Losing her parents at such a young age had affected Applejack more than she would ever like to admit. After years of bottling up her true feelings, it had become an ever-growing struggle to control her emotions. During one of her therapy sessions, she's given a chance to try a unique treatment in order to help her cope. While the details are vague at first, she is still willing to try anything. Even if the treatment seems a bit unorthodox.
Story contains: Adult foal themes along with motherly care. Story mostly focuses on the caring aspect more than the diapers(aka no huge focus on usage and whatnot). If this is not your thing, well I did warn you.
Chapters (6)
Well this is interesting...
Have a like
Prose looks decent, but I'm not in to the whole diaper fetish thing so I won't nitpick. Here's a reluctant like for your terrible choice in fetish.
Where as I'm not into the adult diaper thing, the first chapter looks promising if only to see more history of AJ's parents.
5592682 then don't read it dumb ass it's not that hard
The spelling in the description put me off this more than the subject matter did. Please proofread before posting.
The diaper thing ruined it. Don't include terrible fetishes, please.
Well, this does seem to have potential. But there's an awful lot of spelling mistakes here, and the cover art gives away what you're trying to keep hidden in the description.
I suppose I'll keep an eye on this, but you might want to obtain a proofreader to help you out with future chapters.
5592742 well that's just your opinon so please if your going to not like the materal then I won't feel bad for you not reading it just don't down vore just cusse is content you don't like That's all I ask
5592686 When you release something everybody has the right too read and give an opinion on it....
5592754 Thanks I'll try better to catch then in the future and maybe I cools change the art but no idea what to do with it
5592784 true just rude to post "we fetish me no like down vote " it is just rude is all
5592823 I understand.
5592823 Deleting comments will hurt you more than you think and this reply:
just makes it worse.
Let us see what they said so we can judge them for our self's. Criticism, weather it's good or harsh should not be censored.
5592926 the comments I delete were rather unrelated and just hate "ew fetish " posts which don't help any , nor help judge content .
5592940 I would like to see that for myself, because sadly I can't take your word for it, and that's why deleting comments hurts authors.
Enough of this sick fetish shit. You people have something on broken on a mental level yourselves and it is YOU who needs help.
5593431 Jeeze, calm down. I find this kinda stuff a bit weird but its their choice, so let them live with it.
Diaper fics needs to go. Its sick and disgusting. Or at the very least don't feature them or make a Diaper fic tag of some sort.
5593886 not all people who are into this are into it for fetishy reasons, some just want to reclaim lost innocence by acting younger
coupe -
an ice cream dessert; the glass it is served in
A car with two doors (variant of coupé)
an area of forest where harvesting of wood is planned or has taken place.
cope -
To deal effectively with something difficult.
Words mean things. Of course, based on your replies to comments, I have to wonder if English is even your first language.
The simple solution to not liking fetish fiction don't read them.
I liked the story zub and in the future would be happy to help edit.
Way to give away the surprise Pinkie. You're lucky Applejack shrugged it off.
The idea is very interesting and realistically executed (as realistic as can be for an adult foal story, that is) but you need to work on your story's spelling.
Could you please continue this?
Nice to see an update. The only issue I have is when AJ basically got slipped a micky. What was going to happen should have been discussed with her before she started treatment. Not knowing what the premise of the treatment being offered is seems kinda shady. As a psychological service I think it should have been gone over before treatment started.
5972728 I know. I understand it's help to her, but not telling her in advance what the treatment will involve is wrong.
5972728 Okay maybe that should have been discussed during tea and I don't really know much about psychology. Although the tea was just ment to relax her and it was the slight over dose is what caused the peeing.
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That's ok about not knowing. Plus the spoiler was cool.
Not bad. Not bad at all. I give a Fav and Thump Up.
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probably could have easily made a one shot abut her having flash back about her parents, even if i would jsut be making it up at the top of my head cause you knwo no real show evidence or anything(unless the comics showed something)
But yeah, could have easly made an emotional one shot but I didn't, probably could have just left the first chapter as a one shot and the fic would be mostly unchanged.
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Honestly, I don't understand you people. You come to this story just to write hate comments because for hate's sake? I mean, maybe you are bored or something but still, try to waste your free time with something that isn't as pointless as going through FIMfiction, looking for stories to dislike just to make them look bad, that only makes you in the end look bad, proven by the amound of dislikes your two comments brought forth (me included).
On a side note, yes there are people who have a diaper fetish, there are people who have an adult foal fetish, these people exist. They are not sick in their head or something, they just have something they like. You are not required to like what they like but at least tolerate them for it, this is the internet. If you don't like that stuff, just leave this story and its readers alone. There is absolutely no just reason for you to put so much hate on them for something you don't have to be a part of.
Now, onto myself. I am here not because of any fetishes or something, as the author already explained in the description, this story is less focused on the diaper fetish. It actually interests me because I want to know a possible explanation as to how AJ actually deals with the loss of her parents at such a young age, aside from having Big Mac and Granny Smith at her side (which makes me also wonder how Big Mac is dealing with that).
Thank you and have a good day.
Great to see this story back! It is good that Applejack is starting to deal with what is bugging her. I saw no big errors and looking forward to the next chapter!
Good to see this updated, and it looks like Applejack is starting to understand what the treatment is supposed to do for her.
Glad to see Applejack opening up.
My only issue is that the story flow in this chapter is a bit rough.
7171711 yeah I probably could have done the dinner scene better but that why it took me so long to get the chapter done . Wasn't sure where I ment to take it only really had the ending in mind the whole time.
Good apple pie and gravy I'm glad some pony gets it
I mean I don't really think of it as a fitesh but some ponys good drif 5594117
7288626 I know
It is nice to see Applejack letting her issues melt away. She is slowly relaxing and I hope she will be ready when her time is up.
Maybe AJ has another kind of accident and they try to cheer her up? And so she see how good they are to her and then she finnaly understands what this treatment is all about, and finnaly be hapoy with herself?
Just a suggestion :p
Despite some typos and spelling errors, this was well worth the wait.
Glad this was continued!
This was a good ending. Great to see Applejack having addressed her issues and will know how to handle them in the future.
awesome story
It looks like everything worked out! Everypony is happy which means no more depression.
Great story overall!
It’s no problem Applejack If you must know, Pinkie did come for a session but it seemed it was more for trying it out then needed any kind of therapy. Hehe, she was such a fussy filly too,”
poor applejack, losin her parents like that :'(