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Doctor Perseus


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This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves Episode 8: Maiden Voyage


The TARDIS brings the Doctor, Twilight, Derpy, and the others to the Griffin Kingdom in the year 1021. Here they meet a 38-year-old Rainbow Dash training for the Gailenean 1000. Meanwhile, a third Rainbow Dash from an alternate reality appears but with much darker goals in mind.

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I never thought I'd say this but......
SHIT JUST GOT REAL!!:pinkiegasp:

Comment posted by The Dark Shadow deleted Jan 17th, 2013

About time someone closed the Rainbow Factory for good.
GO GET 'IM DASHIE!!:rainbowdetermined2:

Thank u soo much for having psycho RD get caught!
lol

since i had alot of free time on my hooves this week the stories were pretty quick. Keep doin what your best at!!:pinkiehappy:

I find it odd that just as rainbow says it's begun "rainbow factory" starts playing on my iPod o_O

Well it certainly is awkward meeting yourself from a different time. :rainbowderp::rainbowhuh:
Cue Doctor Whooves theme:

"Applejack tried to change something and look what happened there!"

Foreshadowing. (Parent's Day)

Oh. My. Gosh! The Rainbow Factory Rainbow Dash! :pinkiegasp::rainbowdetermined2:

Additional thought, why do I think the Doctor previously using his sonic screwdriver with his mouth and learning to use it with his hooves is inspired by this:

:derpytongue2:

"We'll help you deal with Wob Niar!" Pinkie Pie exclaimed as she pointed at herself and the others.

Wob Niar. That's a reference to Turnabout Storm, isn't it? :pinkiegasp:

"I've had enough of you!" Fluttershy snapped as she continued to push the dark Rainbow away from her friends.

I love it when Fluttershy gets aggressive! Fluttershy is awesome! :yay:

"I'm sorry, Celestia. I am so, so sorry," said the Doctor as he began walking back towards the TARDIS.

First time the Doctor says that in these stories.

"Nah. I've only visited this place. I grew up in the country," Derpy replied. The Doctor could tell that there was more to the story than that but he decided that that was a story for another day.

And that story for another day is The Christmas Ponies.

"Damn that other Rainbow Dash! I'll get her and her friends one day! There's more blood to be spilt!"

Something tells me this isn't the last we've seen of Rainbow Factory's Wob Niar. :fluttercry:

The two Rainbows approached each other and shook hooves.

HOLD IT! Shouldn't this cause a paradox?

Rainbow the younger blushed a bit. Rainbow the elder smiled happily as she looked at her younger self and Applejack.
"As a matter of fact, I do. They're waiting for me back in Ponyville."

She said neither he nor she, but I think we all know who she's talking about. :ajsmug::rainbowwild:
First time around, I went through about half this story before I found out Rainbow Factory was an original fan fiction. That makes this the ultimate crossover series. Not only does it crossover My Little Pony and Doctor Who, but other fan fictions. In subsequent episodes, we'll see that Doc Perseus has created a massive multiplayer multiverse including other alternate MLP-verses, a 'verse similar to our own, and an alternate alternate Doctor Who-verse. I see only one purpose for this. It's as Matilda says in Before the Chaos:

Soon, everything, everypony, and everyone is going to come together.

I look forward to that moment. It's going to be EPIC! :rainbowdetermined2:

2921596 you've already read them all so far huh?lol all your forshadowing post can get annoying to read, but what do i care? i am pretty sure people find my habit of modding the crap out of PC games annoying :derpytongue2: not meaning to be rude. please dont take this as rude.

must....resist....urge.......to jump...into the story...to kill dash's twin! she is dishonorable. she killed a female! the yautja honor code demands her torture and death for such a heinous act! -hops into pred-pod and prepares to hop through time in order to hunt the evil dash twin-

2923558 good video trio, those are what brought me here. i wanted more.

-arrives on the outskirts of featherville- right, now that i am here, i will need my biomask that can track which ponies are from alternate universes. and i will also mark the doc on in my bracer as safe and not a target. As for equipment, i will take: Plasma caster x1, Combi stick x1, Yautja tactical mines x15, and Yautja smart disk x2. gear set, stealth module at optimum, rebreather functional, targetng system engaged, and HUD map active. let the hunt begin.

