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I am a 20 year old brony from FL. I write stories featuring Fluttershy (BEST PONY!!!), and a few about my favorite ships, 90% being Flimjack. I also have an MLP audio series on my YouTube channel.

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Sonata Dusk meets Shining Armor at Sugar Cube Corner, and is confused as to why he isn't wearing any armor.

She decides to ask why.

Cover art made by Wadusher0


Now with Dramatic Reading by DarkShadow051

French Translation by Vinz.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 39 )

I can only imagine the conversation with Cheese Sandwich

Amsheening:pinkiegasp:

Usi
Usi #5 · Jan 7th, 2015 · · 2 ·

It's not good, yet not bad. The set up is nice, although a bit contrived. As far as characters go, they're pretty forgettable in this story, save for Sonata and even she barely passes. And even though Sonata isn't the smartest person out there, being from another world and being oh, I don't know, a siren, I'm having a hard time believing that she is this stupid. This is something that Patrick Star would fall for (at least before he became a jerkass prick).

5474695 I don't know what to say to that, but I love it! :rainbowlaugh:

5474695 WHY ARE YOU NOT MAKING THIS A STORY?!

Yeah, I doubt Sonata would take everything literally. She's just Pinkie-type whimsical. The story description made it sound like there would be more build-up to her asking Armour about his name. There pretty much wasn't any.

But it's a good reason I'll be changing almost everyone's names when I get to Equestria Girls. If I include Armour, would you prefer 'Sean' or 'Shawn?'

He put took her hand and rested it in his.:rainbowhuh:
besides that: lovely story:yay:

Very cute, I love the way you captured Sonata's personality! :twilightsmile:
~Estrella Scrolls

Could have done with some more buildup to Sonata asking about Shining's name, but otherwise I loved this.

Sonata really is adorable here; you wrote her very well!

5475918 don't intend it to be....

5475522 That reminds me of when the Tick asked Arthur "do you HAVE pants?"

Anyone else have an opinion on Shawn vs Sean for EQG!Shining Armour's name? I have also decide to give them more standard hair colours, to match their more human skin tones... except for those who would dye their hair, like Rochelle (EQG!Rarity) and Diane (EQG!Pinkie). This means that Twilight will be one of those who stands out the most, appearance-wise.

Little did Shining know... :trixieshiftright:

This was cute :rainbowlaugh:

5477391 Thanks. I decided to give writing Sonata a try. She's my favorite Dazzling with Adagio coming in a close second. Sonata's fun to write

5477398 Indeed she is! She's too cute :pinkiehappy: You did a good job! Favorited! :twilightsmile:

I think it would've been funny if it ended with Sonata becoming disillusioned because he didn't come to her rescue when she was short on cash.

5474641

:trollestia: I command thee to write it



5475522

:trollestia: you too

Loved this. Of course, I love Sonata, and I enjoy the idea that Shining has a quirky sense of humor.

Is it wrong that I'm imagining a sequel where Cadance shows up?

5477824 Hopefully said sequel has Sonata call Cadance Shining's princess :pinkiehappy:

Sonata, you haven't heard of chocolate tacos and spaghetti tacos.

5476497 When I think of Shining Armor as a human, I think of Andrew or Francis. Oh wait... :twilightoops:

Lend her the money Mrs. Cake

You did not just slip in a 1.50$ joke.

This was one entertaining story! I can see Sonata doing something like this, but at the same time, I can't see her doing this! I don't know.
Anyway, I wanted to also let you know that enjoyed this story so much that I read it on my youtube channel which can be found here!!
Keep up the amazing work and stay awesome, mate!! :raritywink:

His body turned in one full swing, facing Sonata. “Yes, Sonata, I am secretly a knight here to protect this small town from harm’s way.”

:pinkiegasp: I've been discovered! lol

Have a like and a favorite my friend for a great story.

And suddenly, I imagine the following:

Sonata: Nah-ah! He's a Yoshi!
Shining: I am not a Yoshi.
Sonata: But you said you were.
Shining: It's called sarcasm.
Sonata: What does that taste like?
Shining: Darn it, Sonata!

Ha ha! Ha... That was a fun little reading.

This is the first EG story I read, and I have to say, that was Amazing! So hilarious and I loved how you showed us Sonata's stupidity! :rainbowlaugh:

Mrs. Cake smiled at the teenage girl, “Well, lucky for you, we just added ‘Red, White and Blue Tacos’ to our menu! It’s a soft and doughy taco shell filled with strawberries, blueberries, and whipped cream.”

AMERICA FUCK YEAH!

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