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Doctor Perseus


I'm just a guy who loves to write.

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Twilight Sparkle has lived a full life but now she's a 115-year-old pony lying on her deathbed and waiting to pass on. As her time draws near, she receives a visit from a mysterious mare who has come to seek out the answer to a simple curiosity.

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Comments ( 40 )

oh fuck that was so good

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:
and a
:eeyup:

This truly deserved it.

Comment posted by PillarofFire deleted Apr 30th, 2013

Great story!

:fluttershysad::fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry:
IT'S SO-O-O-O BEAUTIFUL!!!
AAHHHHHHHHH!:raritycry:

Have you any idea of how many feels I had during this? :pinkiesad2:
I loved it :twilightsmile:

The feels... Oh God the feels! They feel so much!

The feels, they are overpowering:heart::eeyup:

Hell yes. This is a good'un.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Jedi Twilight waved her hand dismissively at Spike. "I am not the Twilight you seek," she said.

Neat side-by-side exploration of where both Twilights could be.

The feeeeeeeeeeeels :raritycry:

Rather than using "Alicorn/Unicorn Twilight," I would use "Twilight the Unicorn/Alicorn". Either works, I suppose.

This is really touching!! Well written though, I enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

Entering the feature box in 5...4...3...

I dodn't crack a tear.

What makes this story stand out is that it is clear that neither Twilight made an objectively 'right' choice. They both did what was right for themselves and have both been happy with those choices. That, more than anything else, means a happy ending.

This is a perfect example on how to wright a story that is both sad yet hopeful. Five star.

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I agree, the author could have taken the cheap way out, but nope, it's positive on both sides. Alicorn Twi isn't depressed, and neither was Unicorn Twi.

Damn, thats so heart warming.
:pinkiesad2:

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That was beautiful.

Kinda wish Celestia and Luna were still alive in Princess Twilight's timeline, but I do like that you showed that she's not depressed. Admittedly her friends are dead now, but she still has Shining Armor and Cadence and Spike and has made many more friends since.

My feels have been overloaded D'X

Excellent work, very nicely done! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

:fluttercry:






I think I took a terminal aneurysm from pure feels overload.

Must not cry:fluttershyouch: must....not...c..cry:fluttercry:... Oh I have too! It's so touching!:raritycry:

:pinkiesad2::fluttercry::applecry::raritycry: sad, bittersweet, touching. *sob*

M-m-my f-fee-feels. S-so m-much feels! SO MANY GODDAMN FEELS!!!! :applecry::fluttercry::flutterrage::fluttershbad::fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::raritycry::raritydespair::unsuresweetie:
IT BURNS!! THE FEELS BUUUUURRNN!!!!! THEY FUCKING BURN!!!!! I need to go punch something... :fluttershysad:

I've read the original comic b4, and i certainly like the outcome of this one better.
Why?
Because it didn't slap my feel goods as bad. (In a sense I found out my Twilight is still alive :D)

Would it be that we all can move on from this world with an equal level of peace and certainty in our minds. :fluttercry:


That was simply beautiful. Well done, author! :moustache::moustache:

Very nice short story. :twilightsmile:

Loved it. :twilightsmile:

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