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Doctor Perseus


I'm just a guy who loves to write.

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This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves Episode 6: A Ponyville Invasion


With Thalia continuing her invasion of Ponyville, Derpy and the others find their last chance at stopping her in the hooves of a future regeneration of the Doctor. Meanwhile, the Doctor teams up with an ally from the past to rescue Twilight and Rainbow Dash and ultimately save the town.

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(Joke) Alt. Title: Doctor Who Cares? Episode 7: True Derps

The Doctor, Derpy, and the main 6?
hell yes, the future wont know what hit it.
:ajsmug::fluttershbad::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::raritywink::twilightsmile::derpytongue2:

Pax

"TRANSLATION NOT AVAILABLE" I'M SUCH AN IDIOT!

Pinkie in Narnia? :twilightoops:
surely that world was never the same after that

2918751 I know now, but still; a horse?

Like I said, he's probably eaten horses before.

-e're gonna stop these dolls, save your friends and this town, and send Thalia back to the future!

WE NEED 1.21 GIGAWATTS OF MAGIC!!!!! :trixieshiftleft:

you honestly know how to buck with the doctor's mind. Im reading this and I feel like im losing my mind :raritycry::fluttershbad: The plot is better then anything that i've seen in doctor who. keep going

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This is all I could think of. xD

~Dash

"It's great that you can finally see me, Ditzy," said the supposed Doctor.

Foreshadowing. :derpytongue2: (The Christmas Ponies)
Cue Doctor Whooves theme

"Of course! That's what you meant! I'm so stupid! I can't believe it took me thirteen years to understand what you told me!"

So two years after their first meeting, Opal will travel with the Doctor.

I like all the Doctor Who references in this chapter. The Doctor reliving some of the worst moments and such. And yet somehow Amy Pond appears to him before he has ever met her. Because she's Amy Pond!

Why do I imagine this New Doctor sounding like Matt Smith?

"Looks like somepony has some feelings for the mysterious Doctor."

Yes, female beings of any species always fall for the Doctor! :twilightblush:

Holy horseapples! Thalia! :twilightoops:

She suddenly had the urge to hug the New Doctor like a stuffed animal and nibble on his ear like it was a muffin.

Looks like Twilight isn't the only one. :derpytongue2::twilightoops:

Fluttershy screams like in Green Isn't Your Color! :fluttershbad: And Thalia is just vicious. This story and its first part are reminding me how fun the references to My Little Pony are in these stories too.

Opal was looking at Derpy oddly and there appeared to be a hint of sadness in her glare. Opal stepped back and smiled sadly as she looked at the Doctor and Derpy standing next to each other.

Why does make me think of the moment when River Song realized who Donna Noble was?

The Doctor noticed that his future self was looking at Opal in almost the same way Opal had been looking at Derpy.

Why does this make me think the Doctor gave Opal a sonic screwdriver for the same reason he gave River Song one?

When they regained their balance, they saw that the two Doctors and Thalia were caught in the middle of a bubble of pure, magical energy. A geyser of energy shot high into the sky and began showering sparks over the town.

This reminds me of the Priori Incantatem from Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. Although it has the same effect as occlumency.
Once again, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Derpy are awesome! :yay::pinkiehappy::derpyderp1:

"...I have...somepony waiting for me."

She [Twilight] then looked back at the New Doctor to see that he was looking at her; that same, warm smile was still on his face.

He came to a stop right in front of her and gave her a quick, soft kiss on the cheek.

One guess as to who that might be. :twilightsmile: Then again. :derpyderp1:

"Cherish them, Doctor. Cherish them all...cherish them both."
The Doctor looked over Opal's shoulder to see that Twilight and Derpy were standing right behind her.

Foreshadowing :twilightsheepish::derpytongue2:

Rarity said, "It's bigger on the inside-"
"Than it is on the outside!" Derpy finished. The Doctor, Twilight, and Opal chuckled a bit upon seeing their reactions.
"Same reaction every time," the Doctor sighed as he shook his head.

