"I'm not addicted to reading, just let me finish reading this chapter."
After baking a fresh batch of cookies with Tia, Luna is told that she can't eat one until she finishes dinner. But when Luna wants a cookie, how far will she go to get a cookie?
Luna is a filly in this story and this is told from her point of view.
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You never cease to impress.
5/5 mustaches!
I do believe DAWWWWWWWWWWWWW is the appropriate responce
5201600 Thank you for the mustaches!
5201608 I try to make every Luna and Tia story a Dawwwwwwww story.
D'awwww.
Soooo cute!
Great story
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5201661 Thank you!
Now I wonder what the parents do when seeing the sign...
5201743 Probably ask Tia or else a little blue princess demand them to ask!
This was good.
Great even.
Remind me why we need particle accelerators to bake cookies?
5202091 Thank you for your postive feedback!
wonderful! And just what I need right now (grandparents started fighting.. I don't like yelling...)
Anyway... I do love these stories. Adds some insight as well to the fact Celestia probably raised her sister herself. And maybe why she is compelled to do the same for many other ponies. But I'm over analyzing this. TO THE FAVOURITES IT GOES!
5203037 Im glad you enjoy my stories!
Wuna best Pwincess
5203266 Woona best Pwincess forever
wuna best pwincess indeed
Filly wuna is best filly! Love this fic!
You know what?
LUNA IS BEST PONY
ugh
did you have to
did you seriously have to write that
why
i believe we are past the kindergarten level although all comments here make me rethink that
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Exactly why I write these stories. Luna best filly princess!
Cutest. FILLY. EVER
5204856 Luna best and cutest filly princess ever!
Pwincess Wuna Kawaii~~!!!
If you are continuing Luna and Tia, what will the next story be about?
5204935 I have no idea.
The was cute!
5205555 Thank you for saying that!
5205566 Quite welcome! On a Side note why Am I suddenly imagining Woona with a Portal gun trying to get cookies?
5205574 I have NO idea...
Filly Luna is so adorable.
5205703 Exactly why I wrote this. Filly Luna best princess
I don't quite get how the blanket made the jar lighter, does the weight only Plymouth to the object being affected by magic?
Also, if you want to fix your cooking scene, I believe that cookies bake for longer than seven minutes, I haven't baked them in months though, I've been making cakes and macaroons and their timing is completely different.
Nitpicking aside, I need to say d'aaaaaaawww. My heart can't take anymore adawrableness. Next up, Wuna bakes a cake for Tia? In "secret".
Hey, as long as we're nitpicking
Wouldn't be as bad if they didn't directly follow one another.
Otherwise, enjoyable cute story.
Once I got sent out of a class at school for ruining a game because I said, "I stole the cookie from the cookie jar."
True story.
Anyways, D'awwwww
WhyWho stole the cookie from the cookies jar?Edit: Dam typo auto correct things.
5207824 I can't really cook either, but I think most people I talk to say seven minutes. Also the blanket might have made things easier to Luna because she may have had more places to hold on to the blanket so she could put a light amount of force in each area. I think I saw that in a book once?
5207936 Thank you for your positive words! I will try to see what I could do with those two sentences to make it smoother, but nice catch there.
5208884 That enjoyable? Thank you! And why steal the cookies from the cookie jar? Because they are that good with a side of filly Luna.
LOL! So funny! No one can resist the allure of the Cookies!!
5209543 Cookies are the best!
...... Teh cuteness.... It has stopped my heart.... So adorable....
Hurk! *Dies*
5209588 When I wrote this, my classmates were looking at me since the cuteness was making me make weird faces...... I guess the cuteness is too much!
Now this is a Woona and cookie story I would definitely want to read again.
5209793 I haven't stopped smiling at a story I have been writing for 3 days!
Two things. One, this was adorable. Two without an age spell hijinx, some other pony taking up royal duties while they getings fixed, other contrivances. This fic wouldn't be plausable in the FIMVerse timeline since Tia and Luna wouldn't have 90% of the tech shown when they were little ponies.
So even though not plausable [would be different for more moderized siblings] was a cute bit of fluff.
Ahhhhhhh my heart too cute
After reading this story 8 times, the cuteness has become too much for me.
"Urk" *Dies from cuteness overload*
You should really try to get in touch with an animator to do this fic or a scene at least.
5299442 YES! That'd be adorable!
5209552 TEH STORY IS SO CUTE *Dies in a supernova blast*
Cookies!
Glad Luna learned a little lesson at the end, too. 
If you give a Luna a cookie....
So cute. Your stories are some of the cutest that I have read on this entire site. And I just spent nine whole days with the flu, doing nothing but reading slice-of-life pony fanfics all day. (Yes, I have even less of a life than usual when I'm sick.)
This story was really cute. I really liked that Luna actually got a cookie after all of that hard work. Towards the end when she drew a cookie, I thought she was going to end up eating the coloring book.