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Doctor Perseus


I'm just a guy who loves to write.

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This story is a sequel to The Doctor Whooves Chronicles Episode 3: The Monster in the Mirror


For their first willing trip together, the Doctor and Derpy find themselves in the underwater metropolis of Atlantis. However, the saltwater utopia is burdened by terrorists who wish to keep Atlantis separated from the overworld. With the Prince of Equestria visiting and the life of the King of Atlantis threatened, the watery city is about to reach its boiling point.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 38 )

Most of the time things do not go well for Atlantis.

Hey cool, it's back!
And now to read.

I hope their king is some kind of pony version of Aquaman.

I'm really enjoying this story, I also love that you had a descendent of Shining Armour in the story!

:rainbowderp: That was quite the twist, I seriously wasn't expecting that. Must. READ. MORE!!!!!

all ur stories are great!!!! keep it up!!! :pinkiehappy:

Yes! Update! Keep being awesome, and update again soon!

i dnt know much about atlantis, so I have no idea what doctor is talking about :applejackunsure:

descendent of shining armour? cant wait to read it!!! :derpytongue2:

Hooves OR Whooves? derpy X doctor :derpytongue2

cant wait to read more, ever since I started reading your stories, ive never read so much in my life!!!:pinkiehappy:

Welp, those terrorists are fucked XD

Guess they'll see first hand the wrath of a Time Lord

:rainbowderp:Woah. I did not expect that.
Keep up the good work:moustache:

:rainbowdetermined2:Can't wait for more.
Man. This series gets even more epic as time goes on.

That was an excellent way to wrap up this particular story. I look forward to your next story!

Morewibbly wobbly timey wimey. :yay: :derpytongue2:

2797265 Welcome to the Herd with a Blue Box! :derpytongue2:

"I can't tell you anything about your future. In the words of somepony whose name I shall not mention, spoilers!"

River? :derpytongue2:

The next story should be interesting if you're somehow going to be working The Doctor and Derpy into A Canterlot Wedding. As always, keep up the good work.

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We have Waffles.

Now, I'm going to go wait for the next story. ALLONS-Y!

why worship the TARDIS? worship the the crazy man IN the TARDIS! for he is the doctor! king with the box! (+5 internets to who gets what i just said)

quick! someone build a stargate!

2797696 lol agreed. (starts RPing) and little do they know, a yautja hunter just saw what happened. and if the doctor doesnt stop them, they will all die a horrifically gruesome death.

this series has all of my yes. great work! fav'd thumbs up and here have a muffin -hands over a muffin-

Hey, trying to remember if you said you will ever put Rose into a story, pony-form or otherwise, and as a new question, have you or will you put the Master in? From what I have seen, he is just as psychopathic as a pony as he is as a Time Lord.

If there is one thing that will never change about the Doctor: he will not hesitate to confuse and baffle. Love that!! Also- I wanna timey-wimey muffin. :derpytongue2:

Dear ChaosMarineBrony,
Aquaman is a bitch.
Yours truly,
A
:trollestia:

2830282 More then likely my friend. I can imagine her seeing the doctor and saying, "Hello Sweetie."

I've only read two, well technically 3, chapters and I love this story!:derpytongue2: I'm such a Whoofian. Oh! I just realized! A 'Whoofian' is a combination of a few different words. Now Doctor Who fans are (Though they may not know this.) called Whovians. I took that plus the word 'hoof' and added them together and wola! I had the word Whoofian! And from that day forth I called myself and a friend Whoofians. Now to come up with a plan to convert my other friends... MWHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

I'm going to make a Whoovian dictionary and Time will have this definition: Most people think that time is a strict line of cause and effect but actually it's more of a great big ball of wibbly wobbly timey wimmey- stuff. Also I WANT A DERPY AND DOCTOR WHOOVES PLUSHY!!!!!!! I can't find any. :fluttercry:

If only I had an actual 4th Wall Be Gone. 'Cause then I could do all sorts of awesome stuff and some really helpful stuff too! Like try and find the spot where Jenny is and have her use her T.A.R.D.I.S. (That's the proper name of it as it's an acronym or I thought so) to go and tell the Doctor/ save Derpy and the others.

:fluttercry: GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T GO DERPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well I... if... if she... if she has... has to... to go... I... I hope that it's a bucking good reason! :flutterrage: Unlike Martha who I think just didn't have a good enough reason! :fluttershysad: Hmm... I'm going to need to work on my 3D glasses just in case. (???)

I think I hurt my leg when being way too happy when reading this.
I MIGHT just be sleepy.
I even moved my pillows and blanket to the floor so I didn't have to move.... :rainbowlaugh:

I've been reading this since 10 P.M!!! It's 1:31 A.M right now! AND I'VE ONLY GOT TWO MORE TO GO!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::derpytongue2:

D:yay:mn it Doctor, you magnificent b:yay:tard!

Derpy, didn't you use fly? You are not a charizard, so just fly!

4158529 Yeah, I don't know who's Martha (I'm still new to Doctor Who) but I wouldn't want her to end up like Clara Oswald, in episode Face The Raven (12th doctor, season 9)

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