When Midnight Sky went on guard duty that night, he didn't expect that he was going to be pestered by an alicorn who was deep in heat.
(Sex tag for all the suggestive themes that you would see.)
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That ending!
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My brain is still trying to understand what this is.
I love it.
6053694 Thanks
RUN! FOR THE LOVE OF CADENCE RUN FER THE COLD CHILLY CAVERNS COLLECTING CRYSTALLINE COOL CAREENING CAULDRONS OF WATER!
Meanwhile, I will be safely over here, laughing.
You know I feel bad for the guard, I mean, nopony wants to try and outrun an Alicorn Princess.
Although, even if he does get caught.....
6053976 Then that pony would have mixed emotions of that event.
Oh, now that's just mean.
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I would really wat to like this story, but there are so many errors and mistakes, it took away all the fun.
Like confusing faith and fate 2 times, or distinguishing thoght-lines from narration by writing it italic
Ther are some misspellings as well. That´s a real shame, because the idea was good. It had a good ending too.
6054825 Well, I'm glad that you somewhat liked it. Sorry for the errors though, I better get someone to fix that... But thanks for reading.
because ponies totally turn into mindless sex machines when they're in heat
Midnight escaped from Luna but got jumped into the fire with Celestia. Nice ending.
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Word of the day. Sentence.
Whatever, you get it. Just like my upvote, Ha!
6055599 No, but it IS funnier that way.
OHHHHH MYYYYYYY....
... The very first few words and a sexual innuendo.
...
I'm gonna like this. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
6054825 tru dat
6058631 Looking at my own comment now I see a few misspellings. I am really out of my groove.
I think we needs sequel of him running away and both princesses chasing him down.
Snippet from his wanted poster:
Wanted:
Midnight Sky
Abandoned her majesties whilst they were in heat.
Reward: 50,000 bits.
6061510 Hahaha, that would be perfect. I could just imagine them hiring bounty hunters to capture him.
I liked it.
Well. He's screwed, in more ways than one.
Run, Forrest, run!
If ya sprint for it, Celestia can teleport. If your a Unicorn and teleport, Celestia can teleport. Any way... the chances of you not getting caught are a slim 1% chance
"If you wanted somepony to help you, then you should have called Discord, that’s why we reformed him in the first place!"
"Luna just doesn’t understand that the guards are my privilege."
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There is no words to describe how I feel right now.... Buck it! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!! ITS @!%@ing MOLESTIA!!!!!!!!
This is hilarious!