• Member Since 27th Apr, 2013
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Just the life and times of Applejack and Rarity.
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((Yeah, I write alot of Raijack fics so if you don't like Rarijack anything... don't read my Rarijack fics XD))

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 39 )

Oh, AppleJack. What have you done? :applejackconfused:

I don't think she will remember about this conversation with Rarity?

I wonder what might have happened to Applejack to make drinking 12 jugs of cider within an hour seem like a good idea. I'd imagine she'd have the strength to hold her alcohol, surely that is a bit beyond her limits! :applejackconfused:

I enjoyed the prologue for sure! There are a fair few errors but I can look past those. Tracking for later :twilightsmile:

Have a good day!

2494897 Why thank you for reading :twilightsmile:
I am still trying to find a good editor for this story, but I'll try to fix any errors that I see when I re-read it :derpytongue2:

A very nice start!:ajsmug:
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Hurray for a new RariJack fic:raritystarry:

Wow, you guys. Thanks for all of the positive feedback so far! It's a great motivator to continue to write! :heart: :ajsmug:

Whoo hoo! Black out drunk ponies and Rarijack. These are just a few of my favorite things.

This can't end well, I can't wait to see what happens next!:pinkiehappy:

A bit rushed, and a few mistakes here and there but I'm liking it so far.

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This can totally end well. I can't wait to see what happens next. :ajsmug:

Okay so far... PM me if you can't find a proofreader by Monday night. I might have time, but we'll talk then and stuff. :unsuresweetie:

This is a good story so far and you can never have enough Rarijack so if you'd like, maybe consider moi as an editor? :pinkiehappy:

Hm. Kinda abrupt in the reveal, yeah? Still... Promising. I'll track.

~Skeeter The Lurker

2502752 It was suppose to be abrupt, that was purposely done so... well you'll see in the next chapter :ajsmug:
Thanks for tracking :twilightsmile:

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I shall take your word on it.

Lets see whatcha got.

~Skeeter The Lurker

54 thumbs, 20 comments, 74 favorites.

1000 words.

...why can't I have ratios even close to that?

2507773 Dude, I don't even know why I have that many thumbs and favorites... :rainbowderp:

2509229 Lol, and that's why I got an editor :rainbowlaugh: It's suppose to be phase :derpytongue2: I'll make sure I fix that :twilightsmile:

Rarity woke up the next morning, exhausted from her lack of sleep. She didn't want to get up from her pink comforter, she didn't want to see Applejack after the events of the night before. No, Rarity just wanted to engulf herself into her blankets and never reappear. But, her stomach said otherwise, it was grumbling and growling and it gave Rarity the motivation to make breakfast.

The kitchen was a mess. Burned toast and bagels covered the counters, even the orange juice seemed to have some sort of black hue to it. Sweetie Belle, must have made breakfast. Or at least tried to make breakfast. Rarity rolled her eyes and sighed. Her attention was drawn to a strange glass of a black substance.

"Oh, yuck... Sweetie Belle?" Rarity called to her little sister as she poked the glass of what seemed to be "orange juice" with her hooficured hoof.

That's all I've got for Chapter 1 so far :raritydespair:, but don't worry! I'm still working on it whenever I get the chance (usually on weekends) :yay:

Hey, uh, I just got an email notification about "Chapter 1: Reflections".....and it's not here.

2567854 Oh, I'm sorry I accidently clicked the published button and I didn't unpublish it fast enough for it to not send the notifications. Sorry about that :fluttershyouch:

Yay finally! Kinda sucks I wasn't notified by my favorites, and since the comments are kinda bare I'm assuming no one else was either :ajbemused:.

I'm thinking it was probably because you accidentally uploaded this some time ago, but that's just my thoughts.

2587932 I made a blog entry, which I hope notifies my watchers correctly. Sorry again for the confusion! :applejackconfused:

Why is this in the latest updates? There is no new chapter...OH GOD THERE'S NO NEW CHAPTER!!!!

2664105 What it is? Again? UGGH! I hate my mouse pad so much. :ajbemused: anyways, I almost have chapter done only a few more paragraphs

2664122 You make me cry :applecry:! You love this, don't you? Torturing my soul with your vile torture devices of words and crafting of said words that makes my soul scream like a giddy school girl!


Btw I'm really excited for "Your Secret Admirer", looks awesome!




...and I hope the secret admirer is Diamond Tiara, I love me some diamondbloom.

2664157 Oh no! I don't want to torture you're soul. My laptop just sucks... :fluttershbad:

And I'm glad you're excited for it. It's not going to have any chapters though, so it's going to be really long. :derpytongue2:

It's basically the episode written out. Only the ending was changed, and not much happened. I'm sorry, it just seems really uncreative. I won't say lazy, because, well, you had to watch the episode, write out the details and the dialogue, but this is fanfiction. What's the point of writing fanfiction if you're just going to copy a majority of the episode?

2665016 Yeah I just realized this now. I don't know why I didn't before. I was originally going to have Rarity stay at Applejack's house, so I think I will go with that instead of this garbage. Note to self: Oh please for the love of god, make changes to chapter 1 and re-write all of chapter 2!

2666731 Have faith in yourself, and in ponies. I BERIEVE IN YOU!!!!

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