Another great chapter, despite the ending, all I could think was "SoulHook, Y U NO HAVE HAPPY ENDING?". While I could think that Trixie is willing to back to Celestia because of her deal, I would not think that she would so easily go back to the halter, just an opinion. PS. YES! YES! YES! put those scenes in another chapter, that would be great...you know, if that's ok with you...
This was such a wonderful chapter, and I'm already afraid of what is going to happen next *shiver*
There was one thing I didn't understand; Wasn't the plan at the end of chapter 6 to erase Twilight completely from Trixie's mind? Wasn't Celestia able to succesfully do that? To me it looks like you wanted to change the storyline after the last chapter, and that it would originally have become a much darker future for Trixie.
Regarding the thing with the halter, I suppose it's more symbolic. Trixie wants to express that she now accepts the treatment from before, maybe except for the mindfuck part.
Wonderful chapter as always, Soul Hook. Mistress Bell wants to express her favor in allowing you to live another year.
CLOP OVERLOAD CLOP OVERLOAD TOTAL SYSTEM FAILURE NEIGH CATASTROPHIC EXISTENCE FAILURE MY LAST WORDS ARE............... LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!! you sir are an amazing writer and im so glad i picked this story up and read it because it has gone into the realms that well to be honest i never believed existed in pony fanfiction. keep up the good work
The heart is a fickle mistress. The more one tries to force it in a direction, the more it rebels against the enacting force and seeks to oppose said enacting force. So even though Trixie agrees to a relationship with Celestia, the strong desires and feelings of the heart, It probably means that even now Trixie loves Twilight. Even though she knows that Luna is her marefriend. Perhaps I'm wrong, but I see this as Trixie settling for second best, but her heart, cannot be swayed, even in spite of all the concessions by Celestia. Thus them living a lie, it's all just seeking solace in another pony's company, not the one they truely love/ desire.
Ihateyouandnothinggonnachangethat. I hate it how you turn the reader's view on the whole plot 180 degrees. I hate you for making Trixie seem egoistic after empaphizing her bad position. I hate how you still won't make it happy. I am still rolling in my bed not able to accept these things. Did I tell you already that I hate you? Please just make Trixie really happy. I don't care how butt I beg you. Yeah, I beg you even tough I hate you. PS: I HATE YOU (atleast until I slept or I read the next chapter, butt feel yourself hated until then. Smore in Molestia hell.)
Why isnt Trixie in the character list?
Another great chapter, despite the ending, all I could think was "SoulHook, Y U NO HAVE HAPPY ENDING?". While I could think that Trixie is willing to back to Celestia because of her deal, I would not think that she would so easily go back to the halter, just an opinion.
PS. YES! YES! YES! put those scenes in another chapter, that would be great...you know, if that's ok with you...
Mr Quagmire, if you please...
"GIGIDY-GIGIDY-GOOO!!!
Thank you. *puts gun to face*
BLAM!
IN ARKANSAS...stoped reading after i saw the first warning.
Other than the slightly-grimdark slavery thing, I liked it
My poor little heart can't take any more
This was such a wonderful chapter, and I'm already afraid of what is going to happen next *shiver*
There was one thing I didn't understand; Wasn't the plan at the end of chapter 6 to erase Twilight completely from Trixie's mind? Wasn't Celestia able to succesfully do that? To me it looks like you wanted to change the storyline after the last chapter, and that it would originally have become a much darker future for Trixie.
Regarding the thing with the halter, I suppose it's more symbolic. Trixie wants to express that she now accepts the treatment from before, maybe except for the mindfuck part.
Wonderful chapter as always, Soul Hook. Mistress Bell wants to express her favor in allowing you to live another year.
72273 Let me tell you this: there will be more of Trixie in the future chapters
Only thing running in my head before the orgy.
CLOP OVERLOAD CLOP OVERLOAD TOTAL SYSTEM FAILURE NEIGH CATASTROPHIC EXISTENCE FAILURE MY LAST WORDS ARE............... LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!! you sir are an amazing writer and im so glad i picked this story up and read it because it has gone into the realms that well to be honest i never believed existed in pony fanfiction. keep up the good work
For whatever reason, the incest between the 2 sisters added quite a lot to the story, I do hope to see more in the next chapters.
but they were both still living a lie? wonder what that could mean....
72273
The heart is a fickle mistress. The more one tries to force it in a direction, the more it rebels against the enacting force and seeks to oppose said enacting force. So even though Trixie agrees to a relationship with Celestia, the strong desires and feelings of the heart, It probably means that even now Trixie loves Twilight. Even though she knows that Luna is her marefriend. Perhaps I'm wrong, but I see this as Trixie settling for second best, but her heart, cannot be swayed, even in spite of all the concessions by Celestia. Thus them living a lie, it's all just seeking solace in another pony's company, not the one they truely love/ desire.
Ihateyouandnothinggonnachangethat. I hate it how you turn the reader's view on the whole plot 180 degrees. I hate you for making Trixie seem egoistic after empaphizing her bad position. I hate how you still won't make it happy. I am still rolling in my bed not able to accept these things. Did I tell you already that I hate you? Please just make Trixie really happy. I don't care how butt I beg you. Yeah, I beg you even tough I hate you. PS: I HATE YOU (atleast until I slept or I read the next chapter, butt feel yourself hated until then. Smore in Molestia hell.)