(Originally published on Fanfiction.net, original fic inspired and requested by Supernova2015 on Fanfiction.net. The fic has been spruced up a little for here. Warning!: This fic will contains diapers and very mild AB/DL themes, and has been rated Teen as a precaution. If such material is outside your comfort zone DO NOT READ! Takes place prior to any events in Season 8.)
Pound and Pumpkin Cake truly love it when Pinkie foalsits them, after all she's like that wacky big sister they always wanted. But they are still toddlers and naturally as toddlers they are prone to mischief.
So one day when Pinkie is watching over them while their parents are away, the twins get the idea to make Pinkie one of them and that includes a diaper and a pacifier just right for their big sis.
But how will Pinkie react to such treatment? Have the twins gone too far this time?
Cute
That was really cute! Gave me a good feeling! 10/10
I'd really love it if you continued this story, as I really like the idea of Mr. and Mrs. Cake babying Pinkie Pie. After all, they love her like a daughter; why not treat her like one?
Okay... for those of you who gave this story a thumbs down... HOW DARE YOU!!!
That author has worked his butt off to get this story right.
So how dare you insult that story with your thumbs down.
Also... Great Story.
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I can see why it's got so many downvotes.
Remember these are ment as constructive criticism, not insults. But.... The narration is odd, being somewhere between 2nd, 3rd person. The transformation from pinkie not liking it to loving it is way too fast and unrealistic, the magic is way too over powered and unreasonable, and that just the little I read before I just gave up on it.
Not downvoting it, but due take these issues in mind for your next story please.
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Super has written quite a few fics already
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So? That's totally irrelevant to the points I raised
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Just something to bring up. But yeah, constructive critcism is better than dickish critcism
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Do you know I have my little pony cloth diapers? Sure it's totally irrelevant but it's something to bring up
9117464 I haven't continued this story yet. I do have a stand-alone sequel involving Spike though.
Really liked the story!
I’d love to see more!
9118206 There is a stand-alone sequel to this I've already published on Fanfiction.net. I might just upload it here next month.
9117692 I would hope at least most of the downvotes are due to that and not automatic downvotes due to the content.
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Like SuperPinkBrony12 mentioned, there is a stand-alone sequel to 'Pinkie Padded Pie'.
It's called 'Spike The Cute And Glorious'.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12675795/1/Spike-The-Cute-and-Glorious
Wow, this was suprisingly cute, well... in the end mostly.
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Most of them might be
So, there's a lot of things wrong with this. Grammatical errors, the story's narrative just doesn't flow at all.
Narrative structure: You jumped from 3rd to 2nd, to 3rd. Don't do that, it's annoying to read and doesn't make any kind of sense.
The baby talk is annoying and incredibly grating to read. Don't write that way. Please. There are better ways to convey that a child is speaking than replacing random letters with W's.
Also how would a foals diaper fit on Pinkie Pie an adult mare? Think about that, it doesn't really make a lot of sense does it? Also Pinkie transitioned from not enjoying diapers to enjoying diapers rather quick, without any kind of real reasoning.
Overall the story is a cute fluff piece but that's really it, it lacks substance in my opinion.
Maybe to have babytalk try to go for overly simplistic sentence like; "Pinkie BAD!" and maybe even some grammar errors like "Me not naught! Pound do it!"
cute
Great story wish there was a sequel