When I began reading this story, I though that you would just fool around with the princesses (lol fool around, still capable of bad puns at 1pm). However, I begin to see the silky red threat that connects everypony. I love your writing, and you're one of the few clop-authors that I take serious. Hope to see more from you in the future
Also, you wrote 'solidarity' somewhere in the middle of the story. I try not to be so nit-picking, Tell me if it bugs you, and I'll stop, but solidarity expresses the opposite of what I think you wanted to say. Maybe, you mixed that up with solitude.
Aww poor Trixie after reading all the stories i have with her in them I now sympathize with her more and the love scene was amazing. to know what it feels like to be ravished by a goddess is something only mortals can dream of.
Well. Maybe you know it already but feel yourself being more hated for making DA GRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT AND POWERRRRRRRRRRRRRRFULL TRRRRRRRRIXIE suffer. Shame on you
When I began reading this story, I though that you would just fool around with the princesses (lol fool around, still capable of bad puns at 1pm). However, I begin to see the silky red threat that connects everypony. I love your writing, and you're one of the few clop-authors that I take serious. Hope to see more from you in the future
Also, you wrote 'solidarity' somewhere in the middle of the story. I try not to be so nit-picking, Tell me if it bugs you, and I'll stop, but solidarity expresses the opposite of what I think you wanted to say. Maybe, you mixed that up with solitude.
Keep on writing.
Very good! Just had to comment; poor poor trixie
I have to say, I read clopfics to read clopfics...
but this one, I say is an amazing rendition of TwiLuna.
what.
Aww poor Trixie after reading all the stories i have with her in them I now sympathize with her more and the love scene was amazing. to know what it feels like to be ravished by a goddess is something only mortals can dream of.
I love this whole series so far
Ah... this is what I love to see. Poor Trixie, but perhaps she can join the fun too sometime?
5 stars
hmm yeah this as as far as i remember reading of this , but maybe i'll recall more as i continue.....
I admit nothing!
I regret nothing!
Well. Maybe you know it already but feel yourself being more hated for making DA GRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT AND POWERRRRRRRRRRRRRRFULL TRRRRRRRRIXIE suffer. Shame on you
YOUCH! Trixie's heart has shattered.... I pity her.
She was like:
Then:
Then:
And finally:
haha gotta love ya
3650014 she was like
and i was like
Oh that emding was bucking priceless!