-de-stealths right behind the evil dash- do it, and you die. hell do anything, even blink, and you die. now, drop the knife, and i will refrain from splattering you all over scoots with my plasma caster. i would prefer to have your head and spine intact for my trophy wall.

sorry, somehow evil dash knocked me unconscious. good thing 36yr. d dash arrived on time. i was sure evil dash would have killed me and scoots. although, i was more worried about scoots than myself. i DO have the black Ka'Kari after all.

i WILL get evil dash's skull and spine! -jumps into the rift yelling be right back- as i enter the alt reality, i realize the rift ironically goes into the throne room in this reality. -looks at celestia- hi there, mind if i take care of dash? after what she's done, i will make sure she wont be able to harm others, and by that, i mean her cleaned skull and spine will be put on my trophy wall back in mine and fluttershy's reality. it is fitting that she will die agonizingly, like her victims. my pred-pod has the ability to hop through time, space, and dimensional barriers as easily as a knfe through butter. i will help the doc watch over both universes. i promise.

2039982 and afterwards, i put her remains (skull and spine) on my trophy wall. dont worry, celestia said i can be the one to "punish" the evil dash. her punishment was execution. as per the yautja honor code.

1975767 Yes, the fecal matter certainly has hit the bladed cooling device.[/homestuck]

RAINBOW FACTORY DASH!!!!! ERMAHGERD WTF-BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!, :twilightangry2::rainbowhuh::pinkiecrazy::flutterrage::derpyderp2::ajbemused:

These rifts keep reminding me of the season 6 plot of doctor who

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ohh saucy
and at least no one was dying when he said it

"A dimensional rift? Yes," the Doctor replied.
"What's with those things?! They keep popping up all over the place!" Twilight exclaimed.
"I don't know. I'm just as clueless about them as I was back on the Queen Philippine."
That's when two figures popped out of the rift. The rift disappeared a few seconds later. One of the figures was a 19-year-old Fluttershy, the present one, and the other figure was a Rainbow Dash covered in blood and leftover griffin feathers.

another case of "where you need to go" time travel. i swear there is no "random" setting on the tardis :rainbowwild:

2924058
ive taken a peak at the later eps and while i mostly agree with you i wasent a fan of the donna noble this as she was always my least favorite companion

Well, I finally read Rainbow Factory.

It was a picture of herself standing next to a pegasus stallion who had a light yellow coat, a light blue mane, and a pair of sharp, dark blue eyes.

Doesn't Dr. Atmosphere have a red coat? :rainbowhuh:

Additional thought. I'd just like to say that since actually reading Rainbow Factory that you do a very good job at capturing the character of the Rainbow Factory Rainbow Dash. And her fate was a much more satisfying ending to the story of the Rainbow Factory. :rainbowdetermined2:

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If he does have a red coat in the original story then I guess that means I must have accidentally mixed his coat color up with another character or something. My mistake then. :facehoof::derpyderp2:

2039982

Spoiler Alert!!Hate to be a killjoy but she will return in episode 19

Wow, and BTW did you see day of the doctor? Awesome.

2921544 I need to watch that

Wait, rainbow factory, alternate universe? If its like ponypadta, then is there cupcakes? If so then.... OW MAH HEAD!!!

Wow... She needs to give her friends a few lessons

I'll read/listen to it tomorrow maybe. I don't wanna ruin the show anymore. I almost watched it, then the voice in my head started screaming no. I got an aspirin cuz I gave my self a headache

2924058 Not if it's a fixed point in time!

2873919 That's the universe speaking to you

2923803 I think it is.... That is so awesome!!!:heart::heart::heart:

finally some retribution for all the fillies that have died by the hooves of the Rainbow Factory!! Just goes to show that no matter who or what you are, If you are doing evil deeds the Doctor WILL stop you

2675857 no this happened a lot of times and its not a paradox a paradox is a statement that apparently contradicts itself and yet might be true. this doesnt contradicts itself

4961367 I don't remember this story or why I put that there:twilightsheepish:

2675857 RAINBOW DASH DON'T TOUCH RAINBOW DASH!!!!!

2997813 random mode is actually daus ex machiena mode I know because I invented it

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