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LightningSword


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Monkey see, monkey do.

Hehe, I chuckled a good bit. Here's a like. :pinkiesmile:

5577479 Spank you very much. :trollestia:

Ha! A 'mild' Spanking Reference? I think not. I loved this. Well done, darling!

5577945 Thanks! I appreciate it! :pinkiehappy:

So he's King of spanking, punishing his Princesses. Whoa. Lucky!

5578982 Thanks for that! :twilightsmile:

5579378 Imagine what might happen later on! :pinkiecrazy:

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But will it be later on? WILL YOU POST SECOND CHAPTER WITH MOONBUTT?

5579909 I might just do that. The more I think about it, the more ways I'm thinking I can make it work. :pinkiehappy:

Oh, and thanks for the favorite, too!

5579918

Whee! But I can imagine Royal Canterlot Scream and epic reveal with Celestia. And then he won't have to hide anymore. Disciplinary Officer for life!

OMG IMAGINE IF CADANCE DID SOMETHING DESERVING SPANKING
POSSIBILITIES

5579929 Well, if I ever do end up writing a chapter for Luna and it works out, I might consider giving all four princesses their just desserts . . . :trollestia:

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I'll eagerly await it. Twilight, I think, being disciplined, obedient student, will actually give pointers and be grateful for being properly disciplined. :twilightblush:

I would think that Luna has spanked Celestia before if she liked it so much.
After all if Celestia wants somepony to spank her then Luna would be the obvious choice. She's the only pony not scared of her or that has any official loyalty towards her. Not to mention that the two are very close.

5584517 Well, look at it like this: a fetish is not easy to reveal to anyone, especially a spanking fetish. Would you reveal it to your sibling, even if you were close? I know I wouldn't if I had one. :twilightoops:

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And it's easier to reveal it to some guard? Luna is closer to her than any other pony. If she would reveal a secret to anypony than it would be Luna.

I would reveal it to my siblings (I have a diaper fetish) but I haven't yet done it. Only my mom knows about it.

5584748 Well, they've also been apart for a thousand years. Might make things a little complicated . . . .

And, assuming Celestia is straight, I figured she'd be more comfortable letting a stallion do it. And considering she'd likely put lots of trust in her higher-ranked officers (and that Shining Armor is married), I figured the next best thing, the Deputy Captain, would be best.

Enter "Steel Saber". :twilightsheepish:

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In this sort of thing, gender doesn't really matter that much. Luna would at least react a little less awkwardly.
Though you are right in that there history might make things complicated. However I doubt that it will, I would think it would make Luna only even more willing to do it.

5584817 So you're thinking Luna might get a bit carried away with it after the whole "banished to the moon" thing? It's a good point--she might still be a bit bitter . . .

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exactly, she also isn't Celestia's servant. She'll have no problem if she get's used to the idea.
Luna also has a quite aggressive and very dominant personality.

5584879 I might try a scenario like that later on, but I'm not sure I could do justice to Luna's PoV. The awkward, unsure soldier to the crown, I'd be better at. :twilightsheepish:

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Luna and Celestia doing it also would be fun.\Not to mention they actually do tell each other very intimidate things.

Given that this is mostly a story designed to titillate readers, I don't feel I can in good conscience let it into the goodfic bin. Doesn't mean it's bad, just means it's not what we're looking for.

5860321 Thanks anyway . . . :ajsleepy:

You know, to be entirely fair to Steel Saber, when you're invited to your Highness's chambers and you're told you're in charge of disciplining her, you would NOT instantly or, depending on the cleanliness of your mind, eventually consider spanking one of those things you can just DO to the person that could have you beheaded in seconds on a whim. Or in Equestria's case, banished and locked up in the place you've been banished to.

5905118 Very true. But no one said I had to be fair to Steel Saber, did they? :trollestia:

LoL, but seriously, thanks for reading.

5936073 Interesting. I guess who the slave is in this case is open to interpretation. :trollestia:

Thanks for reading, and thanks for the favorite, too. :twilightsmile:

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You're welcome :twilightsmile:

It was great. Great ending. I feel sympathetic for Luna. I so wish it for her. She deserves it. I would like to see some hoofing to be added to the spanking.

6066124 As much as I'd like to branch out to other fetishes (that's where the readership lies, after all), I plan on keeping it as PG as possible. However, that doesn't mean there will only be spanking in the sequel. :raritywink:

Thanks for reading, and thanks for the favorite. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by TjSnake deleted Jun 8th, 2015

6066450 I hate to take your illusions. But you have left PG behind long time ago. Maybe you just don't know it jet. :-) I enjoyed the reading and am looking forward for a sequel.

I definitely am glad you recommended this to me, this was a good read after a day of work, and wanting to relax.
I was caught off guard by how intense the action got, but despite such, it never got to true clop levels. I'll be watching over you for your softcore clop....cause the way you do such is an art form in itself.

6132669 I'm genuinely flattered by your words. Thank you so very much. I'm glad I was able to direct you to something you found worthy of a favorite, and I'll do my best to live up to your follow. :pinkiehappy:

quite the surprise at the end there :pinkiehappy:

6148082 And that's just the set-up to something much hotter in the future. :raritywink:

6148524 a rather odd Ménage à trois?

6149592 Nah, it's better when it's one-on-one. :raritywink: You'll see . . . :ajsmug:

6149624 not sure I can handle molestia and lusty luna at the same time

I love this fic..... I love Molestia and Luna....

You're cool, too... have a follow, fave, like, and all that shit.... I'm about to go fap a few more times. :trollestia:

6310443 Thanks so much for that. :twilightsmile: Happy fapping! :trollestia:

I'm starting to like Guardlestia shipping.

I loved this! Amazing spanking of Princess Sunbutt earning her name! hahaha! ^_^

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It's also conceivable he was raised without spanking (or that's died out in Equestria) so that didn't register as a potential punishment.

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