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Discord seems to have brought himself to an awkward and life changing position by giving Celestia flowers.

Written by Toaster

A reading done by RobRoyale can be found here.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 38 )
Fret #1 · Apr 7th, 2015 · · ·

Discord's so smooth, he almost got laid without even realizing.

5834406 Hahaha Well, that's Discord for you :twilightsmile:

that was peeeerfect haha
really cool point of view ;3
would like to read a sequel ^^
ah and you should read through it again yourself
there are a lot of typis

Lyi #4 · Apr 7th, 2015 · · ·

Not to be an evil critic, but you have a lot of spelling errors. Some of your sentences could also have been worded differently, in a smoother fashion. And, honestly, I didn't really enjoy how you portrayed Discord. I felt that he should have been more funny and sarcastic, always up with an excuse for everything.
Sorry if I am being mean...

This makes me so happy.


Okay, I just saw the errors and I have to agree. So yeah...that's the last time I'm going to use an ipad to type a story.

Cute. :twilightsmile:

...that's all I can really say.

"Go out with me or be a statue again" A great basis for a loving relationship.
But it's not different from what they did to him in the show, I'll give you that.

Harmony is nice but I never liked that they get there by threat of imprisonment. If we don't accept that sort of thing from our world's leaders, why does everyone let Celestia do it and still love her? Wings and wavey mane or not, a dictator is a dictator.

Haha, finally someone had to mention the elephant in the room :D
Tv show would probably go the same way if not the fact that even Celestia seen this as a form of apology.

I burst out laughing just by reading the premise, and the execution was just as good. Though I wouldn't think Celestia would be all threatening if he said no, but this clearly isn't going for accuracy and is all for the comedy. Which I don't mind for once. Stupidly funny, decent job.

Wow. Discord really is between a rock and a hard place here. Hah. ^0^


Pfft, that ending.

HAHA THE ENDING DOE! :rainbowlaugh: I love this! Great job! :D

Discord should be like, "I'm flattered, but I have a marefriend...Fluttershy!"

*teleports Fluttershy there*

Fluttershy: Wait, what's going on?!

Hello Everypony, Shaded of Writers Nonanonymous here to announce another story will be out by the end of the week.

Stay tuned, faithful readers!!!

Shaded Skies.

PS: I hope you like romance.

5834406 So smooth that he slipped and crash into that fun place called "Between a rock and a hard place."!

Ha. This was amusing. Though the two felt a bit out of character. Still, we need more people to point out the obvious that it was nothing more than an apology.

Because we all apologize by handing someone flowers and winking.

Well, Discord seems to be between a rock and a hard place.

More like it's Celestia that wants to be "between a rock and a hard place.":raritywink:

I apologize for nothing:trollestia:

Apology flowers... for their horrible break up in the summer of '79--BC. :trollestia:

I ship it, and I regret nothing!

"Now, before you answer, remember that I can teleport Twilight and her friends, along with the Elements, right over here in a blink of an eye."

Hah! Good luck with that! The elements got sucked back into a magical tree, which then spurted a magic box that grew into Twilight's new Tree Fortress. :raritywink:

Just a minor error left over from your previous corrections

Discord gulped, as he staggled to think off an answer.

Should be "struggled" & "of"

Other that that, TOTALLY AWESOME! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: out of 5!

Not bad. I was hoping for Trollestia (ie, she was messing with him) at the end, but overall not bad.

I never took you to be the romantic type and it actually surprised me when when uou gave me those flowers.


Discord gulped, as he staggled to think off an answer.


5895888 Thanks for pointing them out. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by That Pony Writer deleted Jun 5th, 2015

I was kinda expecting Celestia to fall down depressed and clearly humilliated by the misunderstanding, in such a way that Discord would take pity of her and invite her directly to the date...but I suppose that would be too sappy for this tale.

At any rate, funny little story the one you did here. Now I wonder if Celestia and Luna made a bet to take a date (any date) to that Prance Restaurant. :trollestia:

:rainbowlaugh: Oh Discord... I feel a tad sorry for you...! Hahahaha!

I loved reading this. I hope you don't mind but I did a reading of it for youtube. I know my voices aren't the best but I hope I did it some form of justice! :twilightsmile:

6350613 OMG, thank you! :pinkiehappy: You have no idea how happy this makes me. :heart:

6364000 Your welcome ^^ I'm glad you like it, keep on writing!

Oh crap. Good luck, Discord!

This really good and funny way to look at the Dislestia ship. Becuase No matter what his answer is, it still going to be hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:

I am... not sure whether to like or dislike this story. Ergo, I shall do neither.

Great read. I enjoyed myself reading this.
As a big Dislestia shipper, I think this is a hilarious setup to them going out on dates and him eventually falling in love with her in return.

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