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Despite quite a few errors with quotations, missing words, and a few grammatical errors, I liked this.
Mmm lovely, I look forward to seeing more of this series
I'm actually surprised at all the dislikes, kinda odd seeing as how this seems pretty good .
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I'm fairly certain most of them are because of my atrocious grammar. Hopefully I can get most of the errors fixed soon.
I don't understand why there are any dislikes.
I didn't see anything wrong and I love this story so far!
I hope to see more in the near future.
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This really rather good. It seems to be a theme on your comments but the dislikes are ridiculously undeserved. Great start to the ship and everything is simmering along nicely with a good sense of pacing. (Most important aspect of ship fics IMO) Can't wait to see where you'll take this.
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Thanks, I'll be sure to edit it as well as possible before posting any more chapters.
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Dislikes most likely from horrible grammar. I'll be trying to clean it up as best I can.
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Now I'm worried about keeping the story going in the correct direction.
Cant wait for more! Super cute!
Can I have a new chapter yet..... :((
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Oh hehe sorry. I took a huge break from all things fanfiction for a number of months. Now I hopefully plan to get back into it and do some more writing. Mostly non-shipping stories, but I'll do my best to continue this one before I make that transition. Sorry for taking so long
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Haha its okay :P Its actually thanks to your story and a few others than I fell in love with Rarijack! Before I made an account here I read a few Rarijack stories (yours included) and I just absolutely adored them ever since!
2800874 I too await the next chapter.