It's Hearth's Warming Eve and Scootaloo is soooo excited to be at her first holiday party with some of her closest friends. Everything started out great... But as she looks around, she starts to notice everypony there has somepony to spend time with... and she can't help but feel alone like she has for the past Hearth's Warming Eves.
When Rainbow Dash arrives, Twilight tells her that she had noticed Scootaloo all alone in the corner, and asks her to talk to her. When Rainbow asks her what's wrong, Scootaloo tells her that she's all alone with no one to spend time with at the party.
Rainbow Dash tells her otherwise.
BASED ON THE SONG "No One Is Alone" FROM THE MUSICIAL "Into the Woods" (from the newly released Disney Motion Picture Soundtrack)
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You know, if you put "not" in parenthesis, this would be a Neon Genesis Evangelion crossover.
YANA, I haven't ready your story, sorry, but YANA
Jesus, you just delete everything that doesn't praise you? I left some real advice there to HELP you... I'm not even kidding.
I haven't read the story, but these deleted comments are a bad sign...
5395657 Your just making things worse yourself by deleting those comments like that.
I would beat a dead horse and mention how you have doomed yourself by deleting comments, but other folks have too. It's really just disappointing, though. The cover and description gave me high hopes, but I don't abide those who frivolously delete comments.
Sly (of a remark, glance, or facial expression): showing in an insinuating way that one has some secret knowledge that may be harmful or embarrassing.
There are a thousand other little things, but that stood out the most. It's nothing a good proofreader couldn't fix, though; you just need someone to look over your work. A second pair of eyes will do wonders.
I mean it; all you need is proofreader. Looking at the writing guide provided on the site will also help. Seriously; it's a wonderful story, but it needs to be proofread.
Like had already been said, this needs to get edited. I'll be happy to help. Just drop me a note.
I always love Scootalove stories, wether they're sisters, mother and daughter, or just friends, if these two are together, I'll give it a read. And chances are I'll love it. This is no different.
Nice and happy for Christmas love it
def know how Scootaloo felt. I spent a lot of time in the hospital after I was burned in an explosion when I was 10. Was between 2 hospitals for two years before I went home.
Darn it, I thought you were talking about the song of the same name by Michael Jackson!
Face of Boe, anyone?
So nothing indicates Rainbow Dash had a brother or anything.
Well that was sweet