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That was some crazy ish..
Not exactly in the bad way, ahah.

Loved it. Love to see more.

... There isn't much I can say after reading that... Not much at all honestly... I am a "LUNA IS BEST PONY" fan and after reading this I feel... Sad. Your fic has made me sad. I want more Luna and less Celestia. That hurt reading that Celestia had broken anything special between Twilight and Luna, it honestly did. I would like for this fic to go on, but please, let there be a time when it isn't just about desire. I clicked this for Shipping, witch on this site is called romance, and in that there is supposed to be a meaningful relationship. So please, let Luna be happy and at peice with her desires with the pony she loves. Aside with how I felt about the actual pairings, you wrote one damn good fic. Aloe and Lotus? Who knew. So you are truly talented at writing, though while two ponies are 'at it' there is always something sadistic or twisted going on, it was written damn good. I hope that you continue it, but please at least consider Luna ending up happy.

29598 I understand you, and you might have seen that even if my stories are grimdark and kinda brutal, they usually end up with a happy ending. I can also add that Luna is one of my favorites, and I'm sure you are gonna like my ending to the current plot in Royal Pleasures ^^ Or maybe not....:pinkiecrazy:

I was in just such a fit of laughter:rainbowlaugh:
Its gonna take me @ least a week to stop chuckling to meself

did luna let trixie have twighlight for the night and your so mean to my queen (luna) and did just learn how to fuck so good

ill kill you ........ if you dont give me more luna and celestia clop fics you and raging semi

33411 Oh my god who doesn't exist i KNEW THIS CHAPTER WAS A MISTAKE!!:pinkiegasp::raritycry::flutterrage:

Memo to self: never come to Celestia's chamber bearing watermelons. Luna might be there!:pinkiegasp:

Mr. Hank hill. If you would please.


Thank you.
*puts gun to face*

*clop* *clop* *clop* <-- this is the kind of clop equal to applauding. Wonderful story ^^

When I began reading this story, I though that you would just fool around with the princesses (lol fool around, still capable of bad puns at 1pm). However, I begin to see the silky red threat that connects everypony. I love your writing, and you're one of the few clop-authors that I take serious. Hope to see more from you in the future :raritywink:

Also, you wrote 'solidarity' somewhere in the middle of the story. I try not to be so nit-picking, Tell me if it bugs you, and I'll stop, but solidarity expresses the opposite of what I think you wanted to say. Maybe, you mixed that up with solitude.

Keep on writing.

Very good! Just had to comment; poor poor trixie

Wait. How is this not Grimdark again?

This may be fridge logic, but. Celestia. Just. MIND-RAPED Trixie. I'm pretty sure that counts towards High Octane Nightmare Fuel.

you put hear instead of head in one of the beginning paragraphs. "She shook her hear and said she just wanted to be left alone,"

other than that i loved this chapter

Im officially F$#@ing scared S#&*less by Celestia. She will literally rape your brain... just think about that. She has the capasity to alter your mind, and rape it. :trollestia:

Anywhoof I Love this story.:yay:

Holy...cow...that was quite possibly the most intense, graphic, and exhilarating scene of bondage I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I think I will forever fear Celestia, and somewhat pitty Trixie, although I share some of her...tendancies(curse my spelling). Looking forward to upcoming chapters and wishing the best.

so i decided to read this and i acquired knowledge of the ultimate faggot centrum in all existence


lol you guys actually masturbate to this shit


this is a good read with disturbed music

Wow that was... different...
My impression of this story changed so many times while reading. At first I was angry because Celestia used Trixie, then I felt some kind of satisfaction when the royal bitch got what she deserved, shortly before the end I had slight hopes for a happy ending, but you crushed them mercilessly when it looked like Celestia had won, and that was still before reading the last two paragraphs. HOWEVER, right now I feel a strange mix of rage, pity and fear. That was so cruel.

Nonetheless, it's a good story, and I feel a bit shaken right now. That happens rarely.

As a triplet, I find that really gross. That just hits close to home

63948 Everypony has their own opinion, and I respect that. Ty for reading at least :):raritywink:

loved it. awesome work!

Why isnt Trixie in the character list?:trixieshiftright:

Another great chapter, despite the ending, all I could think was "SoulHook, Y U NO HAVE HAPPY ENDING?". While I could think that Trixie is willing to back to Celestia because of her deal, I would not think that she would so easily go back to the halter, just an opinion.
PS. YES! YES! YES! put those scenes in another chapter, that would be great...you know, if that's ok with you...

Mr Quagmire, if you please...


Thank you. *puts gun to face*

IN ARKANSAS...stoped reading after i saw the first warning.:pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

Other than the slightly-grimdark slavery thing, I liked it

My poor little heart can't take any more:fluttercry:

This was such a wonderful chapter, and I'm already afraid of what is going to happen next *shiver*

There was one thing I didn't understand; Wasn't the plan at the end of chapter 6 to erase Twilight completely from Trixie's mind? Wasn't Celestia able to succesfully do that? To me it looks like you wanted to change the storyline after the last chapter, and that it would originally have become a much darker future for Trixie.

Regarding the thing with the halter, I suppose it's more symbolic. Trixie wants to express that she now accepts the treatment from before, maybe except for the mindfuck part.

Wonderful chapter as always, Soul Hook. Mistress Bell wants to express her favor in allowing you to live another year.

35019 Yes, bring cucumbers or something

72273 Let me tell you this: there will be more of Trixie in the future chapters :raritywink:

I have to say, I read clopfics to read clopfics...
but this one, I say is an amazing rendition of TwiLuna.

That sex scene was OVERKILLTASTIC!!!!!!!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
Seroiusly awesome, I never get tired of this story.

Don't care it wAs awesome...:pinkiehappy:
Yes, i want to see horny fluttershy!!!1

i want to see what a child between these two wluld look like

126317 You mean between Celestia and Trixie? Man... I don't wanna know :derpyderp2:

125331 Heh, thanks^^ I really need to hear such things in order to continue :heart:

That was astonishing to say the least, a twiluna and Celetrix foursome with Aloe and lotus Lolz and sex?


cool story bro

133250 Thanks....... I... guess :rainbowhuh:

Bar-Party? Which chapter was that?

I can be an editor for you. I do have tons of free time.

136394 Uhm, that was in Ponyville's Lusts. A lot of people read both of my stories :pinkiesmile:

God forbid bowling night or fencing lessons.:rainbowderp::facehoof:

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