Exactly. No matter what. The same reaction every time. :raritystarry::rainbowderp: Well except for Clara Oswald. :rainbowhuh:

"Forest in a wardrobe. It sure surprised me when I found out that not everypony's wardrobe had a forest inside of it. I tried to prove it but then the wardrobe burned down and-"

Narnia? :pinkiegasp:
Pinkie Pie fell in the pool! :pinkiesad2:

"Brilliant! Now what about the rest of you?"
Everypony fell silent. Could the Doctor really be suggesting what they were thinking he was?

It's quite unprecedented for the Doctor to travel with a total of 8 companions at a time! :twilightsmile::raritystarry::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::yay::ajsmug::derpyderp1::moustache: I checked. He usually travels with 1, 2, or 3 at the most if I've got my facts straight. That's what I like most about these past 2 and the following episodes. I just love watching the Doctor's interactions with the Mane 6. It's what makes this series almost the perfect crossover. It's sorely missing from the most recent episodes, but they have their own charms. :spoilersdonnanoble: I look forward to more of the Doctor's adventures with the Mane 6. Keep up the good work!

2918751 I know now, but still; a horse?

2918232 i hear him as smith as well, don't worry.

2920953 So what? He's a horse now too.

man, why won't the doctor show up here in Aztec NM? i would have sooo much fun travelling with him.

Looks like Thalia just got diagnosed with *puts on shades* Double Doctor Syndrome

2923913
Ikr

"Where's my mummy? Are you my mummy?" they cried.

OI THAT'S NOT FAIR! That was probably the best day the doctor ever had "EVERYONE LIVES ROSE. JUST THIS ONCE, EVERYONE LIVES!"
A better example would be river dying in the library

2994500 i sorely dislike the vashta narada. if only because they kill indiscriminately for sustenance...

2636391
THAT IS BLASPHEMY
DO NOT BLASPHEME!!!!

2918751>>2422936
O.o do you guys know that you've created a paradox comment loop??
if you click the reply names it just goes into am infinite loop from one to the other

She suddenly had the urge to hug the New Doctor like a stuffed

animal and nibble on his ear like it was a muffin.

Crap i nearly had a heart attack when i imagined that just to much D'awww in that scene

"I'm Caroze, Zecora's older brother. My sister has told me much about you," said the zebra.

I knew Caroze was an anagram

"This should be fun," groaned Spike as he prepared one of his fire blasts.

Thus was the birth of the badass known as spike de'draco

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To me it reminds me more of the first time Naruto and sasuke collided with the rasengan and chidori

1971353
Lol i was thinking about the wardrobe episode of doctor who

"Doctor!" cried Derpy as she flew over to them. Twilight and Opal followed behind her. Derpy lifted the Doctor's head up. "Are you okay?! Is anything broken?!"
The Doctor looked straight into Derpy's inverted, sad eyes. Something about them comforted him. The gray pegasus made him feel that everything was going to turn out alright. He looked up at Derpy and said, "Don't worry. I'm fine."

For some reason, even though Twilight has yet to say if she does have romantic feelings for the Doctor, this makes me want to say...
.....Twilight, you have some competition! :rainbowlaugh:

Wait...Raggedy Man...WAS THAT AMELIA POND!?!

2636345 oh good im not the only one who thought of that movie when he said that

2994561 fitting that theres a paradox comment in a doctor who story now with that said IM SCURD :derpytongue2:

4959580 IKR IT FREAKED ME THE HECK OUT!!

"Everypony knows about timberwolves. What planet are you from, Doctor?"
"Gallifrey."
"Huh?"

werent expecting that were ya?

Twilight and Rainbow Dash certainly weren't getting any sleep. Being tied to each other wasn't exactly the most comfortable sleeping position to be in.

'Tis a lie! (My phone is being a jerk so I couldn't get the picture like I normally would.)

"You awake, Twilight?" Rainbow Dash asked.
"Yeah. I've tried to get some sleep but I just can't. Not with Thalia out there," Twilight replied.

You said it was the fact they were tied together. Which is it?

"Looks like somepony has some feelings for the mysterious Doctor."
"What?!"
"Come on. I can see it in the way you talk about him. You have feelings for the Doctor, don't ya?"

Make a move Rainbow Dash. Come on! At least try and kiss her! Don't let the Doctor steal her from you!


Also, have a like!

Everytime you mention those dolls, I think of an oversized Smarty Pants doll.

Pinkie found Narnia...

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