Cadence and Fluttershy are two Pegasus sisters living in the small village of Canterlot. These two mares are the most kind and loved ponies in the whole village.
When their father, Soarin', tells them of the legend of the "Sleeping Princess" they set off on an adventure to save the far off kingdom of the Everfree Forest and help break the sleeping curse that Princess Twilight set upon herself...
Not to mention, find out what happened to her brother, Shining Armor and return him to the Royal Family.
Based on the Hello Kitty Special of the same name.
Cover art made by ChaosQueen
Edited by: BluegrassBrooke and myself
i can actually get down with this idea~
i needed a mellow, calm story to soothe my violent mind a bit
bravo my good mare, bravo
The bubbliness is over nine thousand and the cuteness factor of Cadence and Flutters being sisters made my heart explode twice~
5458372 happy you like it so far
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5458886 I haven't thought about who their mother might be yet.
I made Soarin' their father because he was the ONLY male Pegasus I could think of.....
5458918 Yeah, Soarin's the one that popped into my mind immediately.
Oh, I like this. It's something I haven't really seen before. (Although it does remind me a bit of Monochromatic's Enchanted Library. The trapped princess part does, at least, and the fairytale.)
You should work a bit on the execution, though. I'd recommend an edito and/or prereader if you can, because I saw quite a few errors and it doesn't really flow at some points. You have a strong start, though, so keep it up!
5459038 Oh, there were??? I'm going to have to go back and check, then.
5459044 Okay. But I'd still recommend a pre-reader or editor, because it's always good to have a fresh set of eyes.
5459060 would you like to be the pre-reader????
I only asked since you suggested I get one
5459067 I'll be really busy once school starts on Monday, so I wouldn't realistically be able to do anything during that time, except for some weekends. Sorry. There are groups and the like dedicated to that sort of thing, though, so you can always check there.
5459071 Alright, I'll go and look
5459082 Oki-dokes.
Cool story can not wait for more
5461937 thanks. I just don't undestand whyy so many people are just giving it a thumbs down based on the first chapter
Great chapter!!! Just a quick question, what are the Shippings in this story?
Hope more soon love this
5470218 Fluttercord and idk what shining armor and Cadence are called...
Really Loving This, Cant Wait For The Next Chapter
5471086 happy you like it so far
5470728 happy you like it so far
you put this story in the folders twilight and fluttershy in the For the love of discord group
so will there be both shippings? just one? or none of them ?
5472471 just Fluttershy. I didn't mean to put it in the Twilight one
Really great story so far! I'll be watching for an update!
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
BTW I loved it! but the story telling, they sounded (Cadence and Fs) a bit like little fillies, is it supposed be like that?
5484665 No, no they're mares. It's just that it's been years since their father has told them a story and they just get really excited.
Next chapter should be posted some time during the weekend
Oh ok thanks, just one more question, I get the Sombra and Celestia thing but, isn´t Luna better with him?
Thanks for ze uptade about ze update.
5484700 the Sombra that is in the story is the Alternate Universe King Sombra from the comics.... Which caused me to ship him and Celestia together
Ok thanks
I kinda hope Fluttershy gets taken by Discord! Sorry Flutters!
This story is really good so far! You are keeping everyone in character well. I do think you made Cadance and Fluttershy a little naive. Do they really believe that Soarin will be okay with them going after some 'legend'!
Keep up the good work! Update soon!
5493703 well, I'm gonna try to have Soarin' throughout the story, not just in the first couple chapters
5493741 Ok.
Um... Well I don't really see Soarin as a vital part of the story. I hate to say it but you could kill him off for all I care. I know I'm evil! Really, all I care about is the Fluttercord! My OTP!
Like I said before, update soon!
5493771 oh geez! I'm not gonna kill Soarin off
Love this story hope more soon. No Fluttercord do Twishy it is better
5495406 no Fluttercord YET
5495260 No! That's not what I meant! All that I was saying was don't feel pressured to use him all the time! People would start to want to kill him off if he took away from our Fluttercord time! He's just not that important!
5496694 Well he's not going to be in EVERY SINGLE chapter
5496698 Okay!
Found chapter three last night and finished it the same night…hope you UPDATE again! I LOVE this story, can't wait for the adventure to start. hope to see Fluttercord chapters.
5496930 stay tuned
5496947 You bet I will. Also I heard you are looking for artwork for this? I'm thinking about it, but I don't know for sure if I'm able to. I have a question. Dose "Discord's Pond" look the same as the one you got the idea from in "hello kitty The Sleeping Princess"?
5501165 yes, discord's pond looks like that
5501295 I know you said what you wanted for the artwork. But I was thinking…what if Discord's also holding Twilight's crown in his claw as he is towering over Shining Armor? The one with the element of magic.
5502897 that's fine. I don't mind
5503034 I have been working on this picture for a while. Just needed more info about it before I put it up. Hope it's what you asked for. my cousin deleted my old picture.
5504768 what's that on Cadence's flank??? I can't tell what it is
5504781 it is her cutie mark… her wing is covering it. Sorry. Other than that though is it good?
5504815 it's awesome. I just wished that on the bottom part they would be wearing their capes and Fluttershy would look nervous about going on that adventure but it's fine! I love it anyway
5504831 I was thinking about doing that… it's just hard to draw them with capes. Also thank you for the other idea about fluttershy maybe I will work on another picture. See if I can do it better. Another thing is Shining Armor the right age?
5504859 Mmm... Yeah, looks about right. He's supposed to be about 5 when he's taken by discord