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That's a tough one. Both are incredibly intelligent characters with some unique abilities. But I have to give it to Professor Paradox since he can go anywhere and anywhen he wants with a just a thought.

DAMNIT DOCTOR YOU HAVE ONE JOB AND YOU CAN'T DO IT RIGHT WHY!?

"I have a bad feeling about this," said Rarity.

"I don't sense anything," interjects Qui-gon Ginn.

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