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> Sex tag
> "her beloved sisters"
I don't think I'm gonna read this.
Saw the tags and saw the mention of sisters...
*Click click
Faved n thumbed up
Loved the last one with Twi n her mom, might love this too
Those who see this n deem it not their cup of tea, don't down vote and rage that "Don't Want" speech, others are trying to appreciate a good read regardless of its warnings and content
Just tip your hat and leave, besides to even downvote you either:
1.) Read it anyway and was disturbed by the content
2.) Too immature of digesting such content to read and just downvote just cause of the tags and summary
If you're someone who downvoted, at least be courteous and comment why, and of some other worthwhile reason than rage and disgust
Good job again with another fic, I look forward to seeing what else you can dish out
*EDIT* Finished reading.... O.O
I really liked this... the ending was similar to some hentai plots
That ending...
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Pinkamena gonna get me.
I enjoyed it. Here are some minor issues I found:
"The other gray little filly with a dark gray and slightly longer mane arched her eyebrows, dedicated to what she could do know."
Wrong now.
"lips so it could get a taste of her inner, more warmer moist."
More warmer doesn't work, you have to just say warmer, or more warm, or warmest. It's either warmer or not, it can't be more so. Also this sentence ends weird. What is her inner moist? Maybe you were gonna say moistness or something? Or moist thigh? I don't know...
"vultures enjoying her body to their heart's content,. "
Left a comma in there during editing. It's at the end, see?
"pleasure for Inkie's current position, forcing her to bit both her lips"
Do you mean bite? Or is Inkie buying something?
Otherwise I had fun. An enjoyable read.
Holy shit dude... That was awesome... Damn, I love me an interesting story, and yet again you delivered, you twisted, sick, perverted, magnificent rat bastard!
734955 *applauds with waterfalls of tears* thank you... thank you so much
735002 sorry
735071 there are always typos in my texts no matter how many times I proofread it. Thanks for pointing them out so I can fix them later
735087 some people would say: god's speed, you magnificent sonofabitch!
735264 she dreamed about what happened in her life, but the violence that actually happened was replaced with what she wanted, sex.
735981
You magnificent son of a bitch! I read your book!
735981 You're welcome
You're works always had that crazy swirl, that maelstrom of emotions that boil down to the scenarios that lead to clop
I look forward to what you'll write next
After thinking about the story for a bit i could use some clarifacation. why did she slip intoo depression after getting her cutiemark?
How much of the story was her dream? did blinkie actually try to cheer her up all those years?
and finnaly why did she kill her sisters but not her parents who sshe seemed to hate more?
BEST.INKIE.BLINKIE.CLOP.EVER
seriously, these characters aren't used enough. I loved this story, no matter how fucked up it was.VUN DE VAH!!
Heyyy everypony who disliked, READ THE DISCLAIMER!
I bet that Inkie and Blinkie wished they had a blender before telling Pinkie how they wanted her smile back... so she could drink it aaalll in.
I killed a lion.
Not bad....That ending though....Made me....
Very entertaining. Not to be a grammar Nazi, but her name is Pinkamena, not Pinkie... Soooo, the sisters wouldn't be named something that rhymes with Pinkie.
oookay lets see it has 12,600 words in one chapter.....I think i'll skip this one.....
736889 It's Pinkie Pie, after all
737057 that is a part that was never intended to get mentioned. Point was that even the sisters wondered and not even Pinkie herself understood. It is up to the reader to decide what was dream and not. One thing is sure: Pinkie eventually killed her sisters and then ran off. She killed tehm because of her grave disappointment. Her near breakdown was about to happen just when her sisters came to have sex with her. She planned to ran away and got caught doing so.
737653 ty
742680 I'll show you weak sauce...
748930 well, you can see it as Blinkamena, Inkamena and Pinkamena if you wanna play by that rule. The other pie sisters were never mentioned by name, so it's pretty much free for anypony to use and abuse their possible names
752130 Dude, it's just one chapter... it's completed. But ty anyways.
756890 yeah lol i would read it but never seen one chapter with 12600 words b4 lol srry but to lnog for me :3
756948
Go read the stuff by shortskirtsandexplosions. Just 1 chapter in Background Pony had the same amount of words as the first draft of my fic. Wonderful writing.
Anyway.
So. Clopfic. Dunno why I read it knowing it was one. But. Dat ending. I can see Pinkie being completely batshit insane to kill her sisters but continue on a normal life later. We see her psycho side during her "party".And, knowing Pinkie, she would dream of a giant orgy with her sisters. . .the weirdo that she is
Totally upvoted, simply because it's insanely good.
you. my mind. explosion.
so here, have a pinkie playin vuvuzela
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760965 * no response*
So sad ending- I wish her dream was real... Oh, Pinkie!
762042 dreams are just made up fabrications of what we want to see. Humanity will never be satisfied with anything, forcing us to realize there's no way we can call it a fulfilled dream. Because as long as life is cruel and bitter.... we know we are awake.
Excellent story, thank you. You had some very strange word choices and syntax which made it a bit difficult to read, but you did quite well considering English is not your first language. I'm going to go check out your other stories now.
Freaking LOVE the ending, by the way. Timing is everything, and poor Inkie and Blinkie took a little too long before comforting their sister.
So let us remember them how they could have been - together, as a team:
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Well....
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i liked that that was good like pretty much all your story bro keep up the good work
WOW! Just... WOW!
748930 They are mentioned in the show as Inky and Blinky
Take all my wins!
But to see that it wasn't how it happened made me sad... time for time travel!
...
Done... I hope
So.. it happened... still, got the stone
reread, broke my heart with feels